IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 59

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however argue that the circumstances of an individual crime and the motivation for committing it should be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While some individuals opine that penalty for any offence should be constant, others think that the background should also be considered. In my opinion, the situation of crime is required to be analyzed during judgement; however, both views will be discussed in the essay.

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Some people believe that after a child enters school their teachers will have more influence than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that children are impressionable. There are many people who think that after going to school, the learners attend their class coordinators.I completely disagree with this statement. It has more factors to be considered.

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In some societies, more and more people are choosing to live on their own? What are the reasons people choose to do this? Is it a positive or negative trend?

With the advancements in technology and also because of globalisation an increasing number of people are becoming self-sufficient. In my perspective,this is definitely a pragmatic trend and should be supported. However, there are various reasons behind it, which are illustrated in the further essay.

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In many countries, people are moving away from rural areas towards urban areas. Why do you think that is? What problems can it cause?

It is undeniable that the public prefers to live in cities rather than villages, whereas it becomes their priority in these days and individuals are migrating to the metropolis from remote areas. In my opinion, there are a plethora of reasons behind it whilst they are moving for a better lifestyle, such as education, job opportunities and exceptional facilities. Additionally, this trend could create some complications in cities as well over-crowded places become more expensive because of scarcity in every market.

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Some people think its better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe that it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them

Friendship is a superb relationship between two or more individuals that can support them in all situation throughout the whole life. It is often argued that one always has a friend with the same point of view as them whilst others believe that a person should have a mate, who has different opinions as he or she has. In my opinion, I agree with the second statement that an individual should make friend with different thinking and views, so he could motivate them in different dilemmas and guide them with new ideas.

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Some people think that hard work and determination bring success. Others think other factors such as money and good appearance are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

There are different factors that lead to success. While there are many supporters for hard-working and good attitude, many argue that wealth and look give more advantages. In my opinion, while all aspects mentioned matter, efforts are more crucial to a successful career.

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Some people think that hard work and determination bring success. Others think other factors such as money and good appearance are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

There are different factors that lead to success. While many people believe in hard-working and good attitudes, others argue that wealth and look may give more advantages. In my opinion, while all aspects mentioned matter, efforts are more crucial to a successful career.

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In many countries, people are moving away from rural areas towards urban areas. Why do you think that is? What problems can it cause?

Due to urbanization, people in various countries interested to move from the countryside to the cityside. It is nowadays common among every part of the world. In my point of view, there are various reasons behind this cause. In the upcoming paragraphs, I will elaborate on the reasons and problems caused due to the migration process.

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In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of renting homes?

In certain nations, the majority of the population prefer renting their houses in-place of purchasing them. there are merits as well as demerits of the aforementioned situation. Both the benefits and drawbacks of the above idea will be discussed in the essay below with relevant examples.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

It is argued that in the upcoming day's people will prefer reading through electronic medium and the printed news and books will be out of the trend. I hold a partial opinion because opting for digital ways had its own pros and cons. Reading online prevents excessive usage of paper which helps in saving trees; whereas, it comes with various health issues as well.

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As computers translate quickly and accurately, learning foreign languages is a waste of time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Since the translation performed by computing systems is fast and is quite correct so, time consumed to imbibe a foreign language is wasted. I completely disagree with the aforementioned statement. The reasons behind the above disagreement will be discussed in the essay below with relevant examples.

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Some museums and art galleries charge admission fees, while others have free entry. Do you think the advantages of charging for admission outweigh the disadvantages?

Numerous characters deem the population pays money to visit the museum, which is righteous and reasonable; in contrast, certain groups of people oppose and affirm the idea that no tax is appropriate for the public. In this essay, I will examine, firstly, the merit of the free service, and secondly the possible negative aspect of this phenomenon, followed by a reasoned conclusion.

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As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factors contribute to job satisfaction for all workers? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

Nowadays, most people devote considerable time to their work during adulthood. There is no denying that the work contentment could increase the feeling of wellbeing. In order to shed more light on this issue, it is necessary to know what factors influence employees’ career fulfilment and also how the feasible expectation of job contentment for workers has.

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Some believe that charitable organisations should help people no matter where they live. Others argue that charities should only help those living in the country where the charity is based. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is argued that charity groups assist only those who live within their national boundaries; meanwhile, others opine that they should provide their assistance in four corners of the world. From my perspective, I strongly agree with the first one. This essay will provide some cases and examples to support my point of view.

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Violence in society increases when more violence is shown on television. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, the level of violation in societies has seen a long-term gradual increasing tendency. Some believe that violence, which is promoted via mass media, entails this negative movement. I totally agree with this statement and the following essay will explain my point of view.

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Some people think that we can not learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

History is an important aspect linked to mankind. some people argue that the past contains a precious amount of data to understand human life; however, others think that it is useless these days as it does not help to learn anything. I agree that the past is a very considerable factor to recognize human life because it helps to learn about the civilization and background of mankind. In this essay, both views will be discussed.

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Some people think that teenagers should follow the example of older people. Others think that it is natural for teenagers to challenge what older people say. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A highly controversial issue relates to whether elderly people should be listened by youngers or if it is common that their experience is not applicable for younger lives. In this essay, I will examine both points of view and explain why the arguments for accepting elderly advice are stronger.

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Shopping is the favorite pastime for most of the young people. Why do you think is that? Do you think they should be encouraged to do some useful activities in their free time?

Shopping is the most loving way to spend free-time among the majority of the youth and I believe that it should not be an every time affair, however, it is felt by me that these individuals should be motivated to perform certain meaningful pursuits. Both these thoughts will be discussed in the essay below with relevant examples.

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Some people believe that air travel should be restricted because it causes serious pollution and will use up the world’s resources. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,air transport is one of the world’s most essential business. Its development and its technical and service achievements make it one of the greatest contributors to the advancement of modern society. While aviation somehow has adverse effects on the environment, I totally disagree with the view of limiting it due to its enormous benefits on both economic and social aspects.

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Increasing numbers of students are choosing to study abroad. To what extent does this trend benefit the students themselves and the countries involved? What are the drawbacks?

Nowadays,there are more and more people who want to study abroad.This essay will discuss how this great opportunity can be an advantage for a candidate and their countries, however, there are also negative consequences of this decision.

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