IELTS Writing Samples Band 3. Page 195

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Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people. What the possible causes of this trend, and what solutions would be effective reducing crime. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The crime rate in youth is on the rise in various nations. The factors causing the crime are complex; however, it can be worked out. In this essay, we will discuss two main causes and the number of solutions also appears to be possible. Perhaps the main cause is issues associated with family, which plays a big role in the development of the youth. For instance, children, who are raised by grandparents or other caregivers, whom have a challenge to pay attention and supervise these youngsters, end up in an unfavorable environment. The lack of attention or improper surroundings can lead to various types of psychological issues such as depression, anxiety and excessive aggression in teenagers, which is a second factor of juvenile delinquency. However, there are practical solutions to prevent these conflicts. Primarily, the secondary schools to offer a wide variety of program like schoolchildren in the voluntary activities in elderly nursing homes. If such activities were more...

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It is sometimes said that people should be encouraged to get married before they are 30, as this is best both for the individual and for society. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience

Marriage is a key social construct that has always been encouraged universally so that an individual can have a well-balanced life. Although, there are some debates as to when the right age is.

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Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while other believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion .

The environment is a world issue and to try to solve a macro problem is much better to broke in small pieces. In my opion, each country is able to give huge steps to make our nation and consequently our planet a place less polluted to live.

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Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. Do you agree or disagree?

Certain people says that the government should allocate funds for entertainment rather than spending on public transports . I partially agree with the above statement i will hereby explain my point of view

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Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays television is playing a vital role in our today's world.The Public is making their concentration towards entertainment rather than interacting with family.it leads to the population becoming dumb and Moreover , ensuring safety measures with the crowd. I strongly agree apply that people get affected by television. This essay will give the strong points why I agree with this and provide a logical conclusion. First of all, entertainment plays a major role in everyone's life while few are not interested because of their mind psychology. I strongly believe that movies and web series can make the crowd to apply be happy and it makes us a day very shorter when we are in the bore. For instance , in recent two years most of the population are work from homes and few people have lost their jobs and in that times if they want to enhance their hours decrease entertainment become the biggest part in everyone's life. Secondly ,the community has also b...

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The Internet has changed the way we interact with each other now compared to in the past. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Nowadays television is playing a vital role in our today's world.The Public is making their concentration towards entertainment rather than interacting with family.it leads to the population becoming dumb and Moreover , ensuring safety measures with the crowd. I strongly agree apply that people get affected by television. This essay will give the strong points why I agree with this and provide a logical conclusion. First of all, entertainment plays a major role in everyone's life while few are not interested because of their mind psychology. I strongly believe that movies and web series can make the crowd to apply be happy and it makes us a day very shorter when we are in the bore. For instance , in recent two years most of the population are work from homes and few people have lost their jobs and in that times if they want to enhance their hours decrease entertainment become the biggest part in everyone's life. Secondly ,the community has also b...

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Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays television is playing a vital role in our today's world.The Public is making their concentration towards entertainment rather than interacting with family.it leads to the population becoming dumb and Moreover , ensuring safety measures with the crowd. I strongly agree apply that people get affected by television. This essay will give the strong points why I agree with this and provide a logical conclusion. First of all, entertainment plays a major role in everyone's life while few are not interested because of their mind psychology. I strongly believe that movies and web series can make the crowd to apply be happy and it makes us a day very shorter when we are in the bore. For instance , in recent two years most of the population are work from homes and few people have lost their jobs and in that times if they want to enhance their hours decrease entertainment become the biggest part in everyone's life. Secondly ,the community has also b...

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Nowadays children are consuming too many suger based drinks . What are the reasons and solutions of the problem

These days youngsters desiers to drink or eat unhealthy products or packet foods which can be harmful to there health, there are numerous of causes and solutions of these problem.

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Modern building change the character and appearance of towns and cities.The government should insist that new buildings be built in traditional styles to protect cultural identity.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Certainly, change is the law of nature. However, in this burgeoning domain, due to the manufacturing of sky-scrappers, all cities are looking more spectacular and amazing. It is the responsibility of higher authorities to conserve the cultural identity of the nation by insisting on architecture to make the new buildings in conventional styles. I would firmly agree with the notion which I will discuss in upcoming paragraphs.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.

The pie chart below illustrates the percentage of British students who were able to speak second languages in 2000 and 2010

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It is argued that purchasing goods is easy because of the advanced technology present today. Because of modern technology and the Internet, various sectors have seen a boom in customers. Following are some of the examples that show how technology has made our life better.

Firstly, Companies like the Amazon have made a change in the era, where people can buy anything from paper clips to wooden doors through the app installed on their mobile phone.

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Many people put their personal information online (address, telephone number,...) for everyday activities such as socializing on social networks or banking purposes. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, it is becoming increasingly common that more people are likely to put their personal information on social media or even support for their banking purposes. This trend has caused some controversial opinions, whether it is good to put your private details public. In my opinion, I believe it may give both positive and negative effects for some reasons.

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Today foods travel thousands of miles from the farm to the consumers. Why is this? Is it a positive or negative trend?

Nowadays, we are seeing a new trend in the logistic, food can be produced in one part of the country while being used national. While this holds many advantages which I totally support, it also brings some side effects with it.

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Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?

Being happy is always considered the most important thing in life. In my opinion, happiness can't be described but it feels, it sees on someone's face or their behaviour. Happiness can always be achieved by ourselves only because noone can make a person happy until the person wants to be happy.

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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.

The bar graph below compares households owning and households renting accommodation, in percent, in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.

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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

historical subjects have been mentioned as the most indispensable lessons of the schools by some individuals,whereas the objectors,including me, believe that the scientifical and similarly the technological objects worth surpass.although both sides are considered here.

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Some one things ,nowadays newspapers reading habbit slowly reduce by using online materials ,after one decade it may be

Someone things ,nowadays newspapers reading habits slowly reduce by using online materials ,after one decade it may be stopped by people.I disagree with this statement some people enjoy printed materials rather than online .Below I will discuss both views and give my opinion.

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whereas the standard age for commencing school is about 7

He likes human.whereas the standard age for commencing school is about 7,some individuals are of the notion that children should launch their educational plans sooner than the conventional trend.although both sides are explained here,in my point of view,the age of 7 is the best,which triumphed the other approaches that used to be examined.

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Some people say that it is necessary to use animals for testing the medicines intended for human beings, others however think it is cruel and unnecessary. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Scientists when they manufacture a new medicine they will test the medicine on animals vut some people believe it is a veey ruthless act.

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Some people think that criminal behaviour has genetic causes. Others believe that it is circumstances that lead people to commit a crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many people believe that criminal behaviour is in blood and others think that situations make people commit crime. Both views will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.