IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 58

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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In the past, the role of a teacher was to provide information. Today, students have access to a lot of information. There is, therefore, no role for teacher in modern education. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays due to advent of technology like: the internet, people believe that their children have an access to everything they need to study,as per which they do not need any teacher, however, I partially differ in this statement. This essay shall present both the sides along with relevant examples.

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Nowadays getting a job is becoming harder in poor countries leading to a rise in unemployment. Some people believe that pupils should only be allowed to access primary education while others believe that secondary education is necessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Increasing population has become a major problem resulting in unemployment in many sectors of developing and under-developed countries. Higher Studies is a need of an hour but some people still think that primary education would suffice. I agree with the former view which would be discussed in my essay.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

A percentage of the population believes that youngsters can focus on the fields they like most while others argue that they must give importance to the courses like engineering, software that will be fruitful to them for their upcoming life. Although it is true that those studies provide guaranteed employment, my opinion is inclined towards pursuing favourite topics. This essay looks into both the views in terms of motivational factors and job opportunity.

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Do you feel it is better for young people leaving school to study further at University or go straight into the workplace ?

Students in most of the educational institutions pursue higher education from the universities after completing their schooling. In my point of view, I feel that it is good for them to attain higher education in order to choose the field of their interest and continue their career in the same area. In the upcoming paragraphs, I would elaborate on the reason for getting higher studies with a suitable example.

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More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why? Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many individuals think that there is no benefit of having babies at the early span of the marriage. However, some couples don't follow the same plan after marriage. In further discussion, I will shed light on the advantage of having kids after a few or more years of marriage.

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Exams are the best way of assessing a student’s level. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that the majority of students do not feel comfortable in doing exams or tests to assess their knowledge about a subject. However, I believe those evaluations are appropriate in order to evaluate a student. This essay will present arguments to support my opinion.

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In modern society, some people argue that schools become unnecessary as student can study at home via the Internet. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, it has become common to get an education online. In this contemporary era, some individuals argue that studying in conventional schools is not significant and opine that studying online at home is the need of this century. I completely disagree with this notion and, I would explain the reasons for my opinion in this essay.

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Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Modern life has drastically altered people's attitude to leisure activities. There is an opinion that a person can satisfy his hobby only in case he faces complications. I partially agree with this statement, and the following essay will explain my point of view.

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Society is based on rules and laws. It could not function if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted to do. To what extent do you agree or not?

It is generally understood that society is based on rules and laws. However, others opine that society could still operate properly even if its members have the right to do anything they desired. I completely disagree with that view.

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Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy?

In this era, money is the most important thing which makes life easier and pleasant. However, it is necessary to make your soul more comfortable with luxury items. When a person is living a magnificence life they do not need to worry about anything and with wealth,any problem can be solved. Moreover, the family is the most delightful and peaceful way of happiness. In this essay, we will discuss both views in detail.

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More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why? Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The overwhelming majority of young people are inclined to marry after graduating from university or after becoming prosperous. Young adults do not have an intention in becoming parents, as they want to travel around the world and chasing after desire. I reckon this is an absolutely positive trend.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that online shipping has an impact on small shop vendors that may cause to shut down their business. However, I completely disagree with this statement, and this essay will discuss how local shopkeepers take advantage of instant product delivery and suggest that all people do not trust products sold online.

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Employers should give longer holidays to employees to encourage them to do their job well. Do you agree?

There is a common belief that companies should make vacations longer for their workers. In this essay, I will explain the reasons for my opinion.

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Some people think that resources should be spent on protecting wild animals, while others think those would be better used for the human population. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

People have contrasting views, whether it would be better to expend budget for conserving wild creatures or human progress. In my opinion, expenditure should be made on the basis of demand; however, both views will be discussed in the essay.

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People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems? Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

Citizens in metropolises encounter a lot of issues every day. The biggest problems are traffic jam, irritating adults and air contamination. Reducing the number of municipalities' residents is an optimal approach the administration should implement.

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Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case ? Is this a good thing or a bad thing ?

Folks prefer to get on nifty costumes to show up their beauty so that they can get a privilege to the people. The foremost reason for this is to be popular and famous to the persons so that they can get mental satisfaction. From my perspective, this is not a good thing at all.

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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Railways deserve more expenditure instead of the roads by the governments. I give my vote in the support of trains because travelling through these are faster, secure, fun, and cost-efficient rather than on highways. So, spending on the railway will be profitable in the long run for both the public and the administration.

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There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making global temperatures higher. What might be the man-made causes of temperatures rising? How should we deal with this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The overwhelming majority of people assume human-activities are destroying the ecosystem of the world. As a result, global temperature is growing continuously. In this essay, I will examine the main cause of this phenomenon, and suggest a viable solution to this issue.

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Nowadays for many people the Internet is replacing regular books. What do you think will happen in the future and what is your opinion?

According to some people, the internet and connected devices are taking place of traditional books. This essay will discuss what could be expected for the future and also provide arguments to support why I believe this is a positive change.

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Numerous characters deem it is more righteous to incite challenges between students; in contrast, certain groups of people oppose and affirm learning to work as a team with each other is a more valuable skill than the former one in becoming respected individuals in the future. In this essay, I will discuss, firstly, why competition is essential for kids, and secondly, the merit of improving soft skills, followed by a reasoned conclusion.

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