IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 58

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Ensuring that children have regular physical exercise should be the responsibility of parents and therefore schools should not waste valuable school time having sports lessons as part of the curriculum. To what extent do you agree?

Children need to be physically active and fit to ensure that their biological growth is normal at all times and the onus of this should lie with their parents and not with schools. These educational institutions should not waste valuable time having sports lessons as a part of the curriculum. I completely disagree with this idea and this essay will provide reasons and explanations for the same.

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People in the current generation are not fit and active. This will cause health problems in the future. What could be the reasons for the inactivity and suggest some solutions for this issue.

People of the current generation are not physically active and they will be prone to health issues in near future due to this situation. The main cause for this situation is the attitude of giving a low priority to individual well-being and It is recommended to put more time in activities that improve their personal well-being.

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some people think that the government i s wasting money on arts and that this money could better be spent elsewhere. To what extents do you agree with this view?

There is no doubt that government spend a large part of its money on arts. While some people consider it is a destruction of taxpayers money and it could be spent on other things. However, I totally contradict with the former argument which I will discuss in the latter view with suitable example.

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One of the most important issues facing the world today is a shortage of food and some think genetically modified foods are a possible solution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Lack of food availability is raising a significant concern in this temporary world, and there is a biology-related solution that scientists suggest is genetically modified foods. In my perspective, utilizing this biology technique will solve the shortage of foods because it eliminates some of the potential causes of this issue.

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Forests produce fresh oxygen and participate in regulating climate. But every year tree cover of our planet is lessening due to deforestation. What are the primary causes of deforestation? To what results may it lead?

Forests are the lungs of the earth and maintain the eco-balance. Reduction in forest areas will affect mankind survival. Urbanisation and agricultural expansion primarily have caused deforestation. Eventually, it will lead to a hotter climate and less availability of oxygen for humans. In this essay, the main causes of deforestation and the results which will lead will be discussed.

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The continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity.

Nowadays, due to the growth of the populace, people are facing a lot of problems like illiteracy, pollution, lack of resources and many others. Whereas, there are few reasons behind this tremendous growth. This essay will support my stand on why it is the world's biggest issue with valid arguments in the following paragraphs.

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Many things that used to be done in the home by hands are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages?

Several tasks that used to be accomplished manually at the house are now being performed by machinery . The aforementioned growth's merits outnumber its demerits. Both advantages and disadvantages of the above development will be discussed in the essay below.

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Computer games are very popular for all ages and nationalities. Parents think this has little educational value and it will be harmful for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this current day and age, games have been considered a major sports activity. Additionally, countries around the globe have seen a significant rise in the popularity of these playing stations. While some believe this has little to no educational value for children and others disagree with this statement. In my opinion, controlled amounts of playing should not be discouraged.

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Production of carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gases has a heating effect on the atmosphere and results in global warming. Why global warming is considered one of the most serious issues nowadays? How can this problem be solved?

Global warming is the topic of all the discussions these days. Emissions of greenhouse gases made the temperature of the planet go up. The rise in overall heat of the planet will result in melting of water resources rapidly and the hotter climate will not be suitable for mankind’s survival. One and only ecologically efficient solution of this will be the trees. In this essay, the effects of global warming and its solution will be discussed.

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Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge and experience.

The question of whether people should be educated about the past is quite controversial. Both sides and the reasons why I totally disagree with the given statement will be discussed in this essay.

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A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The question of whether people are judged by their characteristics or according to their social prestige is a quite debatable topic today. It is considered by some that people are mostly judged by their wealth and social position, not by their core values. Both sides will be examined and I will discuss why I disagree with the given statement.

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Tourism is an ever growing industry What benefits do you think tourism brings to individuals and society

The tourism industry is continuously experiencing growth which I believe is very advantageous to people and community. These merits will be discussed in the essay below.

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Some people think that it s necessary to involve the whole family into nurturing and upbringing a child, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The question of whether a whole family is needed to raise a child is a topical issue today. It is considered by some that children ought to be brought up in a multigenerational family, while others argue that a two-parent family might be more beneficial. Both sides of the argument will be examined and I will discuss them now.

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic? What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

Because the tourism industry is well managed and equipped, it has become easier to travel to places which were isolated to date. Although there are many advantages to these trips, there are few drawbacks attached to it. In the upcoming paragraphs, we will analyze both the viewpoints.

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Some countries achieve international success by building specialized facilities to train top athletes instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Numerous nations are becoming successful at the international platform by providing training to their best athletes instead of working on improving facilities for everybody. I am of the opinion that it has many drawbacks and it will be justified in the following paragraphs.

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Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your Opinion?

In this current day and age, science has improved the way we work and pursue different tasks. computerization has advanced in the last decade to make certain tasks easy as well as efficient. While some people do believe that eventually all jobs will be performed by robots and others believe the right time has not arrived yet. In my opinion, jobs which put human life in danger should help of automation.

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Many countries now face an economic downturn so it is better for each country to focus on its own problems rather than helping other countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

In recent years, the degradation of many world's economics has seen a long-term increasing tendency. There is an opinion that governments should shift their emphasis on their development and not invest their efforts and financial resources to help others. I completely disagree with this statement and the following essay will prove my point of view.

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There are many extinct animals’ species in the world. Some people think we should protect animals from dying out, while others believe we should spend more time on problems of human beings. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

A lot of species have extinct in recent years. It is been argued by some people that time should be dedicated towards their protection others oppose and state that time should be given to address the human-related issues. Animals should be protected as they are a part of our ecosystem while the welfare of humans should be kept in mind. I strongly believe that issues of both animals and humans can be solved simultaneously. In this essay, why to address the problems of animals and humans will be discussed.

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Some people believe that children should spend all of their free time with their families. Others believe that this is unnecessary or even negative. Discuss the possible arguments on both sides, and say which side you personally support

Nobody can deny that parental influence is crucial for children, at least in cases where children live with their parents, foster parents or guardians. However, it is by no means clear that children should be around the family. This essay will discuss the negative impacts on children spending their time with the nuclear family and other relatives.

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we don’t really need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

There is no doubt that advertising plays a prominent role in today's world. We see adverts on television, online, SMS and streets. While some people believe it provokes them to buy more, others argue that it is a better approach to market the customers. I would agree with the former opinion.

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