IELTS Writing Samples Band 7. Page 220

IELTS Writing Samples Band 7

band

Many people believe that today there is a general increase in anti-social behavior and lack of respect for others. What might have caused this situation? What solutions can you suggest?

In recent years,it is widely believed by some that the social skills of individuals and reverence towards each other have declined.The reason behind this issue is advancements in technology and to address this problem effectively,the government should establish a program that increases face-to-face interaction among people.

band

Smacking children to is the best method to discipline. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Disciplining children is the one of important things to do as the guardian, without discipline, children will be uncontrollable and difficult to deal with. One of the methods to make them disciplined is to smack them, despite that method working, I personally disagree because is not good for children's behaviour. It might lead them to become a bully or have mental issues when they get older.

band

Some people think students can evaluate their teachers while others think it may have some bad effects discuss. Do you agree or disagree?

A group of people believe teachers can be evaluated by students while other groups of citizens assume this method might cause negative consequences. I think students have to have a chance to evaluate their educators because it will increase their learning skills and also help them to stop some unforeseen issues.

band

some say that music is as important as other subjects in school to promote learning in children life.Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.

It is true that some claim that music plays a vital role in school like other subjects to encourage children to learn.While I accept that music is necessary for effective learning as it can help to alleviate stress and tiredness,I believe that it can be a waste of time and children should focus on their major subjects.

band

Some researchers believe that all children need to learn a musical instrument as part of their education. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

From the past to present, musical instruments always play an important role in our life, recently there have been some researchers proving that learning a musical instrument may bring a lot of advantages, so some suggest that a musical instrument course should be added to education. From my perspective, I agree with this statement to some extent. In this essay, I will discuss it.

band

Some people believe that it is best to do the same type of work throughout your life. Others feel that it is beneficial to change jobs often. Discuss both views and give your opinion

There is a debatable discussion regarding the benefit of individuals staying in one steady job throughout their career or switching frequently. I will discuss two different perspectives, and I personally believe that people should change their jobs more often in order to find their true passion.

band

Some people think that news has no connection with people’s lives; so it is a waste of time to read newspapers and watch television news programmes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are some who believe that newspapers and TV news are irrelevant and unnecessary; therefore, public should not read and watch them anymore. I disagree with these opinions, as I found these platforms helpful in providing the public with some global and current issues, economics, and social life from various ages, which I will discuss in this essay.

band

Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A group of people present the view that advertising is an efficient way of convincing us to purchase products, whereas others believe that advertising is unable to attract people’s attention because they are not captivating. I strongly agree with the former opinion and my reasons will be presented in the following paragraphs.

band

Nowadays, a lot of people are able to do their work from home. Discuss both the advantage and disadvantages of this development.

In the recent era, due to the COVID-19 pandemic, workers were doing their jobs at home rather than in the office to minimize the risks of viruses. This event had positive and negative impacts on society, which I will discuss in this essay.

band

Some people say that arts subject such as painting or drawing should not be made compulsory for high school students. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people claim that art classes such as painting and drawing should not be made mandatory for high school pupils. I totally agree with this statement as I think that a lot of students will find it a waste of time.

band

What are advantages and disadvantages of changing careers?

In this decade, numerous individuals have changed their professions which the old career could not completely afford people's lives with sufficient earnings and a balanced lifestyle. This essay will describe both the benefits and drawbacks of career transition with some relevant examples.

band

It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Punishment is a main part of nurturing for teaching children everything in a correct way and it needs to be enrolled in homes and also schools. In my opinion, we can teach children with encouragement instead of punishment, but sometimes they need to be punished for fatal mistakes.

band

Question- Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Music has long been celebrated for its ability to bridge cultural and generational divides. Many believe that it serves as a powerful catalyst for bringing people from diverse backgrounds together. This essay completely agrees with this statement because men and women of different origins and ages often overcome their differences to enjoy the art of music together.

band

Some people tend to take temporary jobs (they only work for few months of years )for they have time to do other things. Do you the advantage outweigh disadvantages?

A group of people consider participating in temporary work and just spend several months in their position to have time for other tasks. I think this approach is not very beneficial because they will not be able to develop their job completely and they might face money problems.

band

Some people think the government should provide free education in all levels. Others argue that university students should pay for their education. Discuss both views.

Some argue that all stages of education ought to be free for everyone, while others believe that college students should not be entitled to free schooling. In this essay, the idea of the first group, reaching the society with the highest efficiency, and the second perspective, instilling a sense of responsibility in university students, will be discussed.

band

Some people think children have the freedomto make mistakes,while other people believethat adults should prevent children from making mistakes.Discuss both sides and giveyour opinion.

Nowadays, some of the individuals consider that kids could do something wrong freely, other people believe that parents should manage their kids to prevent them from making mistake. This is a controversial issue. From my perspective, youngsters should be managed by parents, in order to decrease the mistakes.

band

Everybody should donate a fixed amount of their income to support charity. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Donation is indeed the act of giving something to help others or support a charity. It is a choice you make to give without expecting anything in return. While some people suggest that individuals should provide a fixed portion of their salaries on a regular basis, I disagree with this idea for several reasons, as it might have negative consequences.

band

Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

It is notable that the majority of victual goods contain an immense amount of carbohydrates which contributes to several health issues such as diabetes and obesity. It is believed that by increasing the prices of manufactured sugary products, people will tend to tone down their sugar intake. From my point of view, I think this is not a good idea and disagree with such an imposition on sugar-sweetened food and drink.

band

Some people think that the sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

There is an argument that children should be encouraged to participate in competitions nevertheless, others assume that raising a kid in the spirit of teamwork makes them more fruitful than the first group and I assume that working together is more beneficial for the community.

band

Many peolpe say that the only way to guarantee getting a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others clain that it is bette to start work after school and gain experience in the worl of work. How far do you agree or disagree with the above views?

While Some people believe that the only way to get a good job is to complete a course at an academy, however, others claim that it is worth starting a work-life after school and gaining a background in the world of work. I tend to believe that completing educational institution courses is the best way to guarantee a satisfactory occupation.

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.