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In many countries in the world people buy clothes and choose hair styles according to latest fashion. Why is this happening ? Is this a positive or a negative development?

It has become a global trend to dress and style hair in line with fashions in vogue, in my view this has added more advantages than disadvantages.
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Is fast food to blaim for obesity in society or is gaining too much weight is the responsibility of the individuals? What are the factors contribute the obesity? Why do you think that children are becoming obese.

To begin with, majority of the people are suffering from the unwanted fat. This is due to the fact that,many of them do less exercise and phyisical activities which are the extremely important sources to remove obesity. Moreover sandatory lifestyle is also the biggest reason of overweight because people have to do sitting job where they have to stick on the one seat. For instance, people who are working in inforces companies they have to stick to their places for the whole day.
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More and more businesses as well individuals are choosing to communicate either professionally or socially using technology rather than being face to face.Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using technology for communicating.

It is an undeniable truth that globe is unimaginable without technology.Infact technology is omnipresent.Although, online communication is a good source of time saving however,it is difficult to built a strong relationship since internet is only a virtual life.I would elucidate merits and demerits of online conservation in upcoming paragraphs.
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In many countries in the world people buy clothes and choose hair styles according to latest fashion. Why is this happening ? Is this a positive or a negative development?

In today’s world, individuals cloth themselves and style their hair following the trend in vogue. This will enable one gain recognition in any circle one encounters.
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Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education? Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves?

Nowadays, Poverty is the major issue in most of the countries. Some other are known to be developed one. So, the citizens of the former required support either from own nationality or else from the developed. Let discuss, in detail each of the options.
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Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?

The governments should be the ones that control scientific research to a major extent but private companies should get involved in it too. In this essay, why scientific research should be conducted by both the government and the private companies will be discussed.
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The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent times, the number of obese and overweight people in the country has been on the increase. This trend has become a challenge to the country's health system, so therefore I totally agree with those who opined that the most helpful way to deal with this menace is to inculcate more physical education lessons in the school curriculum.
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Some people say there are more disadvantages of a car than advantages. Do you agree or disagree?

It is generally believed that whatever has advantages also has disadvantages. It is a debated issue whether the pros outweigh the cons. I am of the opinion that advantages of car outstrip the disadvantages.
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Some teachers say students should be organised into groups to study others argues that students should study alone. Tell the benefits of each study method and which one do you think is most effective.

Some Educationists say that students should be organised into groups to study. While the others hold that independent study is better. This essay seeks to discuss the benefits of each study method and the most effective one.
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Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.

Educational instistution's play an important role in each and everyones life.They provide the information, which is foundation for the future. Its an welcome move if they are going to make it. Lets discuss in detail regarding the same.
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Some individuals view music as a great means of uniting people of diverse cultural backgrounds and ages together. This essay completely agrees with this opinion because it not only improve human relationships but also play therapeutic roles

A good reason why I agree that melodies can bring people of different backgrounds together is that it makes people to relate with each other better. As an example, people who share a common interest are more likely to listen to similar genre of music when they meet with one another. Also, it helps to cement relationships and foster better bonds when they are played at occasions. For instance, a popular musical carnival in my village brings together people of different age grades and cult...
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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

Nowadays, Waste is increasing day by day because of lot many reasons. Following are important, that we need to take into consideration seriously.
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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

Lots of scientists believe that our manner of was built from the birthday to six. Therefore, it should be learnt to investigate of right and wrong in early age and admiring or punishment play a significant role. In this essay the extent and sort of punishment will be discussed.
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It is becoming more and more difficult to escape the influence of the media on our lives. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in a media rich society.

Owing to the big effect that the media have in our live and how hard it is become to avoid the influence that it is have in our daily life.I will discuss the positives and the negatives of living in a society that depend on this media.
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Some people say that the main environmental problem in our time is loss of particular species of plants and animals. Other say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Many people say that the major problem in our environment, nowadays, is lacking of many species of plants and animals , while others think that there more important problem than this loss.
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A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercise and avoids stress. What should people do to stay healthy in your country?

A healthy person is known to be with proper diet, regular excercise and avoid stress.As there is saying "Health is wealth", I agree the point to some extent, not only following the above procedure to be fit but also need to be happy and with positive thinking. Let's discuss in detail about it below.
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In recent years,the number of crimes committed by young people in major cities throughout the world is increasing. Discuss this issue.Give reasons and suggest some solutions.

Big cities with its burgeoning population of youths are faced with increasing crime rate of recent and its believed to be committed mostly by young people.This eassy will discuss this issue further and suggest some solutions to this problem.
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Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, children spends most of their time on electronic gadgets especially computers. It's not welcome sign for the future of the next generation. Apart from advantages, what it posses, it has it's own disadvantages.
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people sleep less than before in many countries. why do people sleep less ? what effect does it have on an individually and on sociaty ?

Although the exact mechanism is not know, sleep is vital for all human beings. Increasing data from numerous publications have shown repeatedly the effects of sleep deprivation. And still, in may coutries, peole today sleep less in comparisson to previous years.
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some people think that government is wasting money on arts and that this money can be spent elsewhere.To what extent do you agree with this view?

Some people believe that the government can spend money somewhere else instead of wasting it on arts. In my opinion, I believe that a minor portion of the budget should be allocated for enhancing and maintaining art. This, in turn, promotes tourism and also makes the surroundings look beautiful.
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