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Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant example.

In the era of a fast-paced world,everyone is running for success,fame,money.,Consequently leading to the exhaustion of Personal well being and health.However,Working hard is not a concern,In ,fact working smartly is quite in demand.In my ,opinion keeping life balanced with work and leisure is equally important,But compromising over a lifestyle is not appreciatable.I would rather discuss in favour of taking time out for Personal activities.
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In some countries, children are often told that can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

It is common to teach children that keeping practicing is the only way to achieve success while it may has some drawbacks. In this essay I will consider both sides of the argument.
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Some people think that media have the right to publish details of people's private lives, while others think it should be controlled. Discuss both views.

Media plays an important role in an individual's life,due to the fact that it can either destroy,influence or make you. I would say that they do not have the right to publish people's private lives.
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the contribution of various economic sectors to Xcontry GDP in three different year, starting from 2016.

The given table illustrates the contribution of various economic sectors to Xcontry GDP in three different years, starting from 2016.
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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people,however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

When it comes to an important thing in a country besides the economy there is also a good education. I think schools should not give too many exercises to students and while teaching should let students participate in other games related activities. Because doing so will help students find the lesson more interesting and easier to undertand.
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At a present time , the population of some countries includes a relatively large amount of young adults ,compare with the number of older people .do The advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, the issue of growing youth population in compare with older people has grown in many countries .While there are some drawbacks associated with growth in young population , i belive the main benefits are more substantial .
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the average carbon dioxide emission per person in four various countries between 1967 and 2007.

The given line graph illustrates the average carbon dioxide emission per person in four various countries between 1967 and 2007. Overall CO2 output per individual in the UK and Sweden began the nighest but witnessed a decline toward the end of the period. Conversely, Italy and Portugal started with relatively low emissions but saw considerable increases by the end of the timeframe.
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Some people believe prefer that to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?

The table illustrates the proportion of students with various problems in learning skills in two primary schools between 2005 and 2015.
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the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada between 2009 and 2019.

The given pie charts illustrate the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada between 2009 and 2019.
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the primary reasons that people came to and left the UK in 2007.

The pie charts illustrate the primary reasons that people came to and left the UK in 2007. At first, glance it is clear that the main factor influencing this decision was employment.
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Some of today’s schools insist that all students have their own laptop computer in class to assist in their education. Do you feel that this would be an advantage to students’ education, or would it be an unnecessary complication?

Nowadays, technology becomes more improvement than before, so the need of using the laptop or computer in school is more useful for the student. The schools must change the ways and tools of teaching methods. They should use a laptop to be more effective and do not lose time when the tutor writes on board and then the student repeat on paper.
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University should accept the equal number of male and female student in each subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement

The graph illustrates the information of price in global food and oil over 11 years period from 2000 to 2011.
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the the number of three various fast food consumed by. Australian teenagers between 1975 and 2000.

The given line graph illustrates the number of three various fast food consumed by. Australian teenagers between 1975 and 2000. Overall. There was an increase in the consumption of hamburgers and pizza,while that of fish and chips went down.
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People should only concentrate on a single skill for life because it is the best way to succeed To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The graph demonstrates how much investment was made by the UK in clean energy between the years 2008 and 2015. Unless a small decline in the amount of investment happened in 2010, the trend was increasing steadily.
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the proportion of total music sales by three various method, starting in 2011 and ending in 2018.

The given line graph illustrates the proportion of total music sales by three various methods, starting in 2011 and ending in 2018.
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Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some hobbies are relatively easy.But these two types of hobbies can be fun.I therefore disagree the statement that the hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable.
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Many people believe that it is a good idea to have a dress code at workplaces. ‎Do you agree or disagree with your statement? Give your opinion and ‎examples from your own experience.

Dressing up has always been a way of showing commitment towards an institution or a workplace. Dressing up for workplace has it's own pros and cons which will be discussed in details in the following paragraphs. Uniforming up for workplace increases marketability of an organisation, so I totally agree with the statement given.
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Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment. What can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem.

Plastic waste has become increasingly pervasive in our ecosystems, There are dangers coming from multiple fronts; issues such as climate change, habitat destruction and biodiversity loss. Our environment, in fact, the health of the planet we call home is in danger. this however can be changed by a simple human choice: the choice to reduce plastic pollution.
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Fossil fuel, such as coal, oil and natural gas, is extensively used in many countries which cause harm to the environment. The use of alternative sources of energy, including wind and solar power, however, is being encouraged in many countries. Is this a positive or negative development?

In contemprory era, environmental protection has becomes a main concern. Increasing the demand of Fossil fuel in many nations is proved to be deterimental effect on environment. Some think that nations should use alternative sources like wind, solar power instead of fossil fuel. This essay will highlight the postive development of this approach.
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With the development of tourism, more and more cheap and discount fights are made available to holidaymakers. Some environmental groups claim that governments should tax air traffic more because its growth has a tremendous impact on the environment.

As a member of, Gen-Z I grew up in a fully developed world. I enjoy the convenience that applies modern society has. I don't agree with the authority should tax higher on air traffic. I am going to discuss three main solutions.
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