IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 59

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Some people think that resources should be spent on protecting wild animals, while others think those would be better used for the human population. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

People have contrasting views, whether it would be better to expend budget for conserving wild creatures or human progress. In my opinion, expenditure should be made on the basis of demand; however, both views will be discussed in the essay.

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People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems? Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

Citizens in metropolises encounter a lot of issues every day. The biggest problems are traffic jam, irritating adults and air contamination. Reducing the number of municipalities' residents is an optimal approach the administration should implement.

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Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case ? Is this a good thing or a bad thing ?

Folks prefer to get on nifty costumes to show up their beauty so that they can get a privilege to the people. The foremost reason for this is to be popular and famous to the persons so that they can get mental satisfaction. From my perspective, this is not a good thing at all.

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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Railways deserve more expenditure instead of the roads by the governments. I give my vote in the support of trains because travelling through these are faster, secure, fun, and cost-efficient rather than on highways. So, spending on the railway will be profitable in the long run for both the public and the administration.

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There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making global temperatures higher. What might be the man-made causes of temperatures rising? How should we deal with this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The overwhelming majority of people assume human-activities are destroying the ecosystem of the world. As a result, global temperature is growing continuously. In this essay, I will examine the main cause of this phenomenon, and suggest a viable solution to this issue.

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Nowadays for many people the Internet is replacing regular books. What do you think will happen in the future and what is your opinion?

According to some people, the internet and connected devices are taking place of traditional books. This essay will discuss what could be expected for the future and also provide arguments to support why I believe this is a positive change.

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Numerous characters deem it is more righteous to incite challenges between students; in contrast, certain groups of people oppose and affirm learning to work as a team with each other is a more valuable skill than the former one in becoming respected individuals in the future. In this essay, I will discuss, firstly, why competition is essential for kids, and secondly, the merit of improving soft skills, followed by a reasoned conclusion.

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More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The overwhelming majority of citizens are using their own vehicles every day. This trend is followed by some drawbacks; one of these is terrible traffic jam irritating people and starting to stroll in the city is a practical solution in reducing the number of automobiles.

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In many countries around the world young people decide to leave their parents home once they finish school. They start living on their own or share a home with friends. Some people think it is a positive thing. Do you agree or disagree?

In some states, young persons start to live individually instead of living with their family when they turned adult. Some people opine that it brings some advantages; nevertheless, I think, though such a trend has some pros, it is better to stay with the origin.

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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

As globalization prevails and more nations are achieving many advancements, more pressure is put on nations to keep up with their neighbouring countries’ development. While some governments devote most of their attention towards economic development, some citizens might argue that progress in other areas is equally important. This essay will discuss why both views have merits and why I believe the latter opinion is superior.

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Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

One of the most conspicuous things of today's world is a discussion between people about children and their free association work during their leisure and if it can be viewed as a boon or detrimental to the society. While there is a deluge of arguments not in favour of the teenagers doing free duty, I believe, in my humble opinion, there are numerous advantages for doing social work freely.

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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however argue that the circumstances of an individual crime and the motivation for committing it should be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While some individuals opine that penalty for any offence should be constant, others think that the background should also be considered. In my opinion, the situation of crime is required to be analyzed during judgement; however, both views will be discussed in the essay.

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Some people believe that after a child enters school their teachers will have more influence than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that children are impressionable. There are many people who think that after going to school, the learners attend their class coordinators.I completely disagree with this statement. It has more factors to be considered.

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In some societies, more and more people are choosing to live on their own? What are the reasons people choose to do this? Is it a positive or negative trend?

With the advancements in technology and also because of globalisation an increasing number of people are becoming self-sufficient. In my perspective,this is definitely a pragmatic trend and should be supported. However, there are various reasons behind it, which are illustrated in the further essay.

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In many countries, people are moving away from rural areas towards urban areas. Why do you think that is? What problems can it cause?

It is undeniable that the public prefers to live in cities rather than villages, whereas it becomes their priority in these days and individuals are migrating to the metropolis from remote areas. In my opinion, there are a plethora of reasons behind it whilst they are moving for a better lifestyle, such as education, job opportunities and exceptional facilities. Additionally, this trend could create some complications in cities as well over-crowded places become more expensive because of scarcity in every market.

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Some people think its better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe that it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them

Friendship is a superb relationship between two or more individuals that can support them in all situation throughout the whole life. It is often argued that one always has a friend with the same point of view as them whilst others believe that a person should have a mate, who has different opinions as he or she has. In my opinion, I agree with the second statement that an individual should make friend with different thinking and views, so he could motivate them in different dilemmas and guide them with new ideas.

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Some people think that hard work and determination bring success. Others think other factors such as money and good appearance are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

There are different factors that lead to success. While there are many supporters for hard-working and good attitude, many argue that wealth and look give more advantages. In my opinion, while all aspects mentioned matter, efforts are more crucial to a successful career.

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Some people think that hard work and determination bring success. Others think other factors such as money and good appearance are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

There are different factors that lead to success. While many people believe in hard-working and good attitudes, others argue that wealth and look may give more advantages. In my opinion, while all aspects mentioned matter, efforts are more crucial to a successful career.

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In many countries, people are moving away from rural areas towards urban areas. Why do you think that is? What problems can it cause?

Due to urbanization, people in various countries interested to move from the countryside to the cityside. It is nowadays common among every part of the world. In my point of view, there are various reasons behind this cause. In the upcoming paragraphs, I will elaborate on the reasons and problems caused due to the migration process.

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In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of renting homes?

In certain nations, the majority of the population prefer renting their houses in-place of purchasing them. there are merits as well as demerits of the aforementioned situation. Both the benefits and drawbacks of the above idea will be discussed in the essay below with relevant examples.

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