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All over the world many people think they should be free to select their occupation. Some of the other people think they should be accept the situation more about their outlook. I totally agree with this. In this essay I will discuss both views and I give in my opinion.
The plans show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.
To describe a a writter, he is a monk and a leader of 7 million Tibetan’s inside and outside of Tibet. He is non other than His Holliness the Dalai Lama. I am familiar with his writings on Buddhist psychology , where it reminds about the compassion, how it helps one's own mind to keep calam and non reactive towards harmful actions or faulty language spoken to oneself. It was stated in one his writting that the compassionate mind helped him to survive his spirit. The eagerness came from that statement in one of his books that I want to meet him in personel to ask him how does that helped him to stay spirited. It was in his biography that he did have had tough time in late 1950s where he lost his country’s Independence and had to flee his own country.
The huge gap between CEO and regular employees’ income is often discussed in society. While some people insist it is not fair, others , however, claim it is essential. I totally agree that higher payments for CEOs and executives are necessary because of the responsibility and strict competence requirements they have in comparison with other workers.
Certain individuals think that it is much better not to fight with bad circumstances such as poverty or unattractive jobs. Opponents, however, believe that it is important to pursue better living conditions. In my opinion, I consider, persistence in creating a satisfactory style of life is much more profitable in terms of happiness and success.
In this era, watching tv and playing computer are the most activity that young people spend more time, but it could not support in increasing children's mental abilities. I am totally agree with this statement. There are more negative impacts because children could not focus to study on school and these activities could make children lacks on friendships.
IN THE DEVELPING WORLD, THE MEDICAL FIELDS STAFFS AND PROFFESSORS ARE PLAYING A CRUCIAL ROLE IN THE DEVELOMENT OF THE COMMUNITY. HOWEVER, THEY ARE ALWAYS PAID LOWER SALARY AND THEREFORE IT IS ARGUED THAT THEY SHOUD GET MORE FINANCIAL BENEFITS THAN THE PEPOPLE WORK IN THE ENTERTAINMENT FIELD. I COMPLETELY AGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT AS THEY ARE BEING A SAFEGAURD TO THE WHOLE SOCIETY.
With the implementation of feedback received from professors and determination, I was able to make consistent progress through the remaining phase of the academic journey. My grades, which had hovered around 70% during the COVID-19 pandemic, soared to an impressive 90% in my final semester. This experience taught me the power of resilience and the importance of perseverance under proper guidance. It also instilled in me a deep-rooted belief in my ability to overcome obstacles and achieve my goals.
I believe that, many health problems are caused not by eating meat. Our health and problems with it are related with environment and climate. Many disorders are caused by poluted environment and natural disorders.
Life of people in this world is getting pressurized day by day and stress also increased in the lives of people. There might be numerous possible reasons to this problem and the essay will explore some plausible solution of it.
I think that music impact us profoundly,it can release our press,develop our interest. We can follow it and find the beauty of the world.So,it plays an important roles in our lifes.
thank you for your letter. I’m always glad to get letters from you. Now what about your questions.
The concepts of this were divided into two sides. Some people think that individual classwork will help more to their children, but on the other hand other people think with accurately, on the contrary.
The line graph compares the amount to electricity production in France using four different surces period of 1980 and 2010.
Some people believe it school children should do  their classwork individually this effect is much better and many children are engaged in additional training working with the group develop skills learning and communication of other skills.
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