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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of the young aldults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantage

The earth has been changing in recent years and one of the most significant altered is the amount of young and elderly society. While young and teenagers is becoming high , a number of the old generation is felling down. In this essay , I will discuss what can be benefits and drawbacks that statements from the countries' perspectives.

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"Countries become more developed due to mix of different people and their culture. Do you agree or disagree?"

Diversity in the people, caste, religion and colour comes up with positive developments in the society. Combination of various people in the society give rises to knowledge and love among each another about their cultures. I am totally agreed with the above statement.

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Many people argue that in order to improve educational quality, high school students are encouraged to make comments or even criticism on their teachers. Others think it will lead to loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is a heated argument amongst people regarding increasing the quality of education and one section of society argues that students should get support to ask queries from personnel and share disagreements on any topic whereas others oppose this and believe that it will result in disruption of the classroom’s environment. I support the former statement and this essay will put forward both views, following with a logical conclusion.

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organizing a large family celebration such as a wedding can often create problems. what can be the problems associated with organizing a large family event and what solutions can you suggest ?

For some people, a wedding celebration is a significant affair. However, this event is a special occasion to gather happily and cheerfully. Still, planning for this kind of event, particularly for those with large families, is likely to cause problems and be a stressful experience. I will note some possible issues and suggestions that may help tackle them.

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Today, people have become accustomed to living in “throwaway” society which means that they use things for a short time and then throw away. What are the causes of this? What problems may this lead to?

In the contemporary era, citizens have adopted the habit of using things for a short period and then stop using them or destroying it after that. There are various reasons and solutions to this behaviour and this essay will put forward both the views, followed by a logical conclusion.

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Students should be taught the academic subjects only in the schools not the practical skills like cooking. To what extent di you agree or disagree?

Needless to say, school are the one most influential in the student's career life. Some people harbour a belief that institutions should teach the practical skills alongside with the academic subjects.In my opinion, I tend to stand with the given statement. In this monograph, will elaborate on the positive aspects of this trends and thus lead to a logical conculsion.

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Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays, numerous schools are running all over the world but there is a huge problem which is being faced by many institutions one of them is bullying. The causes and some possible solutions to stop ragging in schools are mentioned in the upcoming paragraphs.

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In many parts of world there is continuos coverage of sport on television. Some people believe this discourages the young from taking part in any sport themselves. Discuss the view and give your own opinion.

Elderly people are not respected enough in some nations nowadays, which can cause certain problems. In this essay the possible reason for lack of respect towards the preceding generation is discussed, some follow-up problems are indicated.

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In some cities, government has tried to tax the owners of the vehicles, for example to reduce the traffic congestion. Do you think it is a positive or a negative impact?

In the fast-paced world, some countries are imposing higher taxes to maintain the lower vehicle flow on the roads. Nowadays, more and more vehicles are on road, because every family has their own vehicle. This may lead to traffic problems and air pollution as well. In my opinion, this will be a positive impact on pollution and traffic control as well.

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Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Technology development makes everyone can do their task anywhere including adults for work and children for study. One example of a place such as in their home. Either adult has not gone to the office or children go to school. I think it tends to be negative development because it can make many people have a sedentary life and lack interpersonal skills.

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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In my opinion, I think every subject is important for us. We have to learn everything through our past, present and future. Some people say that History is one of the most important school subjects it’s true but it has to go along with today’s world which is science and technology. How can we move without our history, the people behind us “The ancient people” is the most powerful people who push us to move forward. They taught us how to fire light, how to find food, how to live with other animals, how to survive and others. Of course, we wouldn’t know that without them. Science and Technology are important too. They give us a chance to move forward with them. Without Science and Technology, we’re just normal human beings. We spend our daily life with no useful. Without them, we have no light we have no food, and we have no comfortable stuff things. Old people could survive without these things. Humans create lots of inventions to give an unlimited want to people based on ...

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is clear that living in a foreign country has its own benefits and drawbacks to consider. I agree with this statement. However I think that anybody coming from another country should respect the national culture. In this essay, I would like to outline the social and practical problems.

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Prevention is better than cure. Out of a country’s health budget a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending in health education and preventive measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is a fact that preventing from being sick is beneficial than treatment. Governments by increasing the budget of training healthy lifestyle and investing on this sector will be benefited rather than spending on caring and curing patients’ people.

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Some people believe that it is important to spend money on family celebrations such as weddings and birthdays, while others think this is a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Commemorating significant events is a highly trended global phenomenon. Whilst many people believe that spending a fortune on family events is advantageous, others state it is a burn of money. This essay discusses both views and I personally believe celebrations should be done in a meaningful way.

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Some people think financial aid from international organizations is important for developing countries. Others believe that practical aid and advice is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It’s universally acknowledged that developing countries need help from the world. However, attitude varies when faced with the question of which kind of help is the most proper. In my opinion, both financial and practical aids are crucial for these countries.

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many people work long hours , leaving very little time for leisure activities . does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages ?

Numerous humans around the world work a long time of their lives , so they allocate less time to entertain themselves . in this essay , some pros and cons of this matter will be explained and a logical conclusion will be proposed .

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Students generally prefer to choose the period they are supposed to study and the period they are free to have fun. They should be allowed to do their time management. Do you agree or disagree?

As society progresses by the years, it leans towards empowering the youth with the goal of creating strong capable young adults. Teenagers have more control over their lives than what they used to in many aspects, one of which is their education. When it comes to study-time and leisure-time, though, it is agreed that students should not manage their own schedule entirely. This statement can easily be supported by analysing how the maturity level of a teenager affects their priorities, and also how the lack of experience could become an obstacle.

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In many cities,problems related to overpopulation are becoming more common.Some governments are now encouraging businesses and individuals to move of cities to rural areas.Do advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantage.

Problem regarding overpopulation are widespread more common in many cities.Therefore,businesses and individuals are suggested by the government to move to the outskirt of the city.The advantages of this do not outweight the disadvantage,in which businesses will experience a large decline in customer number and individuals will be lack of chance to access advanced technology.

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some people think that it is a waste of time for high school student to study literature such as novel or poems.To what extent ddo yu agree or disagree

A section of society asserted that learning literature such novels and poems by high school-goers it's waste of time.because they believed students also can learn literature after graduation l. I completely disagree with this statement owin of, they can enhance their vocabulary and mushroom their theory to learn literature.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be compulsory part of high school programs for example, working for charity, improving neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Most parents thoughtout the world normally focus on their children’s education. It is undeniable that knowledge is the most important thing for young people. However, there are additional factors in other dimensions that contribute to the development of their offspring into good people. This essay will explain why I think that schools should have unpaid community service as part of their programs.

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