IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 614

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Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence, while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways. What is your opinion?

Successful people sometimes could be a great example of intellectual facilities, leadership qualities and sometimes maybe incredible luck. But is it correct to state that intelligence always should be measured by the level of your success?

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Many people are involved in sports when they are young but stop once they are adults. Why do many adults stop doing physical exercise? *What can be done about this problem?

The physical activities plays a prominent role in everyone's life ,without considering age group.A certain group of persons are indulged in sports events during their adolescence ,however physical exercise got diminished after entering in adulthood age. In my view,lifestyle is crucial factor in such cases, the root causes are explained with evidences as well as solutions are discussed ,also in this essay. To embark upon, mature individuals have more responsibilities towards family and work station.Due to hectic schedules,they have more priorities towards their livelihood as well as earning name,fame ,and money during adulthood. Furthermore, due to multitasking nature, less leisure time is spent in recreational activities by working class people.For Instance, in recent survey by USA agency, only 45% adults spent one hours in physical workout during weekdays. Hence, due to high load at work offices made them to stuck there till mid-night. However, the working hours should ...

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Many people today are worried about cybercrime such as hacking and identity theft. What problems does cybercrime cause and what solution can you suggest for ordinary people and business to take.

Cybercrime is a serious problem in the modern world and finding a solution to this problem is much more complex than just sitting on a chair and browsing on the internet. This problem has various aspects, and it involves different factors from political issues to economic ones. However, each citizen should make their contribution to the solution of the problem. It involves being more responsible about the usage of the internet and digital gadgets as well as trying to increase the awareness of the possible problems.

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Some people believe that employment over the age of 60 is not right and creates lots of problems. So people should retire after 60 and not work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

a few people thinks that hiering people over the age of 60 can be proplematic and this should be faced by forcing people over that age to retire

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good member of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Children are one of the pivot assets of the country; therefore, it is better for the country as well as children to learn discipline and how to become a responsible one with the help of their parents but certain people claim that it is a school's obligation. Without further speculation I will dissect contrary views and bring forth my deduction. Pupils, on their early stage of life have less maturity; consequently, they learn various aspects of life from their first role models, their parents. Therefore, parents ought to give a plethora of advice to their children which help them to build a great image of themselves among their relatives as well as in the society. Moreover, parents are the first one to predict their son's moves so that they can teach them at the first place which would give them confidence to behave like a mature person. For example, department of discipline's research endorses that in 70% of children's success, parents play an immense role by giving advi...

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good member of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Children are one of the pivot assets of the country; therefore, it is better for the country as well as children to learn discipline And how to become a responsible one with the help of their parents but certain people claim that it is a school's obligation. Without further speculation I will dissect contrary views and bring forth my deduction. Pupils, on their early stage of life have less maturity; consequently, they learn various aspects of life from their first role models, their parents. Therefore, parents ought to give a plethora of advice to their children which help them to build a great image of themselves among their relatives as well as in the society. Moreover, parents are the first one to predict their son's moves so that they can teach them at the first place which would give them confidence to behave like a mature person. For example, department of discipline's research endorses that in 70% of children's success, parents play an immense role by giving advice...

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good member of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Children are one of the pivot assets of the country; therefore, it is better for the country as well as children to learn discipline and how to become a responsible one with the help of their parents but certain people claim that it is a school's obligation. Without further speculation I will dissect contrary views and bring forth my deduction. Pupils, on their early stage of life have less maturity; consequently, they learn various aspects of life from their first role models, their parents. Therefore, parents ought to give a plethora of advice to their children which help them to build a great image of themselves among their relatives as well as in the society. Moreover, parents are the first one to predict their son's moves so that they can teach them at the first place which would give them confidence to behave like a mature person. For example, department of discipline's research endorses that in 70% of children's success, parents play an immense role by giving advice...

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Some people think that the best way to reduce time spent in travelling to work is to replace parks and gardens close to the city centre with apartment buildings for commuters, but others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Metropolitan cities these days have become the hub for many Multi-National Companies.Also these cities have become sources of employment.Every morning we find traffic where everyone goes to production.People think to replace the public places for the use of people and to replace them with buildings.This essay will discuss the adverse effects of replacing public places for individual use.

