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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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some people think that the most important function of music is to help people relax to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, listening to various styles of music is an integral part of every individual's life. While some believe that the most significant role of music is to ease the mind, I would argue that there are other purposes with which people aim to listen to music genres that are of the same value of relaxation, if not more.

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Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

Being a vegetarian or non-vegetarian is one's personal choice. While some people consider vegetarianism as a healthier approach to living and it is advantageous for the world as well, others don't believe in this opinion. I partially agree with the view for which I will be elaborating on some pros and cons of it.

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Many people believe that every individual is responsible for his/ her own healthy lifestyle others believe that governments should take care of it. Discuss both views and give opinion

A lot of people think that every citizen is responsible for his/her own health and for improving the well-being of his/her lifestyle but others believe that governments should protect all people's health. I partly agree with this statement, that governments can be taken some measures such as every people go to a sports centre every week. On the other hand, everybody can make various sports with their own decisions. Both of these viewpoints will be outlined in detail before concluding.76

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Some people say that History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is considered by some people that History which teaches us about the past still plays one of the most crucial roles to be taught in school while the others think that Science and Technology that guide us on how to make innovations are the most important ones in this 21st Century's World. In this essay, I will discuss both perspectives and give my opinion.

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A lot of companies and organisations require employees to wear unifroms. Which kind of jobs are uniforms suitable for? Are there any disvantages to wearing a uniform to work?

To present as a group, the requirement of uniforms is applied in many workplaces. Because unified clothes are symbolized the core thinking of the companies, lots of Asian employers regulate their staff to follow them. It makes already introverted Asians too pressured to express themselves. Later, I will not only illustrate what kinds of positions are required to wear them but also elaborate more details about the drawbacks of indistinguishable appearance in the below paragraphs.

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Employes sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests,and whether they are married or single.Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful,others disagree. Discuss both the views and your opinion also.

During the interview, the Recruiter tries to understand the candidate's actual motive to join the respective company. In this process, they ask various personal as well as professional questions. Giving personal information is somewhat necessary for the HR personnel but according to some people, this is a total waste of time. We will discuss both the points one by one and will try to understand why it is important to do so.

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Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

It is expected that nations all around the globe will face serious environmental, population related and educational issues. In the coming decade, there will be several troubles that my country is likely to encounter. I will discuss and analyse these possible problems and their viable solutions in detail in this essay.

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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Trains and road vehicles have been the chief essential sectors of the human race when it comes to travel or transport. It is highly required for the authorities to be more specific about the development of rail tracks rather than focusing on the routes for general vehicles. In the following paragraphs, both views of the statement will be outlined in detail along with my personal perspective on the agreement.

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Many parents are unhappy with their children playing violent games and watching violent movies. How it can effect children and what can be done to solve this problem?

It is generally accepted that the majority of adults are dissatisfied with violent media and movies if consumed by kids. Even though it is just a game or a movie, it contains bad behaviour which can affect how children behave towards their surroundings. Thus, this essay will elaborate on the effects and how to resolve this issue.

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Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by robots. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There exists an opinion that in the future machines will take over all human jobs. Personally, I agree with this belief only partially. It is true that the majority of repetitive and predictable tasks should be automated. However, it is highly unlikely that humanoid robots will replace people at workplaces where human communication is in demand.

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Topic: Many children and students are taught to push themselves to be better than others rather than work together for everyones’s benefits. To what extent do you agree?

Many kids as well as pre-teens are taught to push themselves to be better than others instead of working together for everyone's benefit. To my way of thinking, there are both pros and cons in different contexts.

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Some say that because many people are living much longer the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerably. To what extant do you agree or disagree?

Across the globe, a lot of individuals support the idea of expanding the retirement age due to case that the average living life has been rising dramatically while others deem that it should not be increased from the fixed numbers. I am completely in disagreement with this statement and provide relevant points below.

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Some people believe it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. others argue it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Accepting and acknowledging is the best policy with regard to any kind of unsatisfaction situation in our day to day life. Therefore, a fair amount of experts believe that understanding accepting and acknowledging is the best option when looking for something new which would help us to improve our situations and I would like to discuss both views along with my opinion with a few relevant examples.

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Many people nowadays spend a large part of their free time using a smartphone. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays the usage and addiction of a smartphone have been growing rapidly in many countries. There is a number of reasons for this widespread problem. While this growing trend can affect us in different ways, I personally think that these are mostly negative.

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The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the healthcare system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that way to deal with the problem is to introduce more physical education in school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the increasing obese population is a worldwide issue. Concerning this, some people regard that the means to handle the trouble is to institute more physical training in educational institutions. However, I entirely disagree with the opinion. The main reasons are that many countries execute sufficient physical education activities, and I believe there are more realistic and effective means. This essay will discuss these perspectives.

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while mobile phones have many advantages a number of problem have also resulted from them or the way in which they are used. mention problems and solutions ?

These days a cell phone is part of humans' life, it has benefits also harmful effects. So, this essay will draw the problems that came from these technologies and discuss some ways to solve them.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

Rapid globalization has created various opportunities of employment options for employees. Currently, the choice of whether to be self-employed or to be a worker of a company or cooperation has been a rising issue of debate, with many choosing the previous one. The pitfalls of such working styles remain questionable, but there are reasons for this sudden shift.

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In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this case? What can be done about this problem?

Nowadays many technologies and methods have developed to make agriculture more efficient. Despite these developments, there are still people suffering from hunger all around the world. Having said that, I believe there are two main causes, improper circumstances for agriculture in these regions and destitution. Possible solutions would be preparing desirable situations for producing food in these areas and assistance from wealthier nations.

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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in seperate school, other believe that boys and girls benefits more from attending mixed school

Most urban areas in my country widely prefer the modern co-education system, whereas the rural areas typically uphold separate schooling.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The universal nature of music has failed to resonate with the heartstrings of only a few people. Hence, a perception exists among some that the music provides a bridge, connecting people from numerous ethnicities and different age groups. This essay fully agrees with this opinion, providing facts for the readers to decide for themselves.

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