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The first man to walk on the moon claimed it was a step forward for mankind. However, it has made little difference in most people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The journey to the moon in 20th century is accepted as one of the greatest and significant events throughout the whole history. Even though some assert that their lives didn’t change even a little bit after “the moon walk”, as far as I’m concerned, people should evaluate “this step” as a symbol opening the mysterious door of the outer space to the mankind so that means it’s a of paramount importance occasion and it has altered our lives forever.
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The number of people suffering from health problems caused by a modern lifestyle which cannot be treated with modern medicines. Some people believe that alternative medicine can help. Do you agree that alternative medicines are effective?

In recent times, the need to seek alternative medications is an issue all over the world. Nowadays, it is believed by some that modern lifestyle could cause serious helth problems, which could be coured with alternative medicines, such as yoga could help release stress, different type of diets to cure alergies, and homeopathy medicines, as to cure different health issues.
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Nowadays, people have greater access to fast food. do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages

In this generation, fast food is more accessible to humans. It is readily available everywhere, at anytime of the day. This is considered as an unhealthy food to consumed but due to the convenience it is being patronize by people. Readily available meal is for busy people.
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Doctors recommend that older people should exercise regularly. However, some people do not exercise enough. What are the causes? What can be done to encourage them to exercise?

Health experts like doctors recommending senior citizens to do a regular exercise. But, some of them is not following their recommendation. In this essay, it will be tackled what are the possible causes why oldies are not doing their daily exercise and it will be given solutions to the corresponding causes.
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Nowadays more and more older people who need employment have to compete with younger people for the same jobs. What problems does this cause? What are the solutions?

In these recent years unemployment is one of the most common issues the world is facing now. Youngsters and elderly people with regards to job hunting are having problems in terms of their skills, length of practise or experience, educational attainment and capabilities.
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Production of carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gases has a heating effect on the atmosphere and results in global warming. Why global warming is considered one of the most serious issues nowadays? How can this problem be solved?

The following diagram shows the process of bricks production and explain the steps.We can see that brick is made using only one material, and that the manufacturing process consists of six steps. It requires seven steps until  the last step, delivery.
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There is an increasing number of anti-social behaviours in recent years; people generally believe that society is to blame. What do you think the causes are and who is responsible for this?

Nature of behaving disorderly by human beings has been increasing immensely .whereas,some people blame the society for the lawless behaviour of individuals. In this writting , i will put forward some causes as well as practical soulutions to this issue.
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Many people believe that social networking sites are not good.

It is often argued that social networking sites, for instance Facebook, have had a detrimental effect on individual people as well as to society and local communities. However, while I believe that social networking sites are mainly beneficial to individual people, I agree that they have had a detrimental effect on local communities.
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Some people think that space exploration is waste of resources, while others think that it is essential for mankind to continue to explore the universe in which we live. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are many arguments that exploring space demands huge funds and time, therefore it should be used to mitigate the woes of people.
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More and more people are buying fashionable clothes these days. Does it have more negative or positive effects? Give reasons.

Fashion plays a major role in contemparary world. There is an increasing trend in people spending more money on clothing. The notion further proved when analyzed the incremental growth of the world's fashion industry over the last decade. In my opinion, the said trend has both good and adverse implications.
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The uses of social media, such as Facebook, Twitter, are replacing face-to-face contact in this century. Do you think the advantages of this way outweigh the disadvantages?

Facebook,Twitter which are some instances of social media have made people habituated to virtual contact rather than physical contact.I do not believe social networking has more benefits rather than its drawbacks.
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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A glance at the given graphs illustrate the information regarding prices, promotional discounts, and advertising budget by the 7 various tablet stores.
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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Life is all about up and downs, in which some people think it is better to accept a bad situation whilst others believe that people should try to improve situations. Both points of views is explicated in succeeding paragraphs along with my own opinion.
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An increasing number of children have become hooked on fast food and aerated drinks that do not provide much nutrition. This poor diet has led to a rise in obesity among children. What are the problems that are associated with obesity in children and what steps could be taken to prevent it?

Nowadays youngsters are more addicted towards junk foods & carbonated drinks. Which has led to number of overweight. This essay will deal with the main factor of excessive body fat & some feasible solution.
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Computer games are very popular for all ages and nationalities. Parents think this has little educational value and it will be harmful for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, children are obsessed with computer games, which has become a serious concern for parents. They think that it has no value in education. At the same time, it has many negative effects. I am a strong advocate of this argument and shed some light on this topic.
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Many businesses think that the new employees who graduate from schools lack basic interpersonal skills, such as working with colleagues as a team. What has caused this and what are solutions to the problems?

Nowadays many people have lack of interpersonal qualities such as team spirit and communication skills. This is due to our education system and selection criteria for a job. This essay will elaborate its causes and discuss some solutions to solve this problem.
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Q3. Some people argue that technological inventions, such as mobile phones, are making people socially less interactive. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is a contentious debate that whether advancement in technology is leading to poor socialization or not among people. I firmly believe the usage of cell phones are causing people to waste of their time and isolated life which are the key drawbacks of this creativity.
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More and more people are eating healthy food and exercising regularly. What are the reasons for that ? and what can we do to make other people do the same?

The given graph describes the rate of jobless people around Australia for every 3 months of 2012 in percentage in both cities and countryside. Clearly, there are more unemployed people in a rural area than that in urban. However, the rate of unemployment in the countryside reduces by the end of 2012.
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Technology is becoming progressively universal. In the fullness of time, classroom teachers will be totally substituted for technology. Do you agree or disagree?

Technology is part of every aspect of our lives. From the smart phone that wake us up to the expeditions to Mars, it is everywere. The education environment wouldn´t be different. Some people even think that classroom teachers would be completly obsolete some day. In my opinon, there will be a great decrease in number of classroom teachers, but not complete substitution. I believe that there are two main reasons for that.
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Some people say that schools should reward students who show the best academic results. While others believe that it is more important to reward students who show improvements. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

It has been conflict between people, whose is more deserving students, that should be rewarded. Some individuals opine that students get on the top list should be reward. While others believe that students which shows improvement needs reward. This assignment intends to delve both perspectives and in my opinion both did effort to get better results. However, I believe that the student which does great improvement should be appreciated.
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