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under British and Australian laws a jury is a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant's past criminal record. This protects the person who is being accused of the crime some lawyers have suggested that this practice should be changed and that a jury should be given all the past facts before they reach their decision about the case do you agree or disagree ? Give reason for your answer

It is debatable whether or not the jury has an access for the defendant’s past criminal information. While some people may think that the past records may provide additional details, others believe that it is highly harmful for the accused person. Personally speaking, I may not agree the afore- mentioned statement as I tend to believe that old activities have no right to be involved in today’s cases. Despite the fact that people can change and grow after what they have been through, apparently communities still tend to judge people by connecting their past characters easily. Moreover, it is wiser by any chance to weight only the present facts and evidences as the former facts have already been passed. By way of illustration is a jury may have accused the wrong person just because one has a bad criminal report. Thus, to me it is only fair to excluded the earlier reports. On the other hand, another opinion to consider is that repeated bad behaviors should be punished harder...

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under British and Australian laws a jury is a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant's past criminal record. This protects the person who is being accused of the crime some lawyers have suggested that this practice should be changed and that a jury should be given all the past facts before they reach their decision about the case do you agree or disagree ? Give reason for your answer

It is debatable whether or not the jury has an access for the defendant’s past criminal information. While some people may think that the past records may provide additional details, others believe that it is highly harmful for the accused person. Personally speaking, I may not agree the afore- mentioned statement as I tend to believe that old activities have no right to be involved in today’s cases. Despite the fact that people can change and grow after what they have been through, apparently communities still tend to judge people by connecting their past characters easily. Moreover, it is wiser by any chance to weight only the present facts and evidences as the former facts have already been passed. By way of illustration is a jury may have accused the wrong person just because one has a bad criminal report. Thus, to me it is only fair to excluded the earlier reports. On the other hand, another opinion to consider is that repeated bad behaviors should be punished harder...

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under British and Australian laws a jury is a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant's past criminal record. This protects the person who is being accused of the crime some lawyers have suggested that this practice should be changed and that a jury should be given all the past facts before they reach their decision about the case do you agree or disagree ? Give reason for your answer

It is debatable whether or not the jury has an access for the defendant’s past criminal information. While some people may think that the past records may provide additional details, others believe that it is highly harmful for the accused person. Personally speaking, I may not agree the afore- mentioned statement as I tend to believe that old activities have no right to be involved in today’s cases. Despite the fact that people can change and grow after what they have been through, apparently communities still tend to judge people by connecting their past characters easily. Moreover, it is wiser by any chance to weight only the present facts and evidences as the former facts have already been passed. By way of illustration is a jury may have accused the wrong person just because one has a bad criminal report. Thus, to me it is only fair to excluded the earlier reports. On the other hand, another opinion to consider is that repeated bad behaviors should be punished harder...

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under British and Australian laws a jury is a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant's past criminal record. This protects the person who is being accused of the crime some lawyers have suggested that this practice should be changed and that a jury should be given all the past facts before they reach their decision about the case do you agree or disagree ? Give reason for your answer

It is debatable whether or not the jury has an access for the defendant’s past criminal information. While some people may think that the past records may provide additional details, others believe that it is highly harmful for the accused person. Personally speaking, I may not agree the afore- mentioned statement as I tend to believe that old activities have no right to be involved in today’s cases. Despite the fact that people can change and grow after what they have been through, apparently communities still tend to judge people by connecting their past characters easily. Moreover, it is wiser by any chance to weight only the present facts and evidences as the former facts have already been passed. By way of illustration is a jury may have accused the wrong person just because one has a bad criminal report. Thus, to me it is only fair to excluded the earlier reports. On the other hand, another opinion to consider is that repeated bad behaviors should be punished harder...

