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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, children are expected to compete in all aspects of life. However, imbibing the youths with a sense of compassion is equally necessary. Both views have been discussed in the following paragraphs below.

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It is often said that retirement is the happiest time of a person's life how far do you agree with this view

In general, our world population is aging consistently and the concern about retired generation is rasing noticeably nowadays. It is said that retirement is the happiest time of one's life. But it seems to me that is not definitely a confirmative statement because there are still many situations that we need to look deeply into it to confirm the above comment.

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Some people say that increasing prices of petrol is the best way to reduce traffic jams and pollution. Do you agree or disagree?

The importance of minimise carbon emission for envionment was always debatable now has become more controversial. Many people claim that high prices of petrol will reduce traffic and its pollutions while others reject this notion. In my opinion, the latter preposition appears more rational and in this piece of essay. I will elaborate the reason and thus lead to logical conclusion.

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Some teachers think that changing subjects with every lesson will help their students focus more. However, other teachers think that offering their students several lessons on the same subject in a row will help them focus more. Which opinion do you think is better?

Teaching is for sure not an easy task at all, it takes hard labour and good knowledge to transfer the learning among the students. The teaching method is not rocket science which needs to be similar for all, it may vary from teacher to teacher as well as the grasping quality of the pupils is not the same also. So we can not actually depict which would be the best method to make the students focus more.

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Topic: Nowadays more and more people consume fast food on a regular basis. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

In this modern era,most people prefer to have fast food over homemade items in day-to-day life. Eventually, this bad trend might cause serious illnesses, obesity and even the sudden death of a person. This essay will discuss all possible merits and demerits of consuming restaurant food.

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Many people believe that the increased presence of violence in films and television these days in responsible for the rising incidents of violent crimes among youths in society. They argued that government have a duty to control the media so as to reduce this phenomenon. Do you agree with this argument?

While community is divided into two genders such as female and male, they tend to have own weeknesses, drawbacks and advantages. There are several types of requirements which lead to work in specific jobs such as intellect, physical power and mentality. I partly agree with this statement.

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Do you believe that professional athletes make good role models for young people?

Expert sportspersons, Who play sports very well, are nice persons for people, that are growing up, to follow. While I agree that people should learn from them, I believe that they have something we ought not to study.

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Unemployment remains the biggest challenge for school leavers. To what extent do you agree? What other challenges do young people face today?

n the present age, unemployment continues to be a huge challenge for school leavers. I believe that this is true in the modern day economy with companies requiring work experience from young people and the government trying to keep an unemployment rate. However, unemployment is not the only difficulty that youth faces today.

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Nowadays online shopping is extremely popular. Discuss the impact of it on the environment and on people who lost their jobs because of it. These days Internet shopping is increasing getting popular. Discuss the impact on climate and on the individual who lost their employment?

Nowadays, people are more willing to shop online than going to the store. This particular change has an impact on the environment and society. I am going to illustrate my point of view below.

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some people say History is one of the most important subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is often argued that the story about the ancient times plays a crucial role in education. However, some folks opined that nowadays, with the rapid of technological growth, STEM (Science, Technology, Engineering, and Mathematics) fields are the most important and for some extent, I agree with this stance.

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There are many inventions in human history, but some people think that the most important invention is the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is known that multinational events that bring together people of different nationalities and cultures include sports, cultural, business events, various types of entertainment and more. One way or another, the World Cup should not be counted the most unifying element that connects countries and continents. In my opinion, the superlative in graduation is calculated according to the more significant indicators.

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History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

There has been a contentious topic about whether history or subjects that relate to science and technology are more important in the present world. In this essay, I will first discuss both camps before giving my own opinion.

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Some peope believe that nowadyas we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

We live in an era with advanced technology, which gives people various possibilities. Countries and world, in general, are developing and society is able to experience more than in the past, I have no doubts. Is it too much to handle? I would like to present my point of view on this topic.

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Some people believe that now a days we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

It is often thought that at present a person has various options to choose. In my opinion, I agree that indivuduals have choices in their student life as well as in job sector. However, I also believe that so many varieties of selection make people confuse to take the proper decision.

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All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people are of the view that automobiles that use non-renewable energy should be prohibited and strictly banned from operating, instead, an electric car should be used. I concur with this viewpoint because firstly, environmental pollution will be reduced and, secondly, climate change will be curbed.

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We live in cities or towns which have museums displaying historical and cultural importance, but people do not visit them. What are the reasons？How important are those museums to our society?

There are many historical and cultural importance displayed in museums. These exhibitions are essential to us and allow individuals to learn human history and acquire valuable knowledge from them. However, only a few people visit there. In my opinion, the phenomenon is caused by individuals’ concentration on their work.

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Do you agree or disagree?: "Science is better than Religion".

Dear sir/mam, I have received multiple tickets at Kinght St/ E 28th Ave. Actually, at my last job all lights were working. Usually I drive my truck during the day and under 160kms therefore accidentally I missed to check box lights and I got lighting tickets. This happened When I tried to put a ramp after I finished my job I broke a light wire. I found there was one wire broken underneath the box during the ramp insert. I have fixed it now. Another ticket I fined for improper display of plate but I apologize for that but honestly I really was not aware that I cannot put plate with Zip tie cables. I have fixed it with bolts now. Moreover, I also got a ticket for not displaying NSC name but I am displaying my company name on both sides of my vehicle and I was not aware that my name should be on the vehicle if NSC is on my name. Now, I have put my NSC name on both sides of the vehicle. I respect the officer and accept the tickets I know I broke some motor vehicle laws but In Augus...

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

It is true that the development of agriculture has had significant advances in many countries all over the world but there are several people who are facing famine day by day. In general, there are various solutions to tackle this problem, and one of the ways is organizing more volunteering campaigns to share food for starving people and also providing modern agriculture technology for poor countries.

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Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games. What are the negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?

These days, individuals have unlimited access to computers all around the world and a number of minors play games on a daily basis. In my point of view, it could have bad effects on children in the future. This essay will examine the negative impacts of playing computer games and possible solutions of this problem.

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Many people think that it is unnecessary to teach children handwriting skills in this technology age. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, during the innovative era, many people argue that teaching handwriting skills to children is completely unnecessary. I completely disagree with the notion and I would like to discuss the case in the following paragraphs.

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