IELTS Writing Samples Band 3

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There was a study showed only 10% people doing exercises during the weekdays or in their free time. As a result, it caused a serious problem of their health. There are two main reasons causing this problem. First of all, with the developing of the internet businesses, most employees spend at least 10 hours on their computer. They don’t have time to take a break or even drink a glass of water! However, the companies don’t care about their their health, they just want to achieve their goals. Therefore, the employees sacrifice their free time to finish their job instead of exercise. In addition, they have to do housework or take care of their children after work time. They spend almost 3 hours on accompanying their children because family is the first place in their mind. However, they ignore the importance of their body. Overall, they don’t have time to do exercises in their free time.
With the advent in online platforms, yesteryears has seen a surge with regard to virtual shopping experience. While some business owners believes that it could have an adverse effect in the shopping industry, many advocates that online shopping carries its own benefits which is yet to be tapped. This essay argues both the perspectives and presents my agreement for the latter view.
The bar chart illustrates the rate of coffe and tea being bough and consumed in three typical circumtanses in five large cities of Australian, which are Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart. Overall, the Australian who went to the cafe to get a coffee or a tea in last 4 weaks stood as the highest rate in all cities except for Adelaide, which the instant coffee consumer in the last four weeks outracing the the cafe costumers.
In recent years, there has been a growing tendency on advertsing. In my opinion, This phenomenon has both positive and negative influences
I'm currently studying Master of Science in civil engineering at Babol Noshirvani University of Technology, Babol, Iran, which is ranked first among Iranian engineering universities, according to the Times Higher Education for three consecutive years (2018-2020).
People often prefer to communicate with each other trough online communication. Most people think this is a very useful way to life.I disagree with this subject because people often get away from the family.Moreover The person has bad habit.other people believe Very helpful because it save times.
The pictures given illustrate the production of tea and how a cup of tea is made. Overall, there are 18 steps from growing tea in India and China to enjoying a cup of tea, but this process is quite simple.
Nowadays, in many countries, youngsters are expected to take more time in learning in and after school, their leisure time should be limited. Although studying all time has some benefits but I think children do not have to do this, they should balance both because having free time also has positive effects.
Some people has the opinion that it is not necessary to travel all the places to learn about other cultures we can learn from books films and internet in my opinion I don't agree with this idea
Nowadays, almost all specialists in education are confident that study abroad By school exchanges have many benefits. In my opinion, despite several shortcomings which we will cover an essay, there are numerous advantages.
These days many multinational companies launch their branches in developing countries. Although It gives the chance to develop Laborers, it reduces the cost of the product at the cost of other things.
There is a view that it is unproper to set common retirement age, without taking into account the working conditions of employee. In this case the pilots and mining workers and other indviduals with severe working enviroment should have the different pension scheme, which will allow them to recieve pension at earlier age.
It is opined by some people that the best part of being rich is they can get a chance to help others .I disagree with the opinion as affluent people might take their high bank balnce for selfish acts.
The table demonstrates the quantity of Ashdown Museum visitors during the year before and after it renovated while the chart illustrates the visitors survey result of their satisfaction with their visit to the museum by these two times.
Children in industrialized society are becoming more obese . In order to tackle the problem , some people feel that authorities of school or colleges have to ban junk food, sweets and sugary advertisements. I agree with the statement that may solve the problem. There are other solution to prevent the issue namely, adopting healthy life style and increasing people`s awareness of health issues.
I agree with this topic. In my opinion I think that music can join anypeople who has different culture togethr, Music can make a relationship between people all around the world. Although it has different rhytum but when th people who listen to music, their feeling will be better. For the example the woman who will be mom in the future she can use music to join between mom and her baby. I have known about how to make the patients feel better and some cases of the patients in the hospital, the doctors will use music for them. When they patients listen to music (solf music) it makes them feel better. And now we don't use music only human we can use it with animals and plants too.
In modernization era, people are more influence by brand rather than actual quality. The brand has status symbol, thus, If anyone accquired trendy things that person will get more eye attention in their society or group. Honestly, That's distinguish effect on personally and socially.
In recent years, famous actors and sports personalities get paid massive in comparison to the other professions. Hence, this essay will discuss whether the reason behind it is legitimate or unjustified before arriving at a conclusion.
Sometimes, it is argued that testing medicines on animals is a cruel action. Here, in this essay, I will discuss both, the positve and the negative side of this.
The images illustrate how City Hospital has changed during 2007 and 2010. Overall, the location of the City Hospital remained unchanged trough out the whole timeframe, while the six bus stop facilities on the east-side and north side of the Hospital Road been removed and made into a Bus Station in the South-west of the city hospital.
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