IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Money brings joy to people’s lives in many ways. It depends upon a personal choice. However, there are predominantly two contrasting views where a section of society vehemently deems that they can spend wealth on their personal enhancement while others perceive that more ways to spend it.
Extinction of species is the most horrendous crime humanity is responsible for, and the future generations will hold us responsible for it. Since the dawn of Homo Sapiens, or since when we got the ability to think much better than all the other animals, and since when no animal could threaten humanity, humans have started to think themselves as the owners of the planet. And consequently, the human started to think that it owned all the flora and fauna too.
It is often discussed that due to the advent of cybershopping, all the outlets in the township will get closed in future.
Over the past few decades, our generation gap has increased exponentially due to paradigm shift in culture and after affects of technological advancement. It has significant impact on thinking process of teenagers which has created differences with older generation. This essay is going to discuss about these variations and its impact.
Some people are convinced that due to air contamination, noise pollution and airport construction which are in results of a raise in cheap-travel flights, the governments should appoint a higher excise on flights in order to diminish these problems.
People have different views about how a country can be economically and environmentally flourish. While some believe that it would be impossible for the countries to be successful in terms of financial and environmental due to the inconsistency between these terms, I would argue with those who claim otherwise.
Travelling is one of the most crucial parts of people's lives. If a question about tourists being the main income is addressed, it will be challenging for us to make a decision on this controversial issue. Some people are a firm believer in the main source of income. Others, however, have always shown intense devotion to creating problems. This essay will consider the obvious benefits and the negative effects that could occur.
Nowadays, it is still hard for pupils from the countryside to receive higher education. Some part of society believe it should be changed. This essay strongly agrees with the statement that it should be accessible discipline for everyone.
In recent years, there is an ongoing debate whether the government should or should not support unemployed people. In this essay, it will be carefully examined to support my opinion. I tend to disagree with those who are privileged to receive help from the government authorities.
Part of the society believes, that positive thinking has a great influence on our mind and body, while others argue, that being always happy comes with significant drawbacks.
I agree to the point that commercials and advertisements attract us to buy products though we really do not need it at that particular time. Marketing may benefit companies to increase sales, but for a common man it is a trap.
Hi! My name is Thu Hien. I am Vietnamese. So write accurately in Vietnamese is Thu Hiên. Sounds weird right! My friends also think so. Honestly, my name is quite a rate, very few people have the same name as me. Indeed, I also do not understand it. But my grandfather, who imagined that name said there was a meaning behind it. I was born in Can Tho city. When I was 6 years old, my mother moved to a wonderful place, Phu Quoc Island. Finally, I have to live there. Currently, I am 16 years old,...
In 2014, my aunt asked me to go out to the cinema to watch a new movie which named “ Maleficent “. Among the cast, an actress who played the part of princess Aurora was impressed me a lot. After having come home, I immediately searched for the information of this beautiful actress. Her name is Elle Fanning.
It is often argued that marketing strategies whose main target are children should be prohibit as those can negatively impact them. I highly agree with that position. That type of advertisement influnce and encourage kids to become compulsive consumers, and also, can cause psyochological prombles in some of them.
It was a hot day in August 2014, I went to Giang Vo Secondary School to meet my new teacher and classmates. It was my first day at school so I felt nervous but a little bit excited. Although I was afraid of being lonely, I really wanted to make new friends. I walked inside the class and everybody was staring at me, which made me very shy. Then, I asked a random girl that if I could sit beside her and she said yes. So this was Mai Hanh - my favorite classmate and also my best friend till now.
Since I am applying to the Development-Related Postgraduate Courses (EPOS) program, I have looked for one within the energy sector, the area where I started my career. The renewable energy industry fascinated me for two reasons, firstly is the fact to contribute to a sustainable world. And secondly, the potential growth to be explored in Brazil. The three top course that I have identified with my study purpose and professional goals are: 1.Postgraduate Programme Renewable Energy – PPRE Universität Oldenburg 2.Renewable Energy Management (REM) Technische Hochschule Köln 3.Master of Engineering in “Energy and Environmental Management in Developing Countries” (formely SESAM) Europa-Universität Flensburg I have chosen REM at TH Köln as my first choice. I am very excited over the program structure, because emphasize management and leadership skills. The modules are well divided between theory, practice and of course, the thesis. I believe that such a diverse program will result...
These days,smoking is harmful to both smokers and nearby people. This then is not allowed in some public areas,applying to more places in order to regulate the activity,also take care of one's health in that point. I strongly believe that the benefits of banning outweigh the drawbacks. On the one hand,it is clear that restriction of the smoking area is better for both themselves and people being around there.
In recent year, cost of living has become a major challenge people face. this has made the increase of persons to migrate from one country to another in search of greener pastures. Also so many persons belive that traveling overseas is the best option for better growth of income and survival.
ere is no doubt that social media platforms play a crucial role in the growth of celebrities and often portray them in an unfair manner. While some believe that a person’s fame comes at the cost of intrusion into their personal life , I am of the opinion that they should also be allowed to have their own private space. On the one hand, those who believe that invading one’s personal life is acceptable, argue that their choice of the profession demands for such activities. For instance , a movie actor is required to showcase his lifestyle and glamorous activities on social media in order to gain the public’s attention. This reason for this is the success of such people is not only being measured on their hard work but also depends on the public’s reaction. Conversely , if a celebrity’s life is not made known to the society, they would not receive necessary recognition and appreciation and could lose potential future opportunities in their field. However , I belie...
One part of our society believes that mega malls are looting the end-users by offering same products at high prices which are available at cheaper rates in the community markets, whereas, few are of the opinion that big shopping complexes are the appropriate place to buy anything. I am strongly in the favour of latter statement, as there is a huge difference in both the scenarios. Firstly, we will discuss about positives of shopping in malls and secondly, we will explain about the problems ...
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