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IELTS Writing Samples Band 5

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays, the internet has become a part of human life. People use the internet to support their activities, well as school, work, sport, or even shopping. It is thought by some people that using the internet in the daily basis can simplify an activity. Over the disadvantages, the internet has more advantages that make people do anything through the internet without hesitate.

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Some people say that giving a smaller amount of money weekly to children will help them become more capable as they grow older.

Caregivers share the common ground when it comes to childcare activities. In this regard, showing the correct ropes for a growing child to become a shining star in life has been a monopoly for years. Giving weekly pocket money for their wards seem to be a helpful method to make them grow as more competent individuals, according to some parents. While this practice is being beneficial to a certain extent, I also believe it has its own drawbacks.

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Memorization of information by frequent repetition (rote learning) plays a role in most education systems. Do the advantages of this method of learning outweigh its disadvantages?

Now a days, education is become more and more harder than past.The method of memorising of details by using frequent repetition plays a major role in most education system. So its usefullness and limitation describe further.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

The rapid growth and penetration of technology in society has brought substantial changes in human behavior. Its argued that in future brick and mortar stores will be closed due to electronic purchasing. However, this essay doesn’t buy this viewpoint and suggest alternative. This essay will discuss how traditional outlets will survive and Why people are not going to abandon them in future.

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Nowadays, technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing. In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

It is believed that people are monitored of what they are pursuing and doing with the use of technology and they don't even notice that it's happening and by whom they are being monitored. While technology has it's advantage and potential of doing any thing from monitoring to tagging these advantages far outweigh the disadvantages if used ethically.

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Today, the quality of life in large cities is decreasing. Discuss the causes and solutions

Metropolitan cities have advanced facilities as compared to the smaller, that’s why the people are trying to move there to avail better facilities. Different people are aiming to settle in large cities due to different needs and wants, which may be education, better opportunities or luxuries, due to which the population in big cities is increasing day by day. The increasing population is putting an additional burden in each sector which includes but not limited to academic institutes, hospitals, roads and municipality, accommodation and other services.

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Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Some people believe that parents of children who attend private schools

Some people believe that parents of children who attend private schools should not need to contribute to state schools through taxes. Personally, I completely disagree with this view. For a variety of reasons, it would be wrong to reduce taxes for families who pay for private education. Firstly, it would be difficult to calculate the correct amount of tax reduction for these families, and staff would be required to manage this complex process. Secondly, we all pay a certain amount of tax for public services that we may not use. For example, most people are fortunate enough not to have to call the police or fire brigade at any time in their lives, but they would not expect a tax reduction for this. Finally, if wealthy families were given a tax discount for sending their children to private schools, we might have a situation where poorer people pay higher taxes than the rich. In my opinion, we should all be happy to pay our share of the money that supports public schools...

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It is important to give children the opportunity to continue independently and make decisions at an early age. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Living in the 21st century has made it imperative for children to be given the liberty to live freely and make life choices at an early age. From my perspective, I partly agree due to the following reasons that will be discussed in this essay.

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The gas and oil are gain around the world by people and people used to the fuel due to all of them have luxurious

The gas and oil are gaining around the world by people and people used to the fuel due to all of them have luxurious, many people believe that we must be researching to other places for augmenting fuel. I can neither completely agree nor disagree with this statement. Discuss both views and give your opinion, many people think that it is, so, as far as I am concerned, we used to decrease fuel in us .

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Nowadays some professionals such as doctors, lawyers and engineers are paid much higher than ordinary workers. What do you think of this trend? Are there any jobs which you think should offer higher salaries?

t is irrefutable that doctors, lawyers and engineers are paid much higher than ordinary workers. In the following paragraphs, I shall discuss this issue at length and also suggest some other occupations, which deserve higher salaries. To begin with, professions, such as medical, engineering and law, require far more years of study than what ordinary workers have to do. For example, for a basic M.B:B.S degree, more than 5 years of study is required, and after that to specialize in any specific field another three to five years are required. A person with a simple M.B:B.S degree does not earn all that high. Similar is the case with engineering and law professions. They have to undergo many years of struggle and training to finally reach their telephone-figure salaries. Secondly, it requires a lot of financial input to attain these degrees. Many students have to take loans to study, which they have to repay later on. They may remain in debt for many years while th...

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Some people think that watching sport is a waste of leisure time. Do you agree or disagree?

In this agile world it is hard to get some leisure time, should an individual spend precious, hard earned free time in watching sport has sparked a series of heated arguments between critics and experts. However, in my opinion I strongly believe that watching sport is far better than watching daily soaps and cartoons if one decides to spend their leisure time in front of the television. In this essay, I will provide illustrations from The Times Newspaper and Government of USA.

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Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Do this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?

It is an undeniable fact that majority of people nowadays work beyond duty hours, devoting less time for recreational activities. In my opinion, I think that working for longer hours without taking enough break brings about more problems for individuals compared to any advantages it might bring.

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Today more people are overweight than ever before. What in your opinion are the primary causes of this? What measures can be taken to overcome this epidemic.

It is fact that numerous of masses are overweight as compare to the past. In my opinion, this is happening owing to the lack of exercises and unhealthy food choices. However, although overweight is big issue of today's society but it can be solved by aware the people about healthy lifestyle as well as importance of body workout.

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Traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies and factories and their employees to the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is common belief that there are those who protest relocation of big-size companies, factories as well as their staffs to rural areas. Yet, I firmly believe that this initiative is considered as a solution to traffic congestion and a shortage of accommodation. And this essay will address and enlist the following approaches.

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Some people think that as long as these professional sportsmen and sportswomen are good players, their behaviour on and off playing fields are not important. Do you agree or disagree?

Famous athletes who are talented in their areas have a strong influence on the public especially the younger generation. Therefore, I disagree with the idea that the behaviour of sports players is not important and I believe that they should be self-disciplined both in and outside the game.

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Being a celebrity such as a famous film star or sports personality brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

As they say, nothing comes free. Everything we do there is always strings attached with it, pros and cons, boon or bane and advantages or disadvantages are the kind of variables that one has to always coup with. Indeed it is true that being a celebrity is not easy by any means, living always in a limelight doesn’t mean happiness, sometimes, it becomes unbearable, tormenting and tiresome. All the media, press and fans follow you 24/7. The concepts of privacy and personal vanish away from one’s life, as soon as one becomes a celebrity. Workload and lack of time for friends and family are common phenomenons in a celebrity’s life.

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Schooling is no more necessary, since more and more information are accessible on the Internet, and student can study just as well at home. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

Schools are important part of our life, however, the data and information scattered all over the internet for free, is giving many learners an option to choose online education over schools. Certainly, I do not agree with this new trend of learning at home because it will deprive the children from facing the real competitions and desciplined lifestyle. Furthermore, this essay will discuss my reasons of disagreement.

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Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Among most of us assume that we have to live with climate changes rather than avoiding it. In my opinion, we cannot hide from the unexpected changes by nature.

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The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

In the modern era, technology has been excelled. Gone are the days when war used to happen face to face. Nuclear advancement is on its pinnacle. Countries fear with each other due to nuclear ammunition which is the cause of global peace nowadays. Moreover, nuclear technology is already being used in other sectors as well. Fir instance, it is being used in power sector to provide economical energy in every household. Furthermore, it is environment friendly for the society as well.

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Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Noise pollution is increasing globally. Many people argues that noise should be overcome by strict rules and regulations.However,other thinks that they should have the right to make noise as much as they want. I strongly opine that noise pollution causes many hurdles in daily life activities but this essay will discuss both the views equally.

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