IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 796

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The world is developing at a very rapid pace and the recent business models adopted by various businesses have massively impacted the small local shops. The affect is so severe that the small shops usually found in residential areas are unable to continue because of huge losses. In this essay, we will cover the positive aspect of this development and also we will provide suggestions which could help in curbing the negative aspects as well.

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Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. Do you agree or disagree

Almost any day of the week you can look at a newspaper and read articles discussing about a big city and small town. Some people prefer to live in a big city, however others would live in a small town. In my point of view, I would choose live in a big city than a small town.

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Many offenders commit more crimes after serving their first punishment. Why is this happening and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem

It is commonly said that,especially in these days the majority of inmates are leaving prisons only to reoffend. This is mainly due to the lack of rehabilitation during the period of sentencing and difficulty finding permanent employment once released. There I will discuss both reasons and relevant solutions by justifying them with some ideas.

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it is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age . Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children ?

Raising children is always the hardest part of being a parent and different parents have their own ways to teach their children. Therefore , there are many arguments around this topic . Some said that it was important for children to learned the difference between right and wrong at an early age and punishment was necessary to help them learn this distinction . To my mind this idea is totally right .

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Children who are brought up in families that do not have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is argued that children born to richer parents are less ready to deal with ups and downs of adult life. I support the idea that deprived children are, on the other hand, more used to coping with difficulties and take the turmoil of grown-up life more stoically.

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In some areas of the us a curfew is imposed in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult

Nowadays, the number of crimes is emerging. In some regions of the US, Some protection laws is regarded that say teens are just allowed to be out till a specific time at night except if they are with an adult. I believe that this curfew is not a good idea to make the youth's life sater.

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When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Technological development has considerable impacted people’s lives. It is argued that due to the technology, traditional approaches and ways of life of a country vanished. It is furthersaid that to maintain them is meaningless. I fully agree with thisnotion and

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Some people think that developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries. Others believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment.

Well, if we talk about climate change in today's world whoever wishes to investigate medicine and also science properly to rebut the greenhouse gas emission and it will be brighter if we say climate change which is high disseminated all over the world. Unknown amount of inhabitants suppose that countries with comprehensive facilities have a higher obligation to cut down climate change than upcoming countries. Others trust that all countries should have the same duties towards ehorting the e...

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In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.

Nowadays, the number of crimes is emerging. In some regions of the US, Some

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, specialists discuss about the age wich is more preferable for children to start studying a foreign languages. Some of them claim that period of child education at primary school is the most excellent for this than at secondary school. However, there are both pros and cons of this essence. In my essay, I will talk some of reasons why primary school’s age is better for learning languages and some of the challenges to be overstepped.

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Some people think that developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries. Others believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In these days, climate change in today's world whoever wishes to investigate medicine and also science properly to rebut the greenhouse gas emission and it will be brighter if we say climate change which is high disseminated all over the world. Unknown amount of inhabitants suppose that countries with comprehensive facilities have a higher obligation to cut down climate change than upcoming countries. Others trust that all countries should have the same duties towards ehorting the environme...

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Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the internet, and they can study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the technology-driven era ,modern machinery has seemingly infiltrated almost all aspects of our lives, including education. Some people hold the conviction that schools play an irreplaceable role in the education system since they act as a precursor to a promising future .While others believe in the benefits accrue to learning through the Internet at home . From my own perspective , I subscribe to the latter notion to a certain extent.

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It is inevitable that as technology advances, traditional cultures will be lost. It seems that we cannot have these two things together. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In this modern epoch technology revolutionized each and every sector. Due to which traditional cultures are getting vanished every year. So, it has become bone of contention that with the technological advancement, traditional culture should be preserved or not. I will enunciate these views in subsequent paragraph along with my opinion.

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After graduating from high school , some young people decide to start working right away instead of going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this?

It is generally accepted that Individuals can decide their own career path after they graduate from high schools. It is a source of much to debate that whether it is mandatory to go to university or get a job right after graduation. There are both advantages and disadvantages about this issues. One of the drawbacks would be lack of knowledge of high level education or professional backgrounds. On the other side, It is beneficial for people who cannot afford the university tuition fees.

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Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value the quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In today’s world, creating a business is ever popular. It can be commonly seen even within a family. The argument that the best way to run a business within a family is a subject that both supported and refuted by many. Both sides of this arguments will be analyzed before a reasoned conclusion is drawn.

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Topic: Many children and students are taught to push themselves to be better than others rather than work together for everyones’s benefits. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

When it comes to the issue of whether or not teaching children to be highly competitive is the best approach is still a controversial debate among parents and education systems. Personally, I don’t come to terms with students being trained to be competitive with others.

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Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development?

In the contemporary society, it is true that advertisements play a pivotal part in our daily life. In my point of view, the growth of advertisements brings both benefits and drawbacks in equal measure to people and society as a whole. On the one hand, advertisements might have negative impacts on people and society in numerous aspects. As for individuals, increasing advertising results in people live in a consumer culture where their choice of goods might be manipulated if they were over-reliant on commercials. Nowadays, since companies focus on selling their brand images, advertisers aim to persuade us that buying those goods will eventually leads to happiness, which might become the perfect for businesses or companies to exaggerate or even distort the products’ fact. For example, marketers often bombard consumers via media outlets or by giving goody bags with a view to catching people’s attention. Furthermore, children’s mind can be easily affected by advert...

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Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television. However, television cannot replace the book as a learning tool, which is why children are less well‐educated today. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

These days plenty of time is being spent by children watching TV. Still and all most people believe that youngsters are becoming less educated by television that cannot replace books which are counted as the best source learning knowledge. This essay will argue why it is important to choose books to TV for acquiring skills.

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The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of modern lifestyle. What are the advantages of this trend? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

The growth in pre-processed food has benefited individuals to maintain the pace of the hectic and contemporary way of life. In this essay, an attempt shall be made to outline the merits and demerits of this current situation and also verify if the benefits thereof are more than the shortfalls or otherwise. To begin with, lifestyle has changed to a maddening pace and time is what we lack. Firstly, The cooking time comes down considerably because of semi cooked foods.. The stage of pre-preparations can be eliminated, saving a lot of time involved. For example, the noodles are fried in oil for a long time, we can prepare this with only boiling it in water. Secondly, shelf life of the convenience food is always mentioned in the packaging and has a considerable shelf life. As the packaged food is usually packed in hygienic and sterile conditions with definite shelf life. For instance, oats are packed in airtight packages with a shelf life of more than 6 months. Thirdly, Trackin...

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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

More and more people prefer to read ebooks rather than paper books. What are the reasons for this? What problems can this cause for libraries?

In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. Do you agree or disagree

Many offenders commit more crimes after serving their first punishment. Why is this happening and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem

Children who are brought up in families that do not have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In some areas of the us a curfew is imposed in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult

When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Some people think that developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries. Others believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment.

In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.

Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people think that developed countries have a higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries. Others believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the internet, and they can study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is inevitable that as technology advances, traditional cultures will be lost. It seems that we cannot have these two things together. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

After graduating from high school , some young people decide to start working right away instead of going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this?

Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value the quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Topic: Many children and students are taught to push themselves to be better than others rather than work together for everyones’s benefits. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development?

Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television. However, television cannot replace the book as a learning tool, which is why children are less well‐educated today. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of modern lifestyle. What are the advantages of this trend? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?