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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people argue that challenging hobbies may bring a higher sense of pleasure. This essay will discuss why I think hobbies are not necessarily to be tricky, since everyone has their own enjoyment from those activities.

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Many countries now face an economic downturn so it is better for each country to focus on its own problems rather than helping other countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It has been observed that, many countries are facing an economic downturn, so it is better for each country to focus on its own issues rather than helping other countries. If questioned, I disagree with this statement to a large extent. My preference is explained in the upcoming write ups.

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All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that, cars which runs on fuel should be banned and people should start using electric cars.However, I would argue cars using fuel should not be abandoned as they are cost effective and ensures safety.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects.Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attendant to studying for qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Reading always fulfils the man and learning does not a waste. Some higher education students want to achieve two goals at one time and others want to achieve one goal at one time. In this essay, I hope to discuss both points and finally, I would like to give my opinion. University students have to cover a large capacity of syllabus during their learning period. and they have to face huge exams during that period. their aim is to pass the final exam with a higher grade and enter to job field or get any other scholarships for the best education. To achieve those goals they have to focus on the exam and they should give more attention to their field.Furthermore, there is great competition in the job market. So high results student can find a job easily and others who have high results can go to their own target. However, all of that thing can depend on their knowledge, marks, attention, dedication and luck. However, it becomes that, sometimes achieving two goals at one time is best now...

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Some people say that governments should focus on reducing environ mental pollution and housing problems to help people prevent illness and disease. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, environmental pollution and housing problems are becoming troubles. As a result, there are many illnesses and diseases in modern society. I completely agree with the view, although environmental and mental pollution and housing problems are some of the reasons.

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Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/She would like your advice about finding a place to live.

How are you? Hope you are in good health and in high spirits. I am writing this letter to express my happiness that you have been offered a Business Communication course at Khalsa College. I know this course is highly recommended by our experts who have good knowledge in management studies and completing this course will give you ample opportunities for searching suitable job.

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In achieving personal happiness, our relationships with family, friends,and colleagues are more important than work and wealth. Do you agree ordisagree with this

Nowadays, children play a vital role any nation's development therefore parents need to give more freedom as compared to the past. I ponder that, it is affirmative development and my justification will come in further paragraphs along with some relative examples.

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How can the government make sure that people save enough money to live on when they are old?

Many of the older generation are suffering from the lack of money and savings. This is due to the fact that the government has not taken any actions to support them during their working age and financial management illiteracy of a part of the generation. This essay will suggest some potential solutions related to this and provide a conclusion.

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What are the causes of the extinction of many species?

Extinction, or the dying out of species, is the decrease in the population of a group of animals. There are plenty of causes that can lead to the disappearance of them. This paragraph will show you 3 main causes of extinction. The biggest cause is the polluted environment. Contaminated environments have detrimental effects on both humans and wildlife. It is not difficult to see marine species especially fishes, corals, turtles,... are caught to toxic chemicals such as bottle, nilon, rubbish,... in oceans, rivers and lakes. Beside that, air contamination is also the reason for the reversal of oxygen levels, which threaten numerous of animal’s life. Another result of the dying out of animals is the loss of habitat. Deforestation for harvesting, enlargement of land for farming and the harvesting of wood for fuel and forest products also contribute to comprehensive habitat loss. When habitat is limited, animals may no longer provide the water, food and cover which is essential for their...

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Computer are being used more and more in education. Some people say this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, as the generation is moving ahead and people are getting advanced, the students have started using computers for studies. So both positive side and negative side are discussed in following paragraphs and at last my opinion is given.

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Some people think young people are not suitable for important positions in the government，while other people think it is a good idea for young people to take on these positions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays,There is a controversy on filling up young people to important roles in government sector and nowadays,young people perform vital job in both private and the public sector.There are advantages and disadvantages by filling up young blood to major roles in the public sector and in this essay, it is discuss both views and illustrate to what extent young people suits for the vital roles in government sector .

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Some employers offer their employees subsidizedmembership of gyms and sport clubs , believe that this will make their staff healthier and more effective at work . Other employees find no benifit doing so. Discuss both views .

Some companies offer benefits to their employees, such as vouchers from gyms or sport clubs, in order to improve their productivity and health, whereas other companies believe that there are not benefit on doing this.

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Some people think that poverty is the reason behind most crimes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

While some people believe that poverty and crime have positive relation with each other, committing crime is perplex situation and cannot describe with a one word or reason. In this essay, I will delve into the given idea and try to give my perspective. I do not support this notion, considering the compelling reasons behind this act.

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To solve the ever-increasing environmental hazards throughout the world, the best way is to increase the price of fuel. What is your opinion on the above assumption?

Environmental problems are the main issue for mankind nowadays and in order to ensure the continuation of life, governments should look for solutions immediately. Many people believe that if the fuel prices increase, the environmental pollution will decrease and the burden of the world will be reduced. In my opinion, increasing fuel prices cannot solve the problem, instead it can create new paradoxical problems for our life.

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In many countries around the world, life expectancy is increasing. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation and give your own opinion.

People's life spaning is rising in around the world nowadays. I will discuss the positive and negative sides of this development and will give my sight. Overall, increasing life expectancy is the result of human development and it's obviously a precious situation for our lives.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A zoo has no useful purpose. Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.

Captivating animals have been debated for many years. Some people believe that zoos provide good educational opportunities to children while others support that putting animals in the cages is a quite inhuman and pointless thread. In this essay, try to explain why I agree with zoos are usefulness places and should be closed immediately.

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Young people are often influenced in their behaviours and situations by others in the same age this is called peer pressure. Do the disadvantages outweigh the advantages?

Peer pressure is a situation where many youngsters influence one another behaviours. Teenagers, one of the crucial ages in the community, are often seen to have peer pressure in order to have friends. This event can be beneficial for them but at the same time, some negative manners can happen.

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In some countries, people who commit less serious crimes are made to undertake community service instead of a prison sentence. Some people believe that all people who have committed a crime should be sent to prison. Do you agree or disagree?

In some regions, some people belive that it does not necessary to send all of the people who commit a crime to the prison, espeacially some light crimes while many people belive that all of the person who commits a crime should go to the jail, From my point of view, I agreed with the former view the we must have alternative choices for some less serious crime. My supportive ideas will be shown in the following paragrahs before the conclusion inclined.

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The diagram below showa the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.

The diagram illustrates how sugar cane transforms into sugar.

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do many working proplr no get enough exercise? And what can be done about this problems?

it is certainly true that everyone's busy in their life nowadays.Because public want to earn money to fulfill their desires.So, individuals do not get time for workout then face many diseases.well-being is more essential than job .Because ,a sound mind lives in a good body.I will discuss the cons as well as solutions in upcoming paragraphs.

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