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Stress related illnesses are becoming increasingly common What do you think are causes of it? What solutions can you suggest ?

Sicknesses are bieng suffered by people as a redult of stress .This essay will discuss the main causes of stress related sicknesses including longer working hours and increased job pressure.Some solutions will also be suggested in this essay including improving one's work life and diet.
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Many people believe cities should not try to preserve its old, historic buildings and instead ,they should destroy them and replace them with modern buildings. To what extent do you agree?

A historic buildings in the cities are quintessential role in the development of an identity of the town. Having said that, some section of the people believe that destroying an old heritage sites will pave the way for a new modern facilities. I will be discussing about this topic in a detail and giving my view on this.
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The development of tourism has contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What would be the advantages and disadvantages of having only one language in the world?Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

It is understandable that some people believe English will become the only spoken language in the world. Without doubt, the development of tourism has played an important role in spreading this beautiful language. Also, the dramatic rise of information technology may have contributed.
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Some people become famous when they are at a young age. Do you think this is positive or negative?

Nowadays, many young people become popular owing to many reasons. But the publicity in this youth age may be positive or negative effects on the person himself.
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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged.Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults.

A lot of people may have different perspectives on what method of fostering  whether competition or co-operation is beneficial to children. It is also one of the most talked-about issues among educators and experts.
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Too much emphasis is placed on testing this days, the need to prepare for test and examination is a restriction on teachers and also exerts unnecessary pressure on young learners. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Knowledge seeking is a decision of choice that demands much time and energy which only takes a strong determination to pursue. Getting ready to write yes and examination in a more excellent way requires lots of stress physically and psychologically for young learners.
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Many people believe that learning a foreign language is avery difficult task. what are the most difficult things about learning a foreign language? What are the best ways to overcome them?explain an include your personal experience or knowledge of these problems.

It is thought by most people that learning a nonindigenous language is very stressfull. This is justifiable given that this new language is unfamiliar from then the person learnt and got used to overvtime.
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Some people feel that the design of newly constructed buildings in big cities should be controlled by government. others believe those who financed the construction of a building should be free to design it as they fit. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The beauty and pleasant scenery in big cities is because of the development of new buildings. However, there is need to monitor and regulate the building of this infrastructure, for safety of life and property. meanwhile some are of the opinion that the government should oversee the construction of the new buildings while others think the individuals who financed the construction should design it according to their taste. I personally feel that the government should be in charge of the new ...
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Should private schools receive government funding? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

In virtually, there are two different types of schooling where children go for education. One is public (government) school and other one is private school. Both schools are funded by government. In this essay, I will elaborate about the reason why government should not provide funds to private schools.
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The Restoration of old buildings in major cities around the world costs governments billions of dollars while this money should have been used for new housing and road development.To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement?

t is an undeniable truth that with increasing economic growth of country,government extracts the revenue to spend on deteriorated buildings and spend a mere amount on new projects.lnstead of completely renovating these institutions the authorities should plan for some new infrastructure,taking view that building place has no symbolic importance and is builded for public need.I am firmly agree with this statement and elucidate my view in following paragraphs.
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Question--Some people say that TV Advertisement have benefits, while others believe the opposite. Discuss both views , give your own opinion and include examples from your experience

Most of the individuals believe that TV advertisements have benefits
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The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this. To what extent do you agree?

It is important to consider how individuals suffer from chronic diseases due to an insufficient health education; also, some governments tend to avoid the issue. While some people contend that it is the responsibility of government, and they should allocate prudent expenditures on medicines and treatments, I deem that it is beneficial to stop the health-related issue before it occurs, primarily through health educations. In this essay, I will support my arguments with examples.
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It is believed by some that people should take a yearly driving test in order to ensure safety on the roads, while others do not agree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is considered by many that evaluation of one's driving skills should be done by taking driving test yearly. which in result will ensure safety on roads. However, others think that it is not required. In my opinion, Driving test evaluation is not required as it is already done when a person got the license.
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Many people believe that university students should study a full range of subjects, instead of some specific subjects.

Majority takes the side of studying wide range of subjects while others think that studying specific subjects is more valuable. According to me, learning particular subject is more beneficial than that of many subjects because at the university level. The difficulty of subjects increases that its hard to study them altogether . Along with, choosing specific subjects will help in making bright career.
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Popular events like the Football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tension and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way.

Every four years, the whole world stops to watch international sporting events such as the Olympics and the Football World Cup in which athletes show their best performance to make their country proud. These sporting occasions have proved to be helpful in easing international tension in difficult times when powerful leaders were trying to control the world’s economy and other governments were fighting over the land.
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Topic: Tourism is always a force for good which enables people of different countries to understand each other .Do you agree or disgreee ?You should give reasons fro your answer and include ideas and examples from your own knowledge and experience .

Tourism is generally considered to be favourable in promoting mutual understanding among natives of distinct countries. I am in favour of the argument that tourisms cordial relations among peoples of different countries by overcoming different barriers .My inclination is justified in ensuing paragraphs.
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New technology have changed the way children spend their free time. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Although, adolescent are spending their leisure time around the technology; they are less engaged in physical activities. Owing to this children are becoming more tech savvy but lesser healthy . I would elucidate the pros and cons of new technology in the following paragraph.
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In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main reasons of it? How can we deal with the possible causes?

We have seen a colossal rise in the density of crimes and in recent years, it has become a moot issue. This essay will discuss the main factors that are responsible for inducing offences and will also put forward some solutions for this perennial problem.
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Many people expect that the proportion of old people will be more than the young people in the future. Do you think it is positive or negative development?

It is anticipated that in the future, the rate of retired people will be more than the young people. while many people think it will have positive effects, i claim that this development will have negative influences on the society.
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Some people say that failure is proof that the desire wasn't strong enough. To what extent do you agree with this statement.

Needless to say, success and failure is a part of people's life. Some people believe that, this is because they do not have aspirations up to the mark. I totally disagree with the notion. The parameters which are really responsible for that, is, lack of interest and wrong selection of goals.
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