IELTS Writing Samples Band 8.5. Page 66

IELTS Writing Samples Band 8.5

8.5

band

Which would you choose a high-paying job with long hours that would give you a little time with family and friends or a lower-paying job with shorter hours that would give you more time with family and friends? Explain your choice, using specific reasons and details.

Few people do not get much family time as they work extra hours to earn more salary. However many individuals are satisfied with low-income and short-time professions as they spend their precious time with loved ones and kids. I personally support the former view and I have tried to argue for the same in the upcoming paragraphs.

8.5

band

In many countries today, crime nivels and crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. What do youthink these books and tv shows are popular? What is your opinion of the crime fictions and crime dramas.

Programs and books related to criminology are becoming famous in different parts of the world. I will explain why these types of topics are the most liked by people and throw light on my views on the television shows and books based on the illegal happenings in the surroundings as well as overseas.

8.5

band

In many cities, some planners have located shops, schools, offices and homes in specific areas, which are widely separated from each other. Do you think the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages for residents?

In metropolitan areas, it is common to witness an attempt to optimize land utilization by modifying the city's layout. This involves the segregation of essential establishments like shops, schools, offices, and homes in designated and extensively separated regions. Although this may have some benefits, I believe the disadvantages overshadow the advantages.

8.5

band

Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Recent years have witnessed a debate about what should be the key focus of nations' authorities. While many politicians believe that it should be the growth of the economy, opponents contend other matters should be taken into equal consideration. This essay will elaborate on both perspectives and the reasons why I lean towards the latter.

8.5

band

There is a good deal of evidence that increasing car use is contributing to global warming and having other undesirable effects on people’s health and well-being. What can be done to discourage people from using their cars?

This modern age demands the best possible individual transportation, such as cars; however, these automobiles do not always mean the most optimal. It has been seen the number of cars getting higher every day, which has enormous consequences, as could be mentioned global warming and the other side effects that have on human health and well-being. Some of the possible solutions will be considered in this essay.

8.5

band

Some people think zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed. However, some people think zoos can help protect the rare animals. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People have different views about the necessity of the existence of zoos. Although I accept that zoos are brutal for wildlife and should be shut down, I partly agree with this idea and I will outline the reasons in the following essays.

8.5

band

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television advertising directed towards young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed.

In the modern era , while there is an ongoing debate with compelling reasons about the negative influence of TV advertisements on toddlers , it leads to intriguing arguments and broadens a person's horizon. In my opinion , I totally agree that television ads have a detrimental impact on youngsters' physical and mental development , and I am going to put forth my ideas in this essay.

8.5

band

In many countries, paying for things using mobile phones (cellphone) apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or disadvantages?

Nowadays, most people around the globe own a mobile phone, and they normally bring it along everywhere they go. They have been increasingly depending on mobile payment apps for their everyday spending. This development is definitely a positive trend as it offers more convenience, accessibility, and better management in personal finance.

8.5

band

Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later, and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that some jail offenders tend to become good members of society after being released from prison. Therefore, they are considered to be the best ones to share the consequences of criminal activities with juveniles. I totally concur with this notion, my rationale of which will be presented in this essay.

8.5

band

In past people feel difference in foreign culture. Nowadays, this situation is changed. What are the causes of these chnages? Do the advantages outweigh the disadavtages?

In previous eras, foreign cultures might not be easy for some groups of people to associate with. On the other hand, our society has been changing for several reasons. This essay will elaborate on it and points out the advantages of this situation.

8.5

band

The movements of people from the villages to the cities for work has caused a lot of problems in both places. What are the serious problems associated with this? What measures can be taken to solve these problems?

Population relocation from rural areas to urban areas in favour of finding jobs has a negative impact on both places. This phenomenon relates to several urgent consequences; however, there are solutions to tackle the problems.

8.5

band

Some people think that the teenagers years are the happiest times pf most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

In general, people can be divided into two groups: those, for whom adolescence is considered the happiest lifetime, and others, who are convinced that, notwithstanding any responsibilities, it is adulthood, that brings more joy into people's lives. In order to make any conclusion, it is worth discussing both views.

8.5

band

The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this day and age, means of transport namely cars or motorbikes are one of the factors causing environmental issues. It is believed that the legal bodies should elevate the taxes on the price of petrol and gas used as material for a significant number of vehicles. From my perspective, this opinion is valid to a certain extent, but I still it is quite reasonable. The following paragraphs would shed light on my viewpoint.

8.5

band

Government should spend money to encourage the development of sport and art for school students, rather than supporting professional sports and art performance for general public. Do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that the government should invest money to motivate students in arts and sports. However, others debate that professional physical activities and art performances should also be encouraged for the community. In my opinion, the government should maintain a balance while deciding on which target population to invest in.

8.5

band

It is a natural process that animal species become extinct, as the dinosaur did in the past. There is no reason for people to prevent from this happening. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the planet's history, dominating creatures had been destroyed. It is a normal process in nature and does not need us to interfere with it. I agree with this because all breeds are equal here, including us and the environment decides which creature has to live and how long.

8.5

band

In some countries, students while studying lived away from home. Do you think the advantage outweigh disadvantage?

In several countries, student's prohibit is located far from their homes during their studies. The following essay will discuss both sides of this phenomenon.

8.5

band

some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together.Do you agree or disagree?

It is an irrefutable fact that music plays a crucial role in the lives of individuals and eliminates the differences among various cultures and generations.I endorse the statement and the reasons for the same would be discussed in upcoming paragraphs.

8.5

band

Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

These days, many entertainers such as actors, singers, and sportsmen earn high wages for their achievements. Some people think that salary is too excessive for those people. However, I think it is suitable, and professions that require people to have expertise should get high wages as well.

8.5

band

Some museums and art galleries charge admission fees, while others have free entry. Do you think the advantages of charging for admission outweigh the disadvantages?

These days, some facilities for historic objects and artworks require visitors to pay an admission fee. Some people think it disturbs them from having an interest in those things. However, in my opinion, its advantages overweigh its disadvantage.

8.5

band

Essay topics: The government should allocate more funding to teaching sciences rather than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree?

It is undoubtedly true that the growth of IT and the advanced industrial sector has been massively high. This situation rise the government's concern about the readiness of the upcoming generation to survive and thrive. Therefore, some authorities believe that schools need to focus on science subjects. I personally agree that science is important but we should not abandon other subjects. This essay will discuss related matters along with relevant examples.

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 checks
Get all the feedback you need to keep improving your charts and letters.
Unlimited Task 2 checks
Practice and perfect your skills with essays.
Personalized suggestions
Know how to boost your score.
Detailed mistakes analysis
Get instant feedback. Spot every mistake.
Topic ideas generator
Get topic-specific ideas to enhance your writing.
Vocabulary helper
Get the right words for any topic.
Progress tracking
Track your writing improvements.