IELTS Writing Samples Band 9. Page 62

IELTS Writing Samples Band 9

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Production of carbon dioxide and other greenhouse gases has a heating effect on the atmosphere and results in global warming. Why global warming is considered one of the most serious issues nowadays? How can this problem be solved?

Global warming is the topic of all the discussions these days. Emissions of greenhouse gases made the temperature of the planet go up. The rise in overall heat of the planet will result in melting of water resources rapidly and the hotter climate will not be suitable for mankind’s survival. One and only ecologically efficient solution of this will be the trees. In this essay, the effects of global warming and its solution will be discussed.

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Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge and experience.

The question of whether people should be educated about the past is quite controversial. Both sides and the reasons why I totally disagree with the given statement will be discussed in this essay.

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A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The question of whether people are judged by their characteristics or according to their social prestige is a quite debatable topic today. It is considered by some that people are mostly judged by their wealth and social position, not by their core values. Both sides will be examined and I will discuss why I disagree with the given statement.

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Tourism is an ever growing industry What benefits do you think tourism brings to individuals and society

The tourism industry is continuously experiencing growth which I believe is very advantageous to people and community. These merits will be discussed in the essay below.

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Some people think that it s necessary to involve the whole family into nurturing and upbringing a child, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The question of whether a whole family is needed to raise a child is a topical issue today. It is considered by some that children ought to be brought up in a multigenerational family, while others argue that a two-parent family might be more beneficial. Both sides of the argument will be examined and I will discuss them now.

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic? What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

Because the tourism industry is well managed and equipped, it has become easier to travel to places which were isolated to date. Although there are many advantages to these trips, there are few drawbacks attached to it. In the upcoming paragraphs, we will analyze both the viewpoints.

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Some countries achieve international success by building specialized facilities to train top athletes instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Numerous nations are becoming successful at the international platform by providing training to their best athletes instead of working on improving facilities for everybody. I am of the opinion that it has many drawbacks and it will be justified in the following paragraphs.

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Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your Opinion?

In this current day and age, science has improved the way we work and pursue different tasks. computerization has advanced in the last decade to make certain tasks easy as well as efficient. While some people do believe that eventually all jobs will be performed by robots and others believe the right time has not arrived yet. In my opinion, jobs which put human life in danger should help of automation.

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Many countries now face an economic downturn so it is better for each country to focus on its own problems rather than helping other countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

In recent years, the degradation of many world's economics has seen a long-term increasing tendency. There is an opinion that governments should shift their emphasis on their development and not invest their efforts and financial resources to help others. I completely disagree with this statement and the following essay will prove my point of view.

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There are many extinct animals’ species in the world. Some people think we should protect animals from dying out, while others believe we should spend more time on problems of human beings. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

A lot of species have extinct in recent years. It is been argued by some people that time should be dedicated towards their protection others oppose and state that time should be given to address the human-related issues. Animals should be protected as they are a part of our ecosystem while the welfare of humans should be kept in mind. I strongly believe that issues of both animals and humans can be solved simultaneously. In this essay, why to address the problems of animals and humans will be discussed.

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Some people believe that children should spend all of their free time with their families. Others believe that this is unnecessary or even negative. Discuss the possible arguments on both sides, and say which side you personally support

Nobody can deny that parental influence is crucial for children, at least in cases where children live with their parents, foster parents or guardians. However, it is by no means clear that children should be around the family. This essay will discuss the negative impacts on children spending their time with the nuclear family and other relatives.

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Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we don’t really need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

There is no doubt that advertising plays a prominent role in today's world. We see adverts on television, online, SMS and streets. While some people believe it provokes them to buy more, others argue that it is a better approach to market the customers. I would agree with the former opinion.

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Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation has more advantages or more disadvantages ?

It is widely accepted that these days many people struggle for more hours and have hardly any hour for entertainment activities. Everyone is well aware that implementing leisure activity is very important. Still, people miss including it due to long working hours. Therefore, to keep oneself feel fresh and healthy, recreation is of utmost importance. There is one school of thought which believes that working overtime at the career will fetch more benefits in terms of promotion. Whereas others believe that in the long run, it has more disadvantages. We will throw some light on the same in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Society is based on rules and laws. If individuals were free to do whatever they want to do, it could not function. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?

Numerous characters deem the community gets formed on regulations and legislations and