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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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In some cultures, children are often told they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

nowadays in some countries, people taught their children that hard work can achieve their dreams. in this essay I am going to discuss the negative and positive sides of the matter. ,Also give my own opinion. to begin ,with although it is good to teach our kids to work hard in this life, it is also like many things have bad sides for sure. I think if they one day work hard and did not achieve anything it will give them disappointment and also delusion. we have to tell them if it does not happen what they want even with hard work it is okay. some times it works and other times it won't.

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Nowadays more and more older people who are looking for work have to compete with younger people for the same jobs. what problem does this cause ? what are the possible solutions ?

In recent decades, competition for the same positions has increased significantly between young people and an increasing number of older workers. The impending essay will discuss the issues of this statement and will elaborate on two possible remedies with a logical conclusion.

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Some people think children’s free time must include educational activities, otherwise they will waste their time. That is your opinion?

Nowadays, education plays a vital role in a student’s life since it secures a good future in the contemporary world. Someone believes that incorporating academic activities within children’s recreation is fundamental for not wasting time. I think that youths should not overburdened and this essay will explore my holistic view on the topic.

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Many students find it difficult to pay attention at school. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to solve this problem?

On numerous undergrads have some challenges to focus their attention to lessons at academy. Basic reason is that children’s bad behaviour and poor quality teaching and simple solution is that strict rules and interesting ways of teaching.

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The young should get advice from old people than young people. Do you agree or disagree?

The elderlies are much better people to ask a recommendations for juniors rather that youthful. I completely agree to this view and think that to ask advice from oldsters can be much beneficial for youngsters.

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Many students find it difficult to pay attention at school. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to solve this problem?

It is well known that a large number of students these days struggle to maintain interest in their studies at school. There are several reasons why it can be difficult to attend classes. They often say that most of the lessons are not interesting. In this context, it is important to understand these reasons and what solutions should be used to solve this problem.

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today is the best period of history. do you agree withe this? what other time would you like to live?

Nowadays, Olympic Games are regarded as an important cultural event. Every four years one city is chosen to hold this competition and it is thought of as a great honor. However, some people believe that the world would be better of without this. In this essay there will be brought up advantages as well as the disadvantages of said competition.

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In many countries, people like to eat a wider variety of food than can be grown in their local area. As a result, much of the food people eat today has to come from other regions. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh disadvantages?

There has been a discussion revolving around the issue of whether choosing food from a wider variety than the local area can provide has more positive than negative effects. Some people say that there are more advantages than disadvantages in eating food grown not only in the local area but also in other places, while others disagree and support only food grown in a specific area. In this essay, I will explain why I believe advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

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Some people think that students in single-sex schools perform better academically. Others, however, believe that mixed schools provide children with better social skills for adult life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the present age, whether single-sex schools provide more benefits than mixed schools has sparked much debate. Some people assert that students in single-sex schools have better academic achievements, whereas many others argue that mixed schools offer students better social skills for their future. Personally, I am in favour of the latter view. Convincing arguments can be made that mixed schools provide a more comprehensive learning environment for children. To start with, students studying at mixed schools have more chances to communicate with members of the opposite sex. In other words, children learn how to talk to the other gender at an early age; therefore, their social skills would certainly be fostered. Moreover, mixed schools give students opportunities to deal with conflicts with the other gender, which strengthens students’ problem-solving skills. For instance, when a boy has a conflict with a girl at school, both of them must learn how to cope. This lesson mus...

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Some believe that children should start school after the age of 7 while others think that school should begin from a very young age. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Recently, what is the best age that kids are enrolled in primary school that has become a heated controversial. Some individuals states that seven is the proper age for most of schoolchildren, while some opponents believe more younger age compared with seven. In my opinion, I partly agree that the standard age, seven, is a better choice.

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In some countries, many people think that is better to teach boys and girls in different institutions.

In some countries, many people think that it is better to teach boys and girls in different institutions. Besides, others believe that both genders profit from going to the same school. In this essay, I will explain both views and my opinion.

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People today are not as fit as they were in the past. What are the causes of this? What can governments do to deal with this issue?

It is believed that people are not healthy as they used to be in the past because of their hectic schedules and lifestyle. however, it can be solved by increasing physical activity and a healthy lifestyle.

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Some people believe that teenagers should focus on all school subjects while others think that they should concentrate on the subjects where they do the best or find the most interesting. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

PARENTS MUST NEED TO GIVE ENOUGH EDUCATION UNTIL THEIR CHILDREN TURN 18 YEARS OLD. BECAUSE OF, EVERYONE NEEDS TO SEE SCHOOL LIFE AND STUDY ON SOME LIFE SUBJECTS, IN BETWEEN, THEY SHOULD NEED TO CHECK WHICH IS THE BEST FIELD OR ACTIVITIES, WHOSE THEY WANT TO DO MORE AND MORE ON A DAILY BASIS.

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Employers should give their staff at least a 4-week holiday a year to make employees better at their jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It has been claimed that, in today's world, employees ought to receive more holidays and the optimal number should make up at least one month annually. Convinced that it would be beneficial for both employers and staff members I tend to agree with this statement.

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Memorising facts is the most important way to succeed in education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It has been argued that memorising data is a key method which helps to succeed in one's study. Although I admit that such a method is truly helpful, I am also concerned that the importance of understanding the learning material ought to not be dismissed as well, given its efficiency and merits for the future of the student.

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Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of house hold energy in many countries around the world. Why is this What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy?

There are many types of energy power produce sources available all over the world such as, fuel, windmills, water power, charcoal power and nuclear power. However, among those solar power is used as a power source the people globally. Because the initial cost for install the solar panel is expensive, there is no other payment that should make per month. Another point that can support this is other power suppliers are not freely available, sun rays come to the earth free of charge. Therefore, using solar power as a source of energy has pons and cons as well.

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Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time be used to do more school work. How do you think children should spend their free time? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Childhood time is the most important our growth phase, this time make children learn how to play, and learn new thing and this stage gives shape to our child in future. When they start school, the time has been divided to play and study. During this time some people believe that children should not be given too much free time, and they should do more school work and some think the other way. In my opinion, pupils should do more school work and this essay will explain it in more detail about it.

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overpopulation is the worlds most serious enviromental problem. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statment?

For the time being, remorsefully growth in population has caused us to confront crucial environmental issues.Although some people disagree with this notion , most crowd have concurred with this statement as a threat and I take side with them. In the ensuing ,paragraphs I will delve into this subject.

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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out

The importance of learning a mother's vocabulary is about equal to that of learning a foreign language. Students who exclusively learn their native tongue will have significant difficulties in the future. I concur with that assertion. Because speaking with people from other nations will be easier if you learn a foreign accent. The majority of books are also written in English rather than the regional tongue. English is therefore highly helpful for increasing knowledge as well.

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Some people think that subjects like arts, music, drama and creative writing contribute more towards a child's overall development. The school curriculum should provide more time for these subjects to be taught if the school wants all-round development of children.

In modern times, the issue of a child's overall development has become an essential part of everyday life.

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