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IELTS Writing Samples Band 6

IELTS Writing Samples Band 6

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Doing an enjoyable activity with children can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

It is often an argued issue children do an enjoyable activity can be improved to their's cretaivtity than reading in many TV debates we can see that. It is possible to improve children's skill and creativity by doing joyable activities than reading books? Yes, it is possible, therefore, I strongly agree with this statement for the following reasons.
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One of the consequences of imprved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages.

Medical care is beneficial for every human being. if we talk about some years ago,the technology is no more vast as compared to now. at that time ,the chemist does no more research on patent remedies and other medical pieces of equipment, but in very little ,time the technology grows more. these days the technology is very vast, analysts often research medication and many other things .
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Environmental hazards are often too great for particular countries or individuals to tackle. We have arrived at a point in time where the only way to lessen environmental problems is at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Environmental problems have reached such proportions that people feel international organizations must be set up to intervene in world affairs to resolve these problems. Whether this will resolve the problem which is very unlikely as international organizations are just an extension of human behaviour. That is, if human conflicts cannot be resolved at home, then they are unlikely to be resolved at the international level. Nevertheless, international organizations do attract attention to the growing problem of pollution and the destruction of the environment. However, although I respect the aims of the international community to resolve the issue of environmental pollution and support their cause, I do not believe it is the best or only way to protect the environment; in fact, it is only a small part of what is needed in a global initiative.
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Although the prices of fuels have greatly increased over the last decade or two, it is argued that further increases in fuel prices are the only way to reduce world consumption of fuel and lessen pressure on the world’s fuel resources

Undoubtedly, fuel price has drastically risen up over the last decade. However, ecology experts and senators are debating about eventual further increases in order the reduce combustible consumption. Personally, I am firmly opposed to this idea, since this attempt would seriously harm people and exacerbate poverty. This essay will demonstrate the author’s opinion by giving examples of foreign countries .
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To learn effectively, children need to eat a healthy meal at schools. How true is this statement ? Whose responsibility to provide food for school children ?

Children ought to be provided healthy foods at schools in order to learn effectively. It is true that healthy food provides an ample amount of nutrition to the brain which helps children to study effectively. Both school and parents are responsible to provide food for children.
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Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Robotics with human knowledge, is believed to bring numerous advantages to the future world than the negative impact it can bring upon the lifestyles of people. This essay will discuss both positive and negative impacts and it can be argued that, artificial intelligence will be beneficial in many ways.
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Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

It is argued that there should be no zoo because locking up animals in cages for their entire life is inhuman. Nevertheless, a portion of society says that zoos can help prevent wild animals from danger. This essay will look at two sides of these arguments and conclude that zoos provide great protection for wild animals from predators, diseases, and natural disasters. Plus, zoos keep animals away from extinction.
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Children should never be educated by parents at home

Education is a very important and debatable topic nowadays. Some people think that it is not good for children to be educated by their parents at home. I believe that school is the place where students can learn, study and socialize with peers.
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Many people work longer hours, leaving little time for leisure activities. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

Employees starting to work overtime so the amount of time for their hobbies is less than before. I believe that the downsides overshadow its upside. Since this will affect not only their physical health but also mental health.
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Some people believe that testing products on animal should be banned but others think that it is necessary. Discuss both views and give your opinion

In this modern epoch, it is an irrefutable fact that animal testing plays an integral and indispensable role in medical science. While some people think that is essential, others argue that it should be banned. In my, opinion I believe that although animal testing causes pain to animals and can also cause death. Overall, testing on animals serves a greater purpose in research and should not be banned
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Some people think that criminal behavior has genetic causes. Others believe that it is circumstances that lead people to commit a crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is extremely hard to distinguish a crime originated by genetic issue or it leaded by someone to commit the crime. It depends on real situation. A poverty and an unemployment led someone to commit crime on purpose.
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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is undeniable that many people have been born with a gift of talents in sports and music. However, there are many who believe that even kids are not born with the gift, they can still be excellent sports players or outstanding musicians by teaching them or making them practice harder than the one who has the gift. The following paragraph will be discussing both opinions. Therefore, the conclusion and my perspective have been reached.
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When students move to a new school, they sometimes face problems. How can schools help these students with their problems? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.

When a student moves to a new school, he or she can face some problems. I think that almost all people had to move from one place to another in their lives and I am not an exception. My family moved twice during my childhood. My father is an architect, so, my family had to move from one place to another when the old construction was over and my father was offered to develop a new project. Two major problems I had to face in a new school were "no friends" and "a huge amount of new people". In the following paragraphs I will analyze these problems and make suggestions about how a school can help a student in this situation.
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When students move to a new school, they sometimes face problems. How can schools help these students with their problems? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.

It is noticeable that when students come to a new learning environment, they often encounter many difficulties and force them to solve them. The school should come up with solutions to help new students quickly adapt to the new environment.
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In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out bout the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

Recently,many people over the world are focusing more on learning about the past of houses or flats they live in. Many reasons and facts are leading to this. Fortunately, they are several ways by which they can know what they want.
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When new towns are planned, it is more important to include public parks and sports facilities than shopping centres for people to spend their free time in. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

When new cities are constructed, some argue that parks and exercise equipment serve more crucial roles than supermarkets and malls. Although shopping centers support the national economy, I strongly agree with this statement due to the fact that public parks and sports facilities can enhance general health physically and mentally.
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The plans show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

The plans illustrate the design of an airport now and how it is going to change after redevelopment next year.
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Research shows that business meeting, discussion and training are happening online nowadays.Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantage?

Modern technology has improved the way people meet.Findings have indicated that corporate meetings, discussions and education are happening virtually.This move has got both merits and demerits.
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Some people prefer to read stories of fiction created by an author's imagination. Others prefer to read works of nonfiction or books based on facts, real events, or real people. Do you prefer to read fiction or nonfiction? Why?

The majority of people prefer to read books based on facts, but stories of authors' creations are more popular nowadays. Mainly because people are tired of the real world or they do not want to fill their free time with everyday facts.
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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather that secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

The importance attached to early exposure of a foreign tongue for kids is constantly on the rise, and children are encouraged to start learning a second language from primary education rather than until entering secondary schools. While these young learners can indeed benefit from that to some extent, I tend to believe that those merits pale compared to the negative consequences in terms of studying efficiency and , which will then be proved in my following essay.
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