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IELTS Writing Samples Band 8.5

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case ? Do you think this a positive or negative situation ?

The factors that drive people towards owning a house varies. Many people across the world prefer to purchase their house rather than rent it. I believe that this choice exhibits positive development. This essay will discuss further details with respect to this situation and substantiate my view.

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Some people think that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a dispute over the impingement of social networking websites on personal and social levels, whether it is harmful or not. In my perspective, I discord with the opinion that those sites impinge negatively on different community levels.

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Today our lifestyle is changing and this affects family relationships. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, lifestyle and connection have close relationships in our life. Our style of life is improving and this impacts household bonds. In my opinion, there are more drawbacks than benefits.

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Tourism is one of the fastest growing industries and contributes a great deal to economies around the world. However, the damage tourism can cause to local cultures and the environment is often ignored. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Experts throughout the world have debated whether the travel industry has positively impacted human life. The substantial importance of this economic field has sparked environmental drawbacks in recent years. In my view, tourists can support the friendly support to nature with less garbage, more sustainable cultural environment resulting in a better economy and Earth.

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some people think that parents shoud think children how to be good members of society. Others, however, beieve that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

It is said that kids should learn diverse skills from the parents that how to live in the society as well as how to make good relationship with different people in the surroundings. But many people consider about an institution can provide social skills to young ones. I believe that both are responsible for the children's behaviour regarding being good residents, and I will discuss both views in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is often argued that captivating species in zoological gardens is harmful and should be shut down, wherein some believe that it is beneficial in saving them from going extinct. As far as my opinion is concerned, I believe that such parks should not be closed as it will assist in saving endangered species from poaching and will also allow citizens to gather more information about several beasts. In the subsequent crumbs of writing, I will be discussing both views.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Some individuals commented that apprentices should take culinary skills as part of their school curriculum. However, others argue that solely the most crucial topics should be taken. Personally, I regard the first view as the most relevant for students mental development owing to the fact that it is earlier preparation for adult life. Although, it may probably be time-consuming. This essay will shed light on both sides of the view and provide evidence to prove the arguments.

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mIn spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world, still go hungry. What is the cause of this? What can be done to solve the problem

A large proportion of individuals across the globe are suffering from famine even though progress in cultivation is visible. Unfortunately, natural disasters and poor transportation are mainly convected for this serious issue ;however, introducing rooftop farming and increasing the number of cold storages may lessen malnutrition dramatically.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Obesity, heart diseases, diabetes and many such health problems have become common these days. The main cause of the declining health of people is bad eating habits like having packaged food and drinks which have high levels of sugar and fat. Many people recommend that the prices of ready to consume food items should be increased in order to reduce consumption, however, I completely disagree with the statement as there are better ways to deal with this problem.

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Living a county where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is undeniable that speaking other languages apart from the native language is practically and socially challenging for the people living abroad. I strongly agree with this statement because language is the main key for communication and a lack of understanding of different languages would create many difficulties in social interactions and everyday situations.

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Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

It would be argued that school should teach some major subjects related to the children’ careers. In my opinion, however, the science of food and food’s preparation should be considered a subject at school.

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In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world, still go hungry. What is the cause of this? What can be done to solve the problem

A large proportion of the population all over the world is still counting the famished days even though clean progress in cultivation is visible.Unfortunately, natural disasters and poor transportation are mainly convicted for this situation; however, increasing the number of cold storages and introducing rooftop farming may lessen starvation all across the globe.

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Politicians’ private lives should not be published in newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, newspapers are possibly the most popular source of information around the world. It is known that politicians have to appear in public to show their work. However, some papers may want to keep unpublished their personal life. I completely agree because sharing intimate details may cause that readers lose their focus.

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People's shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to tan any other factors. Do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Individuals around the world are making daily decisions in order to sustain their lifestyles. Some may believe that everybody's shopping habits are related to their ages. However, I disagree with the statement due to the several factors interacting with this economic issue.

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In some countries, owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

It is true that in several countries, people prefer purchasing a house for themselves to renting one. There are some reasons aside from that and will be discussed later in this writing. Personally, I believe that its downside outweighs the benefits.

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school children are using computers in school more than ever. Discuss the advantages and disadvantage of this and give your own opinions

Learners have recently increased their utilisation of computing devices in their educational institutions. I argue that the overall advancement of technology in education is one of the main reasons why this is the case. The essay discusses the advantages and disadvantages of the foregoing scenario.

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Task 2: Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at at least 7 years old. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In this advanced pace world, media plays and significant role in the community, it influences our daily lives and we connect with the whole world. In my opinion, more freedom should be given to mass media and I would like to explicate some possible aspects in the upcoming passage.

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Many processed foods and ready-made meals contain preservatives and additives . what are advantages to this? Do you think advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Since a few years ago, too many people are busier than before. For that reason, many companies around the world are developing options to cover the nutrient necessities. Those options of food include a lot of products to endure longer in the fridge. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of ready-made males and fast food consumption.

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Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational; otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.

Free-time activities are a must for everyone but for the children's it should be mandatory. It could be either educational, sports or anything else. So, I completely disagree with the statement and hence, the kids should select their hobbies by their own needs or passion. Therefore, sport is never counted as a time-waster in one life. In this essay, we will discuss reasons as well.

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In some societies the number of crime committed by teenagers is growing. Some people think that regardless of age teenagers who commit major crime should receive adult punishment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the crime rate of teenagers is alarming in numbers.The punishments for the same are not as much hard as for adults.But some people are requesting severe punishment irrespective of age.In my perspective, I would consider both of them differently .I will explain my points briefly further .

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