IELTS Writing Samples Band 7

While it is true that watching TV affects children, it is difficult to determine whether it is the content of the programs or the length of time spent watching them that has a more significant impact on children. It seems to me that although the amount of time does affect youngsters, it is the content of the programs that has a more marked influence on them....
People, these days, who are living in cities are not paying enough attention to their health and due to which it is important to discuss to find a cause. There are two most common causes of an insufficient exercise, firstly, most of the metropolis are too crowded to find a place to do workout and secondly, due to the hectic lifestyle of cities people ignore to do an exercise....
It is scientifically believed that social life plays an important role in the overall health of an elderly community. A portion of the society believe that exercise and social life with other people will help elderly citizens to keep fit and active, but the reality is not as mentioned. In this essay, we will discuss the causes and solutions to the isolated and unhappy life of the older population....
Presently, the improvement of devices to make many daily activities more practical has risen into prominence. Therefore, the use of gadgets such as smartphones to pay bills have been constantly increasing and is accompanied with some questions about whether this is a good choice or not. From my point of view, using cellphones with that purpose is highly advantageous, even though it has some drawbacks....
Technological innovations, such as mobile phone, has become increasingly popular among certain demographics of society. Some people claim that these innovations are making folk socially less interactive. This essay will argue how these innovations are making them less interactive....
In recent years, globalization has opened the gate for various opportunities abroad. Nowadays, students are preferring international universities to pursue higher education rather than studying from their home country. In this essay, we will discuss both merits and demerits of this psychological development....
Children are increasingly suffering from stress as a result of their involvement in academic, social and commercial aspects. This essay will discuss the main causes of such stress including the increased competition and society related pressures, and will also suggest solutions to these problems including identifying the child's interest and guiding them to their field of interest....
Some of us believe that the young generation should be motivated to learn about how to compete with others, while some think that to be cooperative is better for a good future.This is a very debated topic in our times and divides opinions.From my point both of them are important qualities, to be cooperative and competitive, but cooperation is more useful in our life....
In a number of nations, maternity leave is granted to working-class women within and after the first month of delivery. This notion has some pro's and con's which would be elaborated on....
Some people assert that governing authorities ought to prefer investing in research and development to business-centric undertakings. I agree with this notion to a large extent because of several reasons which are discussed in subsequent paragraphs....
These days sports are common in all age groups. Some folks believe that sports help people in developing a skill like teamwork, while others say it motivates them to become more competitive....
Globalisation refers to the movement of people, culture and things. However, it has both merits and demerits. In the following paragraphs, I intend to discuss, both pros and cons of the given notion and put forward my opinion....
Nowadays, many opinions suggest that students only focus on science subjects, but forget the crucial role of art- based ones. While many studies show that non-exam, art-based subjects help them, especially in secondary school , to improve their academic performance. Personally, I am with the above opinion because of the undeniable benefits it brings to students....
In recent years, the approach of using exams to assess students has risen in popularity over the alternative of continual assessment. This essay will highlight both the benefits and drawbacks that result from such an approach....
Parents throughout the world place spend time reading with their offspring to prepare them for school where their literacy skills are further developed; however, recent research suggests that focusing on reading at an early age can be detrimental, and participating in fun activities would be far more beneficial. I am a strong advocate of this approach, and the benefits of it will be covered in this essay....
Growing urbanization has deviated the focus of mankind from a healthy lifestyle to a wealthy lifestyle where people are running behind success and have forgotten the necessity of physical fitness. In this essay, we will discuss a few reasons for this trend and some possible solutions for it....
Newspaper and television are two powerful sources to communicate information to masses. We often wonder how new editors decide on which story will be published and which will be dumped. Moreover, with the decreasing quality of news,the question has become more relevant. This essay will discuss what influences news and how we don't have become used to bad report these days....
It is often argued that authorities should levy a tariff on junk foods to reduce the health regarding hassles in the individuals. From my point of view, this approach is negative due to the drawbacks which have been in human life because this helps those who are busy in their life due to hectic schedule, as well as foodstuff, plays a vital role to strengthen the economy of any particular nation....
There is a popular view that many are affected in a negative way when they take a lot of time while travelling to work and study and there is a contrasting view that it is not so. In my opinion, it depends on the person who is taking the long-distance travel for office or school and this essay will further discuss both views in detail....
Nowadays, all corporates have a diverse range of designation structure ranging from top to bottom administration, and this has spurred arguments that senior management should be compensated with higher remuneration in contrast to the people working in the bottom segment of the same association. I completely agree with this statement, as senior authority is the brain of an organization and their hardships and decisions should be compensated with more salary....