IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5. Page 754

IELTS Writing Samples Band 5.5

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Some people believe that women should play an equal role as men in a country's police force or military force. such as the army, while others think women are not suitable for these kinds of jobs. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In this contampory era, women are considered as equal to men. Here the debate is about some group of people think that every women have a right to work in defence sector as equal to men ; however, others are considered that women are not suitable for it. I side with both statements and it will be discuss in ensuing paragraphs.

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Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the words, with serious results for the environment. What do you think can be done to solve this problem? Support your opinion with reason and examples from your own knowledge and experience?

In the last few decades, there has been a significant rise in deforestration across the globe. It, thus, becomes necessary for individuals to tackle multiple problems. Furthermore, I will explain why it has caused a plethora of issues in the recent past.

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Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games Outweigh the benefits?

In the recent computer era, the number of people who play online games has been increasing rapidly. In accordance with the trend, there has been continous debate whether or not the phenomenon is beneficial for men and women who spend time on it or, on the contrary, it is harmful for them. As such, I would like to list some expamples of advantages and disadvantages of playing online games and finally state my opinion that the drawbacks account more than the benefits.

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In some societies, the number of crimes committed by teenagers is growing. Some people think that regardless of age, teenagers who commit major crimes should recieve adult punishment. To what extent do you agree?

It is true that the crime rate is increasing among teenagers. While the government is trying to prevent such offense, many people believe that youth should be punished like adults. I strongly agree with the idea that teenagers must be punished for their offense. I will support this view with argument in the following paragraphs.

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Some believe that money for education should mainly be spent on better computers while others believe it would be better spent on teachers. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In today's world, parents are facing dilemma currently. There is much debate over whether money should be spent on better computers or teachers for education. Although, latest model computers assistant to increase success rate, ı strongly believe that teachers are more significant than the other thing such as computer beacuse almost every pupil takes their teachers as a role-model.

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Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some would argue that there should be severe regulations about noise pollution, while others say that they must be allowed to make the noise they desired. While some poeple believe they have the right to make strong sounds as much as they want, I believe there should be stronger regulations to monitor the amount of noise people are producing.

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Psychological illnesses may not be as obvious as physical disabilities or illnesses, nevertheless they are just as disabling in their own way. Society, however, is more accepting of those with physical than psychological illness or disabilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree

In recent times, psychological illnesses have shown exponential growth in our society. They may not be directly visible, but are as damaging as any other disablement. Over a period of time, people with physical disabilities have still found acceptance, however, this is not the case with someone who have psychological disabilities. This essay will establish that people with mental illness are being discriminated at professional and personal front.

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Some cities create housing areas by providing taller buildings. Others create housing by building houses on a wider area of land. What solution is better?

The world is changing drastically with the development of infrastructure and technology, so developing and developed countries expand their construction building in vast areas. However, the construction is done in cities creating houses according to the flats method and building houses to spread around the land. I believe, building houses in taller buildings is the best solution for various factors such as environmental preservation and economic growth. The following essay will explain the aforementioned views with examples.

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Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and wether they are married or single some people say that this information may be relavant and useful.Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your openion.

Some human resource hiring personnel inquire about personal data of job seekers and believe that this information is worth and useful for selections and others disagree for the same. I believe that asking personal information will have both positive and negative impacts on the selection process and this should only be useful and relavant for highly demanded jobs. My openion on this matter is elaborated below.

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Some people argue that the government should spend money only on medical care and education but not on theaters or sports stadiums. Do you agree or disagree?

There are controversial perspectives heating up a debate over whether the government should use the national budget for the schooling and medical system. While some claim that it is necessary for citizens to do so, the opposite makes a statement that the authorities also should invest money in the recreational industry.

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In the future, it may be scientifically possible for people to live for 150 years. This could be good for individuals but it may have negative consequences for society. What are the benefits and risks of people living to 150

Nowadays, people become older and older. Maybe in the future with the use of modern technology is it even possible to become 150 years old. Of course did can be very interesting for a singular person to become that old. With everyone becoming older that will be having an impact on the world.

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the preventation of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this.

In the modern world, ordinary people, criminals, and detectives are becoming interesting and genius persons. Everyone attracts to a side, depending on their point of view. The readers are absorbed in a fancy book about them, and the watchers drown in a dramatic TV series about a crime or a detective story. By the way, I am strongly influenced by these types of stories and follow them.

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Lack of practical skills is the main reason for unemployment among youth. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A group of people opine that practical knowledge is the only cause for lacking jobs among the ages between 18-25 years. I completely disagree with this proposition and will represent relevant points along with precise examples and back up my view.

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Subjects like arts, music and drama are more important than other subjects and therefore should be given more time in the calendar. Do you agree or disagree?

I think that for some people subjects arts, music and drama are more important, therefore they want to pay attention only to that, and some people disagree with this opinion. In this essay, I want to discuss and explain my point of view.

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Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?

In my opinion, I absolutely disagree with this point of view. With the development of society, more and more people prefer to read news on the Internet. I believe that reading news on the internet is still the most important source of news, even more so than newspapers.

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Some people say that the fast food industry has made a negative effect on health, the environment, and family eating habits. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons with relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The food industry is one of the largest field in business. Today a lot of consumers are buying and eating "fast food", thus, effect on climate change of environment. I totally agree that fast food have negative effect on Earth. For example, the fast food including recipe such as fried potato and slices of beef or pork between toasted bread, futhermore, it is very harmful for human health because all of these food hardly digestion in stoma.

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Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

We can broadly categorise people into two main segments: the first segment of people are comfortable with living in the same place, eating the same types of food, and having a career that involves pretty much doing the same thing and taking almost no risks, while others are completely the opposite who find the meaning of life through risks and challenges and are not afraid of trying new things. Personally, I like to take risks, face challenges and enjoy the diversity of the world through travelling and favour the second group of people.

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Some people argue that the government should spend money only on medical care and education but not on theatres or sports stadiums. Do you agree or disagree

There are controversial perspectives heating up a debate over whether the authority should invest money only on the medical system and schooling. While some claim that it is necessary for governor to fund the cost of the health care system and education, the opposite makes a statement that the authority had better not spend money on theatres or sports stadiums. While each has its own perks, I would contend that it is optimal to combine both mentioned factors.

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Topic: It is better for college students to live far away from home than live at home with their parents . Do you agree or disagree .

College age is the most effective age for an individual. In this period of three to four years students learn the real meaning of life and how to be independent, what career to choose, how money is earned and how to deal with life. In my ,opinion I agree with this passage.

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Today, many people do not know their neighbors in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?

In major cities around the world, people are living in apartments due to limited space and high population. Due to the hectic lifestyle, people do not have time to get to know their neighbours. This essay will discuss the problems it could cause among people and offer possible solutions.

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