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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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DATE- 26th nov 22 Scientists believe that eating fast-food is harmful to one’s health. Some people think that education can help them change that bad habit. Others, however argue that education does not work. Discuss both the views and give your opinion

Nowadays, education is crucial for everyone. All individual must get that because by the gain of educational knowledge one can easily survive in this modern world. Some researchers believe that consuming fast-food is injurious for health. However, some individual think that having an educational knowledge, one can change that bad habit. Moreover, some persons also comment that it does not work. In this essay I will discus both views and give my opinion in conclusion.

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we really do not need. Others says that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve over lives. Which view point do you agree with? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this modern era, advertising has become popular among individuals because by the help of these advertisement people can know about surroundings and also gain knowledge about any products or things as well. I partially agree with both views and I will give my opinion in conclusion.

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In order to study at university, students are required to pay expensive tution fees. Not all students can afford them, so some people think that university education should be free for everyone. Do you agree or disagree with this?

Going to university has become really expensive, students who want to attend higher education need to pay high tuition fees. These taxes, however, are unaffordable for many, thus people believe that university education should be free. I agree with this opinion because I believe that university should be a opportunity for everyone without any difference in their social status.

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Some people say that now is the best time in history to be living. What is your opinion about this?

Nowadays,due to technological advancements and various kinds of facilities ,individuals believe that this contemporary era is the best time in history to life.I profoundly agree with this view , and this essay will support my ideology before a logical conclusion is drawn.

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Experts say older people were happier and healthier in the past because they did more excercise and spend more time with their family and friends whereas now many suffer loneliness and health problems.What are the causes o this and what are some solutions

In today's modern society and past face world, more people have less time to enjoy life with their families which leads to loneliness and increasing comorbidities. In other's opinion in the past older people spends adequate time with their family and acquaintance which made them happier and in good shape. There are various reasons for this comparison in the past and the current situation which I would be discussing.

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Some people believe that the difference between the lowest paid jobs and the highest paid jobs should be reduced. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The social disparity is one of many problems caused by an unideal economic state where income inequality happened. People assume that the difference between the least paid and the most paid should be decreased. However, is it necessary to taper off the gap? The notion somehow sounds unwise and I disagree with it.

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Some people rely too much on doctors instead of taking care of their own health. They think all health problems can just by ‘fixed’ by visiting doctors. What problems could this approach to healthcare cause and how might they be solved?

People too trust doctors while they do not think about their own health. Community are sure that issues can be tackled by asking medicine workers. How such troubles can influence healthcare and which way could help fix them?

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For many young people today, shopping is their favourite free time activity. Why do you think this has happened? Should young people be encouraged to do different activities in their free time?

Nowadays, we can't deny that shopping has become one of the most popular activities for the teenage group. We can see many groups of young people seeking new products in different areas or methods such as malls, markets, or online applications. Although, there are several reasons which cause this to happen which will be provided in the following paragraph.

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Some people think that university students should pay all the expenses for their studies because a university education only benefits students themselves and not a society as a whole discuss both persepctives and give your opinion ?

Nowadays, studying in universities costs you handsome money, apart from that one may need to spend funds on other extra charges too. In our society, a number of people are in favour that college attendees should manage their costs of education by themselves, because, they believe that students are only adding value to themselves, not to society. As per my point of view, I believe the opposite, which I am going to discuss in the essay.

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Some people say that now is the best time in history to be living. What is your opinion about this?

Nowadays,due to technological advancements and various kinds of facilities ,human beings believe that this contemporary era is the best time in history to live.I profoundly agree with this view , and this essay will support my ideology before a logical conclusion is drawn.

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More and more people are buying through the online shopping in the last decade.. Do you think, it is positive or negative development.

Over the 10 years, there has been great increase in number of people who are purchasing products via online shopping. From my point of view, shopping online is positive development.

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More and more people are buying through the online shopping in last decade. Do you think, it is positive or negative development

In our modern life a majorities pf humans prefer to buying something by the online market. From my point of view, this way is very beneficial for individual because when people purchase by the internet, they can save their time. In this eassy, I will examine both negative and positive of this can controversial issue.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Some specialists think that it is preferable for child studying a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. The main merits of this trend are children have opportunities educated easier due to their age, but it invites some demerits as well like it brings a big load on their academic performance. In my opinion, the pros of learning a non-native language at grade school outweigh the cons. This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of learning foreign language at primary school rather than secondary and provide a logical conclusion.

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Many people think that come naturally good leaderships and many people think to get leadership to learn skill. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Having a loud and clear voice and being organized are important leadership characteristics. Before explaining about these, leadership means the action of leading a group of people.

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In the past, people stored knowledge in books. Nowadays people store knowledge on the internet. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In this day and age, more and more people opt for obtaining knowledge on the internet instead of storing knowledge in books. This has many merits and demerits. I am firmly convinced that using the internet to access knowledge has more merits than demerits.

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Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks. Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?

People from different age groups have been showing an inclination toward using social networking sites while this kind of communication causes many dangers. While using social media can cause in being exposed to inappropriate content, it can be useful if used carefully.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or book because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In upcoming days no one will purchase hardcopy of newspapers or even book due to they easily get read on an internet without spending a money. I largely disagree with given notion. This essay shall enlight on certain eye heath issue casusee from online resources and not fully reliable on internet for all time.

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PLASTIC BAGS, PLASTIC BOTTLES AND PLASTIC PACKAGING ARE BAD FOR THE ENVIRONMENT. WHAT DAMAGE DOES PLASTIC DO TO ENVIRONMENT? WHAT CAN BE DONE BY GOVERNMENTS AND INDIVIDUALS TO SOLVE THIS PROBLEM?

It is true that nowadays people keep push themselves to get a higher success and fulfil the dreams. In this journey different individuals face various problems and learn number of lessons from their own experiences. I strongly agree with the given statement and I prove my statement with some concrete examples.

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With a growing world population one of the most pressing issue is that of feeding such a large number of people. Some people think that GM foods offer a viable solution to this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

World is facing the problem of overpopulation and giving foods to these people is crucial matter nowadays. As with the increase in growth rate of people the difficulty in feeding them also arises so, according to narrative of some individuals genetically modified foods give an answer to all these issues. I partially agree with the given statement because this is the need of the time to shift towards a viable solution of this problem.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Self-confidence is the most important factor for success in school or at work. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

All people are made perfect by God . Persons are unique perfect creatures in the world. All people have alternative senses and l assume most people are distinctive eat others and their characters are standing . Can also , we can know how is the person with their character . Some people are serious, others confident and some people are shy . I assume all people use crucial characters only in apropos ways . They have different dispositions. One of them, most people have confidence and all people believe in themselves. I assume people's powerless aspect is their confidence and most people are confident in themselves , they achieve a lot of success other people are thinking to believe other people than themselves moreover they believe their all work for other people . I assume people do not have confidence in themselves, they will be failer and never achieve success . I think think that confidence is the key to success and many people achieve disconsolate rewards and its...

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