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Some people think that lawbreakers should be sent to prison. However, others think that better talents among those should be made to work. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many people believe criminals should be sentenced to prison while others think it is better for offenders to do unpaid works. In my opinion, I totally agree with the latter approach.
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The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think that this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?

The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world as communication plays an important role in our daily to express our thinking and interact with people. English trends to be the only language to be spoken globally. There are some advantages and disadvantages to having one langugage in the world.
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The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels should be the most important global priority today.

However, over usage of natural fossil fuels not only have negative effects on the environment, but also reduced reserves to the verge of extinction.
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DISCIPLINE IS AN INCREASING PROBLEM IN MODREN SCHOOL. SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT DISCIPLINE SHOULD BE THE RESPONSIBILITY OF TEACHERS,WHILE OTHER THINK THAT IS THE RPOLE OF PARENTS.

DISCIPLINE IS NECESSARY IN EVERY FIELD OF LIFE. SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT,ITS A MAJOR RESPONSIBILITY OF TEACHERS TO ENFORCING A HIGH ATTIQUETES AND BEHAVIUOR IN CHILDREN WHILE ITHER HOLD PARENTS.IN MY OPINION ,BOTH TREACHER AND PARENTS EVALUATE THE ETHICS IN CHILDREN.
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Students perform higher at school when are rewarded rather than punished .To what extent do you agree .

School plays a vital role in student's life .All the students do not perform at a same level.Pupils perform well at school when they get rewards from their teachers instead of punishment.They work hard to achieve good marks and to get position in the class. I totally agree with the given statement and will discuss my view-points with proper example.
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Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world why is this? what are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy?

Solar energy is an emerging technology as a resoucers for household energy in most of the nations in all over the world.
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In many countries, people like to eat a wide variety of food that can be grown in other areas. As a result, people eat more food produced in other regions than local food. Do the disadvantages of this trend outweigh its advantages?

Food Production is bringing an alluring twist in this jet set world. In many countries people prefer consuming food which is grown outside their country. Some people laud its convinience and relatively low cost. In this essay I would like to argue that this approach has many cons than the pros.
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Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this age, online shopping is popular among the people. It has a lot of benefits but some drawbacks are aslo have.
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Some people believe that children should spend all their free time with their families. Others believe that this is unnecessary or even negative. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, it can be argued that children to spend their all their free time with their family or with other activities. In my opinion, it would be better for children to expend their all free time individually or with their friends.
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In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

There is no doubt that people need space for building new homes. While some people believe that it is important to protect countryside, it cannot be ignored that the only space available for building homes is in the countryside. I totally agree that the countryside should not be utilised for building homes.
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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops In town and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree

To begin with, it should be acknowledged that as we proceed towards absolute globalization online business will boom immensely. These include advertisement as well as shopping. And, I believe that one day eventually they would overtake the conventional shops that exist today in towns and cities. Nevertheless, this essay will further explore reasons as to why online shopping will soon dominate the traditional ways.
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There is an increasing trend around the world to have a small family rather than a large family. What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a small family rather than a large family.

In Eighteenth century, rich men were judged by the size of their family. But recently, the size of family has little or no effect on financial status of one. Both type of families has its own merit and demerit.
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Some people say that tourism has many negative effects on the countries that people travel to. How true is this statement? What can tourists do to reduce the harmful effects of tourism on local cultures and environments

After having a busy schedule, people tend to get way from it all in the summer by going on holiday. Therefore, the number of tourists often grows fluctuate which has vacation. Government and inhabitant to understand the impact of big size passenger in different nations.
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Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both viewpoints and then give your opinion.

The development of mankind has a detrimental effect on the flora and fauna of the planet. Therefore, this development leads to such procedures which are not reversible. But, some people criticize this whole scenario by saying that proper ways are required to stop this impact. I personally believe that the plants and the animals are as important as the humans, so some kind of action is required in order to save these creatures. This essay will discuss the same by using the examples of the Oxford University research and the Times Magazine survey to demonstrate the points and support the claims.
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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Some people believe that music can promote a strong social cohesion achieving higher degree of social integration, which in my opinion can be true to some extent. From my personal standpoint, music, like other types of art, has its cultural properties making it difficult to be understood by people of different cultures and ages. However it shares some common interest between different groups of people.
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Education for young people is important in many countries. However, others think government should spend more money for education in adult population who cannot read and write. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Education in a general is the first priority of the most governments in the nations. the mintry of education in many countries continuosly develop programes to improve and enhance the level of education. one of these programs is a literacy of all adults. In this essay, I agree that the governments should allocate all the resourese required to erase the illilteracy of young people.
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Formal examinations are the only effective way to assess a student's performance. Continual assessment such as course work and projects is not a satisfactory way to do this. Do you agree or disagree?

Everything has two sides and the globalization is not the exception. Our first thoughts about this topic include the process of global “McDonaldisation” and, generally speaking, spreading the one, American, lifestyle across the whole Globe.
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Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The most effective method to resolve environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel used by automotives. This essay disagee with view point as there are many other factors like industrilazation and deforestation are the important factor for harming nature.
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some people find that following a strict routine allows them to feel more in control. Others however think that constant changes to the routine make life more interesting and less predictable discuss both these views and give your own opinion

An increasing number of people believe that following a carefully made schedual might help them to have a control over their life. Whereas their opponents state that making spontaneous decisions have much more benefits in general. From my point of view, it is vital to have some set of rules but there must be a time for sudden occasions,too.
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Success is often measured in terms of how much money somebody has earned. Do you think wealth is a goo measure of success? How else could we measure whether somebody is successful or not

non financial, I think the not having money is a good way of caterized as success ful individual. On other hand, someone can itemize success as doing good deeds to others.
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