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IELTS Writing Samples Band 6.5

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Advertisements of products can create interest and desire to buy if these products are new and uncommon. However,if people had seen these advertisements several times,they lost interest. In my point of view, although buyers want to buy things,which are uncommon and advertised by hugely popular celebrities,they are not necessary or unusable.

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lack of fresh water is becoming a global issue of increasing importance. What problems does this shortage cause? What measures could be taken to overcome these problems?

In this era, the scarcity of sustainable potable water has become a main issue around the world, which can create serious concerns for various advanced countries. This essay explores the problems arising from the shortage of drinkable water and proposes measures to mitigate these issues.

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The best way to solve environmental problems would be for the current generation to accept a simpler way of life for the sake of the next generation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some claim that environmental issues could be best remedied by people forgoing the convenience they enjoy today for those who come after them. This view is well-intentioned, yet l somewhat disagree.

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Lack of fresh water is becoming a global issue of increasing importance. What problems does this shortage cause? what measures could be taken to overcome these problems

In the digital era, from pole to pole, the inadequacy of clean water is becoming a common problem of enhancing significance. For all that, around seventy per cent of the earth is covered with rain, but only fifteen per cent of that is usable. There are many possible solutions to this problem, which will be discussed in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Some people say that art subjects such as painting or drawing should not be made compulsory for high school students. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The debate over whether art subjects like painting and drawing should be compulsory for high school students continues to elicit diverse opinions. While some argue these subjects are non-essential and should remain optional, I strongly disagree and believe that art subjects should be mandatory due to their broader educational and personal benefits.

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Some people say that all popular TV entertainment programmes should aim to educate viewers about important social issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, TV programs have played an important role in our society. A part of the population has the opinion that famous TV leisure programs should be to educate people about important social problems. I totally agree with this statement, which will be described in the following paragraph before the conclusion is reached.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In contemporary times, merchants usually emphasise that their goods are the newest. In this essay, I think this measure is because it can increase the chances of grasping the attention of customers. However, this essay believes that this phenomenon will cause some vision fatigue problems, thereby resulting in customers losing their interest.

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Some people believe that children who commit crimes should be punished. Others think the parents should be punished instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People’s opinions differ as to whether or not parents should be given punishment in cases where their children commit crimes. While there are a few arguments supporting the view that penalties for parents are necessary, I still believe that punishing children themselves and rehabilitating them is a more effective way.

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Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Food is an essential part of life and everyone running for this. In this modern era, most people are busy and do not have enough time for food cooking so, they prefer to eat street and restaurant food. while there are so many individuals who prefer to prepare and eat food at home. I prefer to eat home food only because outside food is expensive and has less nutritional value. This paragraph will be enunciate why home food is better than the other food.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmers (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, many individuals contend that high school programmers should have more unpaid community service, and they also think it has to be an inevitable part of educational systems. I strongly advocate for that idea owing to the variety of its benefits for students.

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Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of people's lives, while some think that adulthood brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibility. In people's lives happiness really depends on the situation of the people's life. In this essay, we will discuss both sides of life with examples and valid evidence.

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The government should spend money in promoting sport and art in school, rather than sponsoring sports and art events in communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The concept of boosting sport and art in school instead of sponsoring their events in society is a controversial tissue, in this essay, I shall elaborate on , as well as I shall reveal my point of view.

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Some people feel that it is always wrong to keep animals in captivity, for instance in zoos. Other people say that there are benefits for the animals and for humans.

Some people argue that animals should be kept in captivity such as in zoos to protect both animals and humans from any dangers, while others think that it is generally incorrect to keep animals in captivity. In this essay, I will explore the pros and cons of keeping creatures in prison and try to draw some conclusions.

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Most Countries allow 18 year olds to start driving a car. Some say it is good to allow it at this age, while others think that the age to start driving should be at least 25. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Driving a car at the age of 18 can be unacceptable behaviour for some people, saying it should be at least 25, while others think it is okay to drive a car at that age, we will discuss both aspects in this essay.

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Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world, with serious results for the enviroment. What do you think can be done to solve this problem?

It is true that forest clearance done by human acitivity is occuring in several parts of the the earth with crucial consequences for the environment. In my perspective, there are various ways to solve or at least mitigate this issue.

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An increasing number of 18-year-olds are moving out of their parents' homes so they can live on their own after finishing high school. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

Nowadays, teenagers tend to leave their parental house once they become of age. This matter is dramatically increasing due to their desire not to be interfered with by anyone in their own lives. This common behaviour has its own pros and cons, which I will discuss from each perspective in this essay.

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The television is good for you. Discuss the advantage and disadvantage of watching television. Give reason for your answer and include any relevant example from your experience.

People have different views about the benefits and drawbacks of watching TV. While there are some drawbacks to watching television, I believe that watching shows usually has more positive effects.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is sometimes argued that with the help of music, we can bring people from different nations and ages together. I agree with this notion to some extent. The word "music" is a general term that refers to any kind of music. While there are a plethora of songs that have the potential to bring all individuals together, there are some kinds of music that not only cannot bring people together but also can separate them.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.

There is a common belief that people are attracted to buy certain products due to the advertisements, while many disagree as promotion campaigns cannot capture the audiences’ attention anymore. This essay will discuss both arguments before concluding that I am in favour of the former.

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Atomic energy is becoming more and more popular energy source. However, some people argue that nuclear power puts life on the Earth to danger. What is your opinion?

One of the new and popular sources of energy is Atomic source. Atomic energy can put all the countries in danger. This essay totally agrees with this idea because nuclear power can lead to serious environmental problems and can cause the killing of the citizens.

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