IELTS Writing Samples Band 6.5. Page 220

IELTS Writing Samples Band 6.5

6.5

band

In today's world many people own a smartphone. Do you think the advantage o owning a smartphone outweight the disadvantage?

Mobile phones are increasingly essential for people's regular life so it is understandable that many citizens own a mobile phone. This writer argues that the benefits of helping people to connect to each other and entertainment outweigh the drawbacks of addiction.

6.5

band

People are now surrounded by advertising. This both affects what people think is important and has a negative impact on people's life. What extend do you agree or disagree?

There are many types of advertisements and marketing creations that innovate the company or achieve success. All of these are undoubtedly the intellectual abilities of the advertisers. Behind all these benefits for companies, there are still negative sides for people living in such an atmosphere. The consequences of such influential marketing methods can lead to mental damage to a person. I believe that this won't have an extremely detrimental effect on people's well-being.

6.5

band

In today's world many people own a smartphone. Do you think the advantages of owning a smartphone outweigh the disvantages?

In this digital era, the majority of individuals have their own mobile or smartphone in their pocket. The writer believes that the benefits of convenience and entertainment outweigh the drawbacks of causing mental problems.

6.5

band

In today's world many people own a smartphone. Do you think the advantages of owning a smartphone outweigh the disadvantages?

In modern society, with the development of technology, everyone has a smartphone of their own and this is becoming one of the recurring arguments. This writer believes that the benefits of easier connection with each other and entertainment outweigh the drawbacks of health issues.

6.5

band

In today's world many people own a smartphone. Do you think the advantages of owning a smartphone outweigh the disadvantages?

Whether in this modern globe, each person should possess a mobile phone is a recurring argument. The writer contends that the benefits of connecting humans and exploring knowledge outweigh the drawbacks of personal harassment and children can approach bad information.

6.5

band

Public transportation is a great way to travel, particularly within a metropolis. The metro is the most convenient way to get around a city. Do you agree or disagree?

Public transportation is a crucial element to be established effectively in a modern city. Among the various options available, rail-based systems, such as the metro, are often the preferred mode of travel. It is agreed that the metro is the most convenient way to get around a city. This essay will explore this argument by analyzing the accessibility and the cost-effectiveness that the metro provides.

6.5

band

In some countries, citizens must pay a lot of money in taxes, but education and healthcare are free. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages

In some countries, study and healthcare are free for citizens, nevertheless, they have to pay a lot of money in taxes. Though it has some disadvantages, its advantages are noticeable.

6.5

band

𝙈𝙤𝙧𝙚 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙢𝙤𝙧𝙚 𝙨𝙩𝙪𝙙𝙚𝙣𝙩𝙨 𝙖𝙧𝙚 𝙘𝙝𝙤𝙤𝙨𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙩𝙤 𝙨𝙩𝙪𝙙𝙮 𝙖𝙩 𝙘𝙤𝙡𝙡𝙚𝙜𝙚𝙨 𝙖𝙣𝙙 𝙪𝙣𝙞𝙫𝙚𝙧𝙨𝙞𝙩𝙞𝙚𝙨 𝙞𝙣 𝙖 𝙛𝙤𝙧𝙚𝙞𝙜𝙣 𝙘𝙤𝙪𝙣𝙩𝙧𝙮. 𝘿𝙤 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙗𝙚𝙣𝙚𝙛𝙞𝙩𝙨 𝙤𝙛 𝙨𝙩𝙪𝙙𝙮𝙞𝙣𝙜 𝙖𝙗𝙧𝙤𝙖𝙙 𝙤𝙪𝙩𝙬𝙚𝙞𝙜𝙝 𝙩𝙝𝙚 𝙙𝙧𝙖𝙬𝙗𝙖𝙘𝙠𝙨❓

In an era of burgeoning international education, the allure of studying abroad is undeniable. This phenomenon begs the question: do the advantages of pursuing higher education overseas eclipse the potential downsides?

6.5

band

The most importaint aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Throughout human history, science and technology have served as a significant catalyst for the advancement of humankind. However, while the essence of the field of science is to innovate ways to make burdensome tasks easier and more efficient, there have been many occurrences when scientists practiced their occupation with the wrong motives in mind, such as to gain money, fame, and other superficial things. This essay will further discuss the notion of what the essential purpose of science should be.

