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In many countries around the world, shopping has turned into a form of entertainment rather than a way of getting what people need. Discuss the reason for this trend. Is it a positive or negative development?

Shopping is the favorite past time of many people, especially teenagers. Some consider shopping as a mode of entertainment instead of providing basic amenities to people. This trend is due to globalisation and consumerism and in my opinion, definitely a positive development.
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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give you own opinion.

The Principal problem for had a bad Job, that means that you don't like to stay there so you don't have the disposition to do your job, or to stay good with your boss, so you will be stressed all the days of your life because you are doing Some thing that you don't like, so if You don't stay in your comfort zone you try and improve Such situations you will have two options, one that you can explore new job oferts and know new people, and If you are a dedicated person you will find your dream job and if you are lucky they pay a good money for do your things and the other option, we have to be realistits, the other option is that you will fail on the things that you do, so thats a hard dicition that you have to choose in your lives because It is a thing that you will do all the days on your live, so you have to choose all the correct option, and you have to be a dedicated person, and you have tostudy the platform that you want, so you will be happy.
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In some countries married couples plan to have a baby at a later age due to the demands of their professional career. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of it and give your opinion

There are lots of married couples in the world. Some couples think that having a baby at later age but others think that having a baby at early age.This situation has both advantages and disadvantages.The main advantage of having a baby at early age is growing up with a baby while its main disadvantage is not be able to spend too much time with children.
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Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Education now become more costly than ever, so thats so many youth do part time jobs with their studies. Students do not give enough time for their studies and juveniles do not score well in their exam. The main cause of there poor background and for tackle this problem the govenments make
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Some people think that secondary school children should study international news as one of the school subjects. Other people think that international news as one of the school subjects. What do you think? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

With the abroad trending, few people feel that high school children have to study global news as one of the acadamic subjects.On the other hand few people think world news to be one among the school subject.In my stand point, providing secondary school children would be more helpful as it would expose them to outside world eventually buidling up more confidence in them.
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The use of violence in music lyrics, video games and films seen by children is causing concern in many societies. What problems may be caused by this type of violent imagery, and what steps could be taken to lessen the impact on young people?

A high level of crime content is remarkably increasing in the modern world; then it leads to physical and mental problems for the vulnerable children; however, it could solve with the help of government and parenting. The first issue would be physical, since watching TV takes time away from active exercises and more likely to eat high-fat foods. For example, the study revealed that the average Canadian child watches nearly 14 hours of television each week. Therefore, increasing the number of hours of television viewing associated with an increased relative risk of higher cholesterol levels in children. As a result, it will cause obesity, arteriosclerosis, and diabetes. The second main problem will be mental. This is because youth are good at copying what they see; hence their immature and vulnerable brain tends to capture the abuse while playing abused content. The first step will be a strict prohibition of offensive content on social medial from the government. Perhaps, ...
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Some countries today have passed laws against smoking tobacco in public buildings such as offices and restaurants. Other countries have no intention of doing this.

Smoking tobacco in public places such as workplaces and restaurants has been banned in some countries recently. However, other countries have not restricted smoking in public. This essay will discuss the debate, and give a concluding view. However, It might impact businesses income. Some people who used to smoke in restaurants and coffee shops consider that if government restrict smoking in these areas, It would drive customers away and this can be harmful to businesses. Furthermore, critics of smoking ban also highlight the decrease in the government's revenue which earns from high taxes paid by tobacco manifuctures and smokers. If cigarettes reduced, this would mean lesser taxes and lesser revenue for the government. On the one hand, Those who are against smoking in public places claim that passing a law to prohibit smoking in public places can reduce the possibility of second-hand smoke being inhaled by non- smokers. This result in non-smokers might get lung and heart c...
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In many countries, old or traditional languages are dying out or being forgotten, especially by younger people. Is this an acceptable development which occurs inevitably, or is it something which we should try to prevent?

In today&#39;s generation, many minority languages extinct silently. Some people think it is normal and some are not. The idea provokes a strong argument, which I will consider here. First of all, Supporters think it is normal in globalization because it is generally thought that wide-spread language is made communication more easily. This means if we speak few dialects it can lead to communication more effective and accessible. Secondly, learning a second language is can be challenging. If we spoke one language, it would beneficial for everyone, especially in this era. At least we don’t have to struggle to learn a second tongue. On the other hand, when a language dies, the world loses valuable cultural heritage - a great deal of the legends, poems, and knowledge gathered by generations is simply lost. Most historical documents and culture are written in the old native language. This means losing language is not simple, if we lose dialect it leads to losing everything abou...
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The education you receive from your family is more important than the education you receive from school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The people acquire knowledge in two ways, it means that the upbringing is informal and the school is formal. Both are influential for human life, but it is not possible to get a complete knowledge of science and theory from the family. I disagree with this view point and I will explain with this essay.   Firstly, education will be obtained from school, which is with systematic knowledge and professional teaching methods, for children. Formal education leads to the right choice for the future, for children. If kids had a good education from school, they would have an effect on their careers. Additionally, in the process of learning, a person becomes a member of society, it would seem that you know yourself and others.  They will know have to deal with extramarital affairs and will understand many different types of communication. On the other hand, school education is based on academic subjects who are based on family support. Ethical and cultural characteristics are inher...
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it has been said that the world is becoming a global village in which there are no boundaries to trade and communication. Do the benefits of globalization outweigh the drawbacks?