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under British and Australian laws a jury is a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant's past criminal record. This protects the person who is being accused of the crime some lawyers have suggested that this practice should be changed and that a jury should be given all the past facts before they reach their decision about the case do you agree or disagree ? Give reason for your answer

It is debatable whether or not the jury has access to the defendant’s past criminal information. While some people may think that the past records may provide additional details, others believe that it is highly harmful to the accused person. Personally speaking, I may not agree with the afore- mentioned statement as I tend to believe that old activities have no right to be involved in today’s cases. Despite the fact that people can change and grow after what they have been through, apparently communities still tend to judge people by connecting their past characters easily. Moreover, it is wiser by any chance to weigh only the present facts and evidence as the former facts have already been passed. By way of illustration is a jury may have accused the wrong person just because one has a bad criminal report. Thus, to ,me it is only fair to exclude the earlier reports. On the other hand, another opinion to consider is that repeated bad behaviours should be punished harder...

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under British and Australian laws a jury is a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant's past criminal record. This protects the person who is being accused of the crime some lawyers have suggested that this practice should be changed and that a jury should be given all the past facts before they reach their decision about the case do you agree or disagree ? Give reason for your answer

It is debatable whether or not the jury has an access for the defendant’s past criminal information. While some people may think that the past records may provide additional details, others believe that it is highly harmful for the accused person. Personally speaking, I may not agree the afore- mentioned statement as I tend to believe that old activities have no right to be involved in today’s cases. Despite the fact that people can change and grow after what they have been through, apparently communities still tend to judge people by connecting their past characters easily. Moreover, it is wiser by any chance to weight only the present facts and evidences as the former facts have already been passed. By way of illustration is a jury may have accused the wrong person just because one has a bad criminal report. Thus, to me it is only fair to excluded the earlier reports. On the other hand, another opinion to consider is that repeated bad behaviors should be punished harder...

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Inspite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

The probable growth of production across the world has been demonstrated by the given pie diagrams, which is determined by sector.

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some people say that now is the best time in history to be living. what is your opinion about this? what other time in history would be interesting to live in?

I personally agree with those who claim that the present days are the best period in the history of mankind to be living.

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The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing. What is the reason for growth in overweight people in society? How can this problem be solved?

Obesity has become a growing & major concern in all countries. Poor lifestyle habits such as consuming junk & fried foods, lack of exercise are some of the prominent reasons for the growth in number of obese people in society.

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It is more important for schoolchildren to learn about local history than the world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some advocate the view that young children should be encouraged to have a deeper understanding about local history than global history. I totally agree with this opinion and will outline the reasons below.

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Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages.

In the cutting-edge era, technology has become a essential part of everybody life. In past people were doing work manually and it is also confused lot of time. I believe that, the advantages of appliances are more comparison to drawbacks and I will also explain both sides of this notion.

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More and more plastic is polluting the oceans. What problems are caused by plastic waste? What can be done to solve this problem?

From Tierra del Fuego in Argentina to the Icelandic peninsula, all countries around the world are facing now a terrible problem. It looks like we have not been too cautious about the way in which we have been treating our planet, and now it might be too late to reverse all the damage we have inflicted on it.

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

Some people think that success is the best measure for intelligence, while others think that intelligence can be measured in other ways. What is your opinion?

*Many people are involved in sports when they are young but stop once they are adults*. *Why do many adults stop doing physical exercise?* *What can be done about this problem?

Many people today are worried about cybercrime such as hacking and identity theft. What problems does cybercrime cause and what solution can you suggest for ordinary people and business to take.

Some people believe that employment over the age of 60 is not right and creates lots of problems. So people should retire after 60 and not work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good member of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good member of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good member of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some people think that the best way to reduce time spent in travelling to work is to replace parks and gardens close to the city centre with apartment buildings for commuters, but others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Inspite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

some people say that now is the best time in history to be living. what is your opinion about this? what other time in history would be interesting to live in?

The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing. What is the reason for growth in overweight people in society? How can this problem be solved?

It is more important for schoolchildren to learn about local history than the world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages.

More and more plastic is polluting the oceans. What problems are caused by plastic waste? What can be done to solve this problem?

Many people are involved in sports when they are young but stop once they are adults. Why do many adults stop doing physical exercise? *What can be done about this problem?