IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 59

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation has more advantages or more disadvantages ?

It is widely accepted that these days many people struggle for more hours and have hardly any hour for entertainment activities. Everyone is well aware that implementing leisure activity is very important. Still, people miss including it due to long working hours. Therefore, to keep oneself feel fresh and healthy, recreation is of utmost importance. There is one school of thought which believes that working overtime at the career will fetch more benefits in terms of promotion. Whereas others believe that in the long run, it has more disadvantages. We will throw some light on the same in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Society is based on rules and laws. If individuals were free to do whatever they want to do, it could not function. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?

Numerous characters deem the community gets formed on regulations and legislations and assume if people start acting as they wanted the society will not be called the public; in contrast, certain groups of people oppose and affirm if the society is centred on laws and regulations, we would not live with freedom and civil liberties. I reckon the civilization is formulated on public policies.

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The typical teaching situation of a teacher and students in the class will not exist by the year 2050. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Numerous characters deem our conventional educating program will be altered, and students will not be attending class; in contrast, certain groups of people oppose and affirm pupils will be studying at school. Besides this, the old educational program will be lasting as usual. I reckon the current model will surely be changed by the 2050s.

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Professional workers like doctors, nurses and teachers make a greater contribution to society and so should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are many types of professional workers available in this world that requires them to put extra effort. A person who involved in profession categories as expert workers must be treated differently compare than other jobs, In my own perspective, I strongly agree with an important profession like doctors, nurses and teachers suppose to received higher-paid as their contribution is direct to the nation.

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Some educationalists say that every child should be taught how to play a musical instrument. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Numerous characters deem every kid must acquire skill in playing the musical appliance; in contrast, certain groups of people oppose and affirm it is a wastage of time to try becoming competent in a musical instrument. I reckon every youngster got not obligated to become capable of playing a musical apparatus.

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Some people think that outdoor activities are more beneficial for children’s development than playing computer games. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Numerous characters deem it is more advantageous for children to spend hours outdoor activities such as playing basketball, riding a bike, and hiking than staying at home; in contrast, certain groups of people oppose and affirm that playing virtual games at house is better than playing outdoor for kids' development. I reckon it is necessary to play outside.

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Some people think that outdoor activities are more beneficial for children’s development than playing computer games. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Numerous characters deem it is more advantageous for children to spend hours in activities such as playing basketball, riding a bike, and hiking than staying at home; in contrast, certain groups of people oppose and affirm that playing virtual games at their houses is better than playing outside for kids' development. I reckon it is necessary for kids to play outside.

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The best way to learn English is to study with native teachers.” What do you think about this opinion? State your point and give reasons and examples to support your answer.

In the modern era, English has been considered a universal form of communication. Today, various jobs,social activities ,communication signboards are all written in English to make sure everyone understands. While some people believe the best way to learn this dialect is with native teachers, while others disagree. I believe, as a society,we should promote excellence rather than the background to promote teaching.

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Nowadays people are spending more time in workplace and staying away from home for work Discuss its advantages and disadvantages with your own experiences

These days, due to cut-throat competition in the world, people are working more hours than ever before and spend fewer hours at home. This is probably because they want to earn more money and enjoy luxuries of life, whilst they have to face some issues such as lack of family interaction and boredom. Undoubtedly, there are a number of benefits and drawbacks of this phenomenon which I will highlight as it progresses.

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Society is based on rules and laws. If individuals were free to do whatever they want to do, it could not function. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?

Numerous characters deem the community is formed on regulations and legislations and assume if people start acting as they wanted the society would not be called the public; in contrast, certain groups of people oppose and affirm if the society is centred on laws and regulations, we will not live with freedom and civil liberties. I reckon the civilization is formulated on public policies.

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Some people think that outdoor activities are more beneficial for children’s development than playing computer games. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Numerous characters deem it is more advantageous for children to spend hours outside activities such as playing basketball, riding a bike, and hiking than staying at home; in contrast, certain groups of people oppose and affirm that playing virtual games in a home is better than playing outside for kids' development. I reckon it is necessary to play outside.

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Some educationalists say that every child should be taught how to play a musical instrument. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Numerous characters deem every kid must acquire skill in playing the musical apparatus; in contrast, certain groups of people oppose and affirm it is a wastage of time to become competent in a musical implement. I reckon every youngster must not become capable of playing a musical appliance.

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Some believe that charitable organisations should help people no matter where they live. Others argue that charities should only help those living in the country where the charity is based. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is believed by certain individuals that charities should assist anyone living anywhere in the world and I also endorse the aforementioned statement, however, others feel that charitable bodies should only aid the ones residing in the nation it belongs to. Both the sides will be discussed in the essay below with relevant examples.

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Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

While some people opine that asking private issues of an applicant is significant during the interview, others think the complete opposite of the view. In my opinion, some internal information should be asked to judge the candidate properly; however, both views will be discussed in the essay.

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Many people today buy ready-made food rather than spending time cooking. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In our modern society, only a minority of people would like to spend ages cooking for their meals, while the majority nowadays prefer to buy takeaway foodstuff instead of cooking at home. Whether it is ideal to buy ready-made feed compared to self-cooked meals is certainly up for debate. In my opinion, the advantages of this development definitely do not outweigh the disadvantages. Therefore, the following essay will discuss the reasons behind the phenomenon and outline the benefits and drawbacks of it.

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The typical teaching situation of a teacher and students in the class will not exist by the year 2050. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Numerous characters deem our conventional educating program will be altered, and students will not be attending in their classroom; in contrast, certain groups of people oppose and affirm pupils will be studying at school. Besides this, the old educational program will be lasting as usual. I reckon the current model will surely change by the 2050s.

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Formal examinations are the only effective way to assess a student’s performance. Continual assessment such as course work and projects is not a satisfactory way to do this. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many people have the opinion that annual examinations are the best way to analyze student’s performance while maintaining that continuous assessments such as weekly assignments and project work are an unsatisfactory way to assess the student. I agree with the statement to some extent as I believe that assessing students continuously can help improve their performance to the most extent.

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Today more countries import food different parts of the world. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

Numerous characters deem taking daily goods from foreign nations is dangerous for the public, assuming this cash flow must get directed to growing vegetables and livestock. In contrast, certain groups of people oppose and affirm this trend allows us to buy cheaper foods. In this essay, I will discuss, firstly, the merit of producing foods on its own and secondly, the negative aspects of this phenomenon, followed by a reasoned conclusion.

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Some people believe that capital punishment should not be used. Others, however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Numerous characters deem that the death sentence is necessary for critical crimes; meanwhile, certain groups of people oppose and affirm the idea that it is not right to kill miscreants for their offence. In this essay, I will discuss, I examine firstly, how sparing offenders can give new opportunities to them, also negative aspects of finishing lawbreakers, followed by a reasoned conclusion.

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Genetic engineering is a dangerous trend. It should be limited. To what extent do you agree?

An important issue today is regarding whether the science of genes should be restricted to a minimum, or should it be developed. Nowadays some people are of the opinion that this type of engineering is too risky. However, there are those who believe in the power of DNA manipulation. In this essay, I am going to elaborate on the given topic and show my approval of limiting the trend.

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