IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 61

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages?

Because of the significant growth in technology, people are able to use mobile phones for various purposes. Most of the countries are using online applications for payments. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using it and will conclude with my point of view.

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Studying art in school improves students' performance in other subjects, because it is easier for multi-skilled students to learn new things. That's why art should be obligatory in schools. Do you agree or disagree?

A creative mind is a blessing for society and learning art will enhance a student’s overall performance. because of its benefits, intellects emphasize that it should be made mandatory in schools. I agree with the notion and basic level of the craft must be taught in schools because it improves child mental level and broadens their thinking horizon. In this essay, the importance of teaching arts in schools will be discussed.

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For a long time art has been considered an essential part of all cultures in the world. However, nowadays people’s values have changed, and we tend to consider science, technology and business more important than arts. What do you think are the causes of this? What can be done to draw people’s attention to art?

Art was considered an integral part of communities and valued for centuries. However, with the change of time values change, the art does not attract the human’s eye anymore. Instead, people started to consider science, technology and business sectors to be more influential . In my opinion science and technology comforted human life and business gave financial stability. In order to revive art’s popularity craft festivals must be celebrated. In this essay, the causes of the decline in art’s popularity and way to gain people attention will be discussed.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Survival of the non-native overseas without the knowledge of the local language creates a barrier in connecting with folks and in performing day to day activities. I completely agree to the statement cited above and this essay will discuss the issues faced by the individual residing in abroad without the command over the native speech.

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Ensuring that children have regular physical exercise should be the responsibility of parents and therefore schools should not waste valuable school time having sports lessons as part of the curriculum. To what extent do you agree?

Children need to be physically active and fit to ensure that their biological growth is normal at all times and the onus of this should lie with their parents and not with schools. These educational institutions should not waste valuable time having sports lessons as a part of the curriculum. I completely disagree with this idea and this essay will provide reasons and explanations for the same.

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People in the current generation are not fit and active. This will cause health problems in the future. What could be the reasons for the inactivity and suggest some solutions for this issue.

People of the current generation are not physically active and they will be prone to health issues in near future due to this situation. The main cause for this situation is the attitude of giving a low priority to individual well-being and It is recommended to put more time in activities that improve their personal well-being.

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some people think that the government i s wasting money on arts and that this money could better be spent elsewhere. To what extents do you agree with this view?

There is no doubt that government spend a large part of its money on arts. While some people consider it is a destruction of taxpayers money and it could be spent on other things. However, I totally contradict with the former argument which I will discuss in the latter view with suitable example.

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One of the most important issues facing the world today is a shortage of food and some think genetically modified foods are a possible solution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Lack of food availability is raising a significant concern in this temporary world, and there is a biology-related solution that scientists suggest is genetically modified foods. In my perspective, utilizing this biology technique will solve the shortage of foods because it eliminates some of the potential causes of this issue.

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Forests produce fresh oxygen and participate in regulating climate. But every year tree cover of our planet is lessening due to deforestation. What are the primary causes of deforestation? To what results may it lead?

Forests are the lungs of the earth and maintain the eco-balance. Reduction in forest areas will affect mankind survival. Urbanisation and agricultural expansion primarily have caused deforestation. Eventually, it will lead to a hotter climate and less availability of oxygen for humans. In this essay, the main causes of deforestation and the results which will lead will be discussed.

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The continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity.

Nowadays, due to the growth of the populace, people are facing a lot of problems like illiteracy, pollution, lack of resources and many others. Whereas, there are few reasons behind this tremendous growth. This essay will support my stand on why it is the world's biggest issue with valid arguments in the following paragraphs.

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Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages?

Several tasks that used to be accomplished manually at the house are now being performed by machinery . The aforementioned growth's merits outnumber its demerits. Both advantages and disadvantages of the above development will be discussed in the essay below.

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Computer games are very popular for all ages and nationalities. Parents think this has little educational value and it will be harmful for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this current day and age, games have been considered a major sports activity. Additionally, countries around the globe have seen a significant rise in the popularity of these playing stations. While some believe this has little to no educational value for children and others disagree with this statement. In my opinion, controlled amounts of playing should not be discouraged.

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Production of carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gases has a heating effect on the atmosphere and results in global warming. Why global warming is considered one of the most serious issues nowadays? How can this problem be solved?

Global warming is the topic of all the discussions these days. Emissions of greenhouse gases made the temperature of the planet go up. The rise in overall heat of the planet will result in melting of water resources rapidly and the hotter climate will not be suitable for mankind’s survival. One and only ecologically efficient solution of this will be the trees. In this essay, the effects of global warming and its solution will be discussed.

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Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge and experience.

The question of whether people should be educated about the past is quite controversial. Both sides and the reasons why I totally disagree with the given statement will be discussed in this essay.

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A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The question of whether people are judged by their characteristics or according to their social prestige is a quite debatable topic today. It is considered by some that people are mostly judged by their wealth and social position, not by their core values. Both sides will be examined and I will discuss why I disagree with the given statement.

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Tourism is an ever growing industry What benefits do you think tourism brings to individuals and society

The tourism industry is continuously experiencing growth which I believe is very advantageous to people and community. These merits will be discussed in the essay below.

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Some people think that it s necessary to involve the whole family into nurturing and upbringing a child, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The question of whether a whole family is needed to raise a child is a topical issue today. It is considered by some that children ought to be brought up in a multigenerational family, while others argue that a two-parent family might be more beneficial. Both sides of the argument will be examined and I will discuss them now.

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic? What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

Because the tourism industry is well managed and equipped, it has become easier to travel to places which were isolated to date. Although there are many advantages to these trips, there are few drawbacks attached to it. In the upcoming paragraphs, we will analyze both the viewpoints.

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Some countries achieve international success by building specialized facilities to train top athletes instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Numerous nations are becoming successful at the international platform by providing training to their best athletes instead of working on improving facilities for everybody. I am of the opinion that it has many drawbacks and it will be justified in the following paragraphs.

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Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your Opinion?

In this current day and age, science has improved the way we work and pursue different tasks. computerization has advanced in the last decade to make certain tasks easy as well as efficient. While some people do believe that eventually all jobs will be performed by robots and others believe the right time has not arrived yet. In my opinion, jobs which put human life in danger should help of automation.

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