6.5

band

today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for the locals?

In recent years, tourism has contributed to some harder tourist attractions such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. This trend is beneficial for those areas exposing their unique attractions and boosting the level of tourist development. While the drawbacks of damaging the natural habitats and leading to environmental pollution. This essay will expound on both views and analyse these further.

6.5

band

Directors and leaders of organizations are often older people. Some people say that it is better to have young people as leaders. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days an increasing number of elders run businesses, whereas not many youngsters can be noticed as the leaders of different companies. It's argued that it is beneficial for a society to provide leading positions to a younger generation, as they are more productive and creative. I fully agree with this statement, and this essay will explain why.

6.5

band

Online education is becoming increasingly popular. Many university students are choosing to study online instead of face to face. Do the advantages of distance education outwiegh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, online classes are one of the most famous forms of education. Therefore, many graduate students prefer to study online instead of attending classes. In my opinion, I fully agree with this statement. This essay will discuss the arguments supporting the main advantages and disadvantages.

6.5

band

University students must pay all tuition fees, because it benefits mostly them individually, rather than the society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree?

In the ongoing discourse surrounding the funding of higher education, the question of whether university students should solely bear the financial responsibility of tuition fees has sparked considerable debate. Some argue that students should individually shoulder these costs, given that the benefits primarily accrue to them. This essay will argue in favor of this perspective, contending that higher education is fundamentally an individual investment rather than a societal obligation.

6.5

band

At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Nowadays, many countries have more young adults than older people. I believe that countries with more young people have more advantages than those that have more older people.

6.5

band

Some people think that cinemas will one day close due to the popularity of online streaming services for films and series. Do you agree or disagree?

In this present world, online streaming services have become prevalent in public. Some individuals claim that cinemas will eventually be replaced by these streaming services while others believe cinemas are irreplaceable. In my opinion, I firmly agree that cinemas have their unique values and can not be replaced.

6.5

band

Some people claim that not enough waste from homes is recycled. What stops people from recycling waste? What should be done to encourage people to recycle more of their waste?

Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding cEven though we are currently on an unsustainable path to environmental destruction, there are still people that do not recycle their waste. This may be for two reasons: lack of knowledge about the importance of recycling or a lack of adequate local infrastructure to ensure that waste is properly recycled. In both cases, I would argue that government action needs to be taken.

6.5

band

Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person. Why do you think this is the case? What measures could be taken to encourage teenagers to spend more time meeting one another in person? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In today's digital age, it has become increasingly common for teenagers to prefer socializing online over meeting in person. There are several factors contributing to this trend, and various measures can be taken to encourage teenagers to spend more time interacting face-to-face.

6.5

band

Some people believe that professional workers such as doctors and teachers should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is an ongoing debate regarding whether professionals, such as doctors and teachers, should receive higher compensation compared to athletes and entertainers. I strongly disagree with this argument as I believe that an individual's earnings should be based on their market value and the scarcity of their talent and skills.

6.5

band

The growing numbers of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, it is true that the overweight problem has been a main issue in the health field. A number of people suppose that the school curriculum needs to emphasize more on physical education learning. I completely agree with the view physical education is one of the solutions to lessen the number of overweight people.

6.5

band

Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn the news. However, others believe that they can learn the news more effectively though other media. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There are two contrasting views regarding the effectiveness of newspapers as a means of acquiring information compared to the accessibility of news through other media channels, such as social media. While it may appear reasonable in certain aspects to rely on newspapers for news consumption, I personally believe that the internet occupies a unique position in this regard.

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 checks
Get all the feedback you need to keep improving your charts and letters.
Unlimited Task 2 checks
Practice and perfect your skills with essays.
Personalized suggestions
Know how to boost your score.
Detailed mistakes analysis
Get instant feedback. Spot every mistake.
Topic ideas generator
Get topic-specific ideas to enhance your writing.
Vocabulary helper
Get the right words for any topic.
Progress tracking
Track your writing improvements.