Due to globalisation,whole world tend to be single world society.This would helps to reduce the barrier of commerce and language between the nation.This tend has more positive aspect rather negative .
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art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world, however, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business. why do you think that is? what could be done to encourage more people to take interest in the arts

Art has an intangible benefits and depicts traditional scence that has crucial role to play in all cultures globally. Nevertheless, due to advancement in technology, many people are diverted their focal point from art to science, technology and business.
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Some people believe that the internet has brought people closer together. others disagree, claiming that the internet has made people more isolated . Discuss both the view and give your opinion.

Experts throughout both the developing and developed world have debated that whether internet have made society a close-Knit or confined in their own sphere. General perception propagates that, the online network assists individuals to be in a close connection, while other section of society asserts that, it has accoustmed people to be in a seclusion. This essay will argue both perspectives followed by my own stand by using example mentioned below to demonstrate points and prove arguments in the subsequent paragraphs.
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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school.

There is no iota of doubt that something is true. This phenomenon is offering manifold benefits to students. However, a couple of issues may emerge due to the same. The following paragraphs will highlight the pros and cons of something before making a final note.
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Some people think that because some children find some subjects such as mathematics and philosophy difficult they ought to be optional instead of compulsory. To what extent do you agree?

The bar chart illustrates the condition of donation to charity from British People, by level of age in 1990 and 2010, which measured by percentage.
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Recent advancement in technology have made the TV screen so live that people don't feel the need to go for any live performances. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that with the advent of technology the TV presents live performances. While I agree that people do not feel the necessity to attend live shows, I also believe that watching live performances are given a different experience.
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Consider the possible arguments on both sides of this debate, and reach your own conclusion on which side you favor.

Most people agree that smoking should be prohibited by law. Even though smoke-free law has a lot of benefits in all sectors of life, we should consider this argument on both sides. On the on hand, scientific evidence proves that anti-smoking legislation decreases all kinds of death related to smoke and lead to better national health. According to World Health Organization, the number of deaths in smoke-banned countries such as Australia and Austria has dramatically decreased, and its population is increasing year by year thanks to legislation. Furthermore, implementing these bans all around the world assists not only smokers but also protects everyone from second- hand smoke. Every year one out of ten non-smokers die from second-hand smoke. However, opponents of the law against smoking contribute the idea that the law is conflicted to democratic countries where human rights cared the most. They believe that it&#39;s their choice whether they smoke tobacco or not in publi...
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Some countries today have passed laws against smoking tobacco in public buildings such as offices and restaurants, other countries have no intention of doing this. Consider the possible argument on both sides of this debate, and reach your own conclusion on which side your favor

Some states have passed laws banning smoking in public areas. However, every country has not accepted this law, until now.  In this essay, we will discuss two aspects. On the one hand, for countries that support health issues it can be said that it reduces the physical and mental health, respiratory system, circulatory system, reproductive system, skin and eyes, and many types of cancer. Because smoke contains many hazardous substances and it is easily released into the air at the same place nearby. For instance: More than 8 million people are killed by cigarettes worldwide every year. Furthermore, in case, people are sometimes needed to in public places, if one individual smoked, others would inhale cigarette gas, it means that indirect smoking. It is possible, children and pregnant women will be affected by this poison gas.  Conversely, those who oppose it say it is acceptable to smoke tobacco in a place where there is high congestion. Most of them explained that smoking...
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In spite of the advances made in agriculture , many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

Even though farming has been modernized,a lot of individuals all over world are still experiencing hunger.The following paragraphs would discuss on the causes for this kind of scenario and possible courses of actions to overcome this situation.
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Some people say that school studies are not useful and most important things are learnt outside the school. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and examples.

Nowadays, secondary school are not successful and students prefer to learn things in educational centre. I believe that modern generation study usefully outside the school and I will support my opinions with examples.
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English is becoming the most prominent language in the world. Do the advantages of having only one language in the world outweigh the disadvantages?

The English language has gained popularity across the globe. Though the benefits of having a single language across most of the nations cannot be undermined, but it carries risk of extinction of traditional language. In this essay, I will explain the merits and demerits of one universal language.
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