IELTS Writing Samples Band 3.5. Page 269

IELTS Writing Samples Band 3.5

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this a positive or negative situation?

In many of the nations, there is a concept of investing in a house rather than renting one. While some try to take house on lease, I personally feel that buying one is a better as well as a long term plan. Furthermore, we will discuss this in the essay.

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the number of trips made by children in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of transport.

The chart represents the total sum of trips made by children between ages 5-12, in a comparative stretch of over 20 years. The graph compares the methods used by children going to learning institutions in 1990 versus in 2010.

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The shows the amount spent on digital games in the USA and China from 2010 to 2017 and the pie shows global spending on these games in 2017?

This graph indicates Japanese going to Australia from 1985 to 1995.

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Some people say that Government should break down all the historic building and replace them with modern buildings. Do you agree or disagree?

Historic buildings are symbols of every nations history. I keep totally an opposite plan toward any idea advocating destroying these buildings.

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Some feel that school uniforms make schools safer for students, create a "level playing field" that reduces socioeconomic disparities and encourage children to focus on their studies rather than their clothes. Others say school uniforms infringe upon students' right to express their individuality, have no positive effect on behavior and academic achievement. Discuss both sides & give your opinion

Following a specific Dress code for schools is a key to negate social pressure among students and provide a sense of equality, however, motivate children to work harder for their studies rather than upsetting for daily outfits. Opponents claim, that, wearing a same uniform have no benefit, whereas, could impact on expressive and learning abilities of a child. I personally support this idea of equality among students. This essay will discuss both aspects.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, people will more approach free e-books and online data than paper-based books and newspapers. Personally, I think that people tend to obtain online information such as online news, eBooks all of their smart devices in the modern technology world.

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some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In this modern er, Music has been given high weight by the general public. Many people think it assists to buildbetter communication with one region to another region. I completely agree that music can get people closer. this essay will discuss why music is crucial for our life.

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CONSUMERISM AND SOCIAL COMPETITION IN INDONESIAN SOCIETY

Rick Deckard in the book represents the idea of consumerism. The evidences of Rick Deckard and Consumerism can be seen in several chapters of the Philip K. Dick’s book. In the chapter one of Philip's work, it is written that Rick Deckard in the morning thinks to afford a real sheep to replace the fake one that they have (Dick, 1968, p. 3). In the same chapter of the book, it is also shown that Deckard is being envied to his neighbour’s real animal, and he wants to buy the real animal as same as the one belongs to Bill Barbour.

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Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

Every company has general criteria or requirements for recruiting employees of their company. There are criteria that allow employees to work independently and innovative and also, there are criteria that allow employees to working in a team and can follow the instruction. From these two criteria, there are two different views where the criteria depend on the company's capacity and goals.

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A larger number of deaths are caused by road accidents. Why do so many road accidents occur? Make recommendations that would help reduce the number of road accidents.

Road accident is mammath problem in the world which caused a number of deaths. This is happened because of bad road maintenance and government has chalk out plan to mitigate this problem by giving punishment to the public. Now, I will explain my ideas in the upcoming paragraphs.

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In number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Other believes that money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give you opinion.

In many countries,few individuals support the idea that handsome amount of money should be used to build latest rail line tracks for fastest trains among major cities while others do not. In my opinion,power should repair or update the existing transportation system rather than making new. This essay will discuss both views in subsequent paragraphs before coming to a logical conclusion.

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Some people prefer to be self employed, whereas others like working for companies. Which is a better approach?

Numerous persons prefer to work in a company where s some like to open their own business and be self employed. In this essay we will discuss which is more significant.

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Some people like to spend their leisure time after work with co-workers while others prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Some would argue that it is best to spend spare time after work with colleagues, while others say it is better to have their own life. While many people want to have a private life of their own, I believe that it is advantageous to communicate with the friends from work place.

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Many companies and organisations require their employees to wear uniform.what kind of jobs require uniforms what are the disadvantages of wearing uniforms at work

In this contemporary era,wearing similar attire in different firm and business has become trendy.So Distinct institutes have made mandatory rules for their employees to come in their professional field by wearing same garb. I will discuss the disadvantages about this phenomenon in upcoming segments with relevant examples and draw logical conclusion at the end of this essay

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Some people believe that technology has made man more social. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is undeniable that sophisticated modern technology has advanced and improved social lives in enormous ways. Critic defends the idea that due to the technological advancement humans have become more social. I strongly advocate with aforesaid notion. This essay will discuss technology's involvement in human socialization before coming to a logical conclusion.

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In many countries, the age of criminals is getting lower. Give reasons and solutions to this problem

In recent times, the rate of crime has been on a rise globally. In many parts of the world, it seems that the number of crimes committed by juveniles has been increasing unexpectedly. This essay will discuss the reasons why this is happening and put forwards several solutions for this issue.

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Some people hold the view that a good teacher is more important for education success while others think the student’s attitude is more important to succeed in education. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

To begin, it is a widespread believe in many cultures that attitude is a key to success. Even though the likings of student differ, they can still get a good score in any class with a healthy mindset. For example, the disciples who are optimistic towards a class have a higher chance to score good as compared to the others who are pessimistic, they are more likely to overcome academic difficulties as they believe that their efforts will pay off. Thus this habit has a great influence on building up their knowledge.

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Annual average spending on clothes per person in the US in 1985, 1995 and 2005.

The given chart shows the amount of money spent on clothes per person in the US over 3 years

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Violent sports should be banned from TV and international competitions. To what extent do you agree?

Violent sports has long been under fire for its unsightly nature. While some people petition to completely ban them from sporting events, I am of the opposite, for several reasons stated in the following essay.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relative large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, the population of the some countries includes a considerable difference in the number of young people and old people. This situation provide enormous advantages in the economy of the countries.

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