IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 860

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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plagiarism in academics has become a pressing problem in many countries what are the cause of this problem? what are some possible solutions?

It is true that plagiarism in academics is a serious issue in lots of countries. It actually leads to negatives effect such as the student’s scores

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Water is a natural resource that should always be free. Governments should ban the sale of bottled water. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that water is considered as a natural resource that has been gifted for the whole human being. Therefore, it is argued that authorities should prohibit the selling of processed water in bottle. In my opinion, I totally disagree with the aforementioned assertion for relevant reasons.

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Some people believe that after a child enters school their teachers will have more influence than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nurturing a child have always been a paramount issue in every parent's life. This would be more concerning when children start a formal education. After this, this question will arise that whether are educators influential in their life or their father and mother? I believe that, after starting guided learning the parent's influence would decrease while an increase in teachers' effect can be seen.

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How should we ensure that television is a positive influence in the life of children?

Nowadays, the life is hustler and bustler so television become to play an important role in entertainment. Unexceptionally, parents and their children spend a lot of time watching television in order to entertain and get new information. However, some people suggest that watching television has a positive effect to viewer in directly, expecially children and vice versa.

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How could we encourage people to visit museum more?

Museum is a building where objects of historical, scientific, or artistic interest are kept. It is clear that museum really plays an important role in our life so people should visit the exhibition hall more in order to explore the value of it. There are several ways to increase museum attendance .

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Establishing good relationships in the workplace is not important, as the primary goal of every person is to focus on work. To what extent do you agree or with this

The priorities of working vary from companies to companies. In some places, the efford of maintain social networking within the workplace is not as important as completing given deadlines, while in another company, the opposite is true. However, it is not recommended to move the priority towards the end of any side of the spectrum. In this essay, I am going to present reasons why I partially agree to priorities workers to focus on doing their work, and why I also disagree with the motion stating that good connections are not as important as the ladder.

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In certain countries, the number of people facing with health problems is increasing due to excessive consumption of unhealthy food. Therefore, governments have to rate a higher tax on junk food. I agree with some point. I will discuss and render my opinion. Fast food contains many extremely harmful nutrients such as excess sugar and lipids. These nutrients will train form into big molecules and accumulate and dog blood vessel. Also, cooking methods such as repeated frying oil and poor quality ingredients. As a result, this kind of food can cause various illness. For example, cancer and obesity. However, the advantages of fast food are cheap, fast and convenient. Therefore, fast food is a good choice for low-income people who are not able to eat at restaurant often or who are in hurry. Undoubtedly, imposing a higher tax on fast food will impact food prices. Therefore, it may cause people to change their minds to eat more useful food at a similar price. Although th...

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your personal opinion

Currently, many people end up either having an undesirable job or living on a tight-budget . Ideas are divided as to whether they benefit more by enduring such predicaments or trying to enhance their conditions but it is my firm conviction that they should make an attempt to ameliorate their difficulties as it brings more advantages for them in the long-term.

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In many countries there is a widening gap between the rich and the poor. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

The world is currently ruled by the rich and highly influentional people the ruling parties of various countries follows crony capitalism where rich gets richer and poor gets poorer.This happens mostly in developing and under developed countries .Entreprenuer and Business men need low wage workers to keep their business growing and to be in competition with the world markets.

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Nowadays there is a growing shift towards the use of cashless transactions. While some people argue in support of a cashless society, claiming that it is beneficial to citizens, others raise concerns about security. Which side of this argument do you, personally, agree with, and why?

In a globalized world, with the continuous development of technology industries, many countries are gradually coming to a cashless society. It is thought that this trend will bring good results to people's life. Other people, however, believe that it will have a negative impact on social security. Personally, I agree with the first view. Some people argue that the government should not advance to cashless society because if citizens use electronic payment, there may be leaks of personal information or boundaries between the rich and poor. However, it is a short-sighted look. Due to the industrialization - modernization of the world, if a country wants a foothold, the use of electronic payment become more and more essential. Digital transactions helps the government minimize social evils and the human society to be more advanced. In addition, illegal transactions typically take place with cash so that there’s no record of the transaction and so that the seller can be c...

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some people say that art (e.g.: painting, poetry, music) can be made by everyone whereas others believe that it can be made by those with special ability. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people say that art can be made by every single person while others think it is god gifted. In my opinion, art is more likely good gifted but every person can polish their skills by having practice, even though it doesn't exist by birth in them.

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many employers are employing people with good skills as well as good qualifications. do you agree or disagree that good skills are as important as good qualifications to succeed in a job?

Myriad of articles is written every year, regarding the qualifications of the best employee for each field. A lot of hiring managers are seeking the perfect skills in addition to the best competencies. Business magaziens recommends to look for mature practices side by side with the best competencies, and I agree with them.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children? Give reason for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the last century the children’s punishment was based on in a physical and verbal approach. According to the latest statistics, a fraction of the society still opine that punishment is fundamental to successfully raise a young individual even though it is questioning which type of discipline would be more suitable and accurate. It is prudent to establish what means of discipline both parents and educators may apply. It is my contention opine that punishment does not mean necessarily mean effective discipline. Is it possible to raise a child without a harsh approach? This essay will discuss this rationale in depth whilst offering my perspective . To begin with, educators should emphasize that discipline is not supposed to be about fear but learning how to distinguish ct a misbehaviour and limits. Therefore, juveniles will be stimulated to develop critical thinking and self-awareness, applying that to a varied range of social events in their life cycle. Thus, they will be ...

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Some people believe that success in life comes from taking risks or chances. Others believe that success results from careful planning.

I think that success is usually associated with careful planning and taking risks. If you have a chance to get a great promotion, but you do not prepare anything to show yourself to have ability to do that, you can loss it. Sometimes, you calculate everything carefully, but the environment change, or there is another unexpected event happen, maybe you failed. Therefore, I think that we must plan carefully, seize an opportunities and evaluate events many times when necessary.

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A lot of people are suffering from loneliness these days. They lack of physical fitness. What do you think are the reason of this problem? Can you think of possible solutions?

Past few decades have seen a dramatic change in old age home due to lack of communication and lack of closeness among family members. Old people now a days are facing loneliness and also they are weak as well as unfit . In this following essay I aim to identify some causes of this problem and some viable solutions.

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Nowadays celebrities earn more money than politicians. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development ?

Nowadays, some critical jobs in countries earn less and this issue can effect on societies and people. Therefor goverments and proffesionals who decide for the countries must think and codify some rules for solving this problem.

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Do the advantage of bureaucracy outweighs the drawbacks?

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Many Teenagers now have their own smartphone. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this and give your own opinion

Nowadays, a smartphone is being owned by many adolescents. While overuse of a smartphone result in teens poor performance in education, I believe that these electronic devices help in younger ones safety.

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the growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays the lifestyle of the people is different. Many people feel uncomfortable and time consuming for going crowded markets. So, e-shopping become more popular which create a belief of a mass bankruptcy for shopkeepers in near future. However, it should be noted that online shopping is only an option for sellers of goods and services, not a termination button.

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Some people say that success is 10 percent talent and 90 percent hard work Is hard worknow the key to success, or is talent also important Give reason for your anewer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Some people think the hard work and talent are the most important thing to be successful. They are two important facts, but there are other things to be successful.

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