IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 61

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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People think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others believe that there are other alternative solutions for reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion on this topic.

Numerous characters deem the practical solution to lessen the number of the incarnational rate is to confine miscreant in jails for more extended periods; in contrast, certain groups of people oppose and affirm there are many better choices in settling this issue. In this essay, I will examine, firstly, how confining a law-breaker for a longer time helps to create a happier place to live; also, the negative aspect of neglecting this policy before coming to a reasoned conclusion.

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Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While some believe that the best solution to bring the crime rate down is to accept longer incarceration, others argue that there is a multitude of options to tackle this social issue. The following essay will examine both these theories and I will also explain why I think it is better to focus on alternative ways to reduce criminality.

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write about advantage and disadvantage of CCTV cameras

Nowadays, security is the most important aspect while conducting anything from good governance to corporate business and CCTV cameras play the most vital role in ensuring that everything is secure. This essay will discuss further the advantages and disadvantages of these camcorders.

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Subjects like arts, music and drama are more important than other school subjects and therefore should be given more time in the calendar. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people consider that academic studies are of utmost importance while others align with the thought that subjects like arts, music and drama play a major role in the development of an individual. I agree with the latter fact because extra-curricular activities are now a good career option and to a certain extent help one in discovering self and improving mindset.

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Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single.Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. others disagree. Discuss both views and you opinion.

Although personal details are kept to be reserved, few organizations ask for these details. few people believe that an individual's characteristics are not relevant whereas other people think they are useful. this essay will discuss both the opinions and will conclude with my point of view.

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In some area of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of the doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

In today’s generation, there has been a controversy among the people regarding teenagers roaming around on the roads at night. Recently, in the US, children are barred to go out alone in the night and are asked to compulsorily take an adult in case they wish to be outdoors. In my opinion, I completely agree with the decision taken by the authorities as it is dangerous for them.

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Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.

Technology is widely used in education. Opinions are divided with regards to whether computers being utilized is a beneficial improvement or a problem. In order to give my opinion, it is important to consider both sides of this debate.

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2) In the future, more people will choose to go on a holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday Do you agree or disagree?

Exploring unknown places in a distant land is a dream of most of the people.It is believed that in future domestic places will be visited more by local people rather than visiting places in foreign countries.Personally, I completely disagree with this statement because the curiosity of seeing a different place in a foreign land is undeniable and the improved economical status of individuals all across the world.

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In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages?

Because of the significant growth in technology, people are able to use mobile phones for various purposes. Most of the countries are using online applications for payments. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using it and will conclude with my point of view.

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Studying art in school improves students' performance in other subjects, because it is easier for multi-skilled students to learn new things. That's why art should be obligatory in schools. Do you agree or disagree?

A creative mind is a blessing for society and learning art will enhance a student’s overall performance. because of its benefits, intellects emphasize that it should be made mandatory in schools. I agree with the notion and basic level of the craft must be taught in schools because it improves child mental level and broadens their thinking horizon. In this essay, the importance of teaching arts in schools will be discussed.

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For a long time art has been considered an essential part of all cultures in the world. However, nowadays people’s values have changed, and we tend to consider science, technology and business more important than arts. What do you think are the causes of this? What can be done to draw people’s attention to art?

Art was considered an integral part of communities and valued for centuries. However, with the change of time values change, the art does not attract the human’s eye anymore. Instead, people started to consider science, technology and business sectors to be more influential . In my opinion science and technology comforted human life and business gave financial stability. In order to revive art’s popularity craft festivals must be celebrated. In this essay, the causes of the decline in art’s popularity and way to gain people attention will be discussed.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Survival of the non-native overseas without the knowledge of the local language creates a barrier in connecting with folks and in performing day to day activities. I completely agree to the statement cited above and this essay will discuss the issues faced by the individual residing in abroad without the command over the native speech.

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Ensuring that children have regular physical exercise should be the responsibility of parents and therefore schools should not waste valuable school time having sports lessons as part of the curriculum. To what extent do you agree?

Children need to be physically active and fit to ensure that their biological growth is normal at all times and the onus of this should lie with their parents and not with schools. These educational institutions should not waste valuable time having sports lessons as a part of the curriculum. I completely disagree with this idea and this essay will provide reasons and explanations for the same.

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People in the current generation are not fit and active. This will cause health problems in the future. What could be the reasons for the inactivity and suggest some solutions for this issue.

People of the current generation are not physically active and they will be prone to health issues in near future due to this situation. The main cause for this situation is the attitude of giving a low priority to individual well-being and It is recommended to put more time in activities that improve their personal well-being.

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some people think that the government i s wasting money on arts and that this money could better be spent elsewhere. To what extents do you agree with this view?

There is no doubt that government spend a large part of its money on arts. While some people consider it is a destruction of taxpayers money and it could be spent on other things. However, I totally contradict with the former argument which I will discuss in the latter view with suitable example.

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One of the most important issues facing the world today is a shortage of food and some think genetically modified foods are a possible solution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Lack of food availability is raising a significant concern in this temporary world, and there is a biology-related solution that scientists suggest is genetically modified foods. In my perspective, utilizing this biology technique will solve the shortage of foods because it eliminates some of the potential causes of this issue.

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Forests produce fresh oxygen and participate in regulating climate. But every year tree cover of our planet is lessening due to deforestation. What are the primary causes of deforestation? To what results may it lead?

Forests are the lungs of the earth and maintain the eco-balance. Reduction in forest areas will affect mankind survival. Urbanisation and agricultural expansion primarily have caused deforestation. Eventually, it will lead to a hotter climate and less availability of oxygen for humans. In this essay, the main causes of deforestation and the results which will lead will be discussed.

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The continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity.

Nowadays, due to the growth of the populace, people are facing a lot of problems like illiteracy, pollution, lack of resources and many others. Whereas, there are few reasons behind this tremendous growth. This essay will support my stand on why it is the world's biggest issue with valid arguments in the following paragraphs.

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Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages?

Several tasks that used to be accomplished manually at the house are now being performed by machinery . The aforementioned growth's merits outnumber its demerits. Both advantages and disadvantages of the above development will be discussed in the essay below.

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Computer games are very popular for all ages and nationalities. Parents think this has little educational value and it will be harmful for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this current day and age, games have been considered a major sports activity. Additionally, countries around the globe have seen a significant rise in the popularity of these playing stations. While some believe this has little to no educational value for children and others disagree with this statement. In my opinion, controlled amounts of playing should not be discouraged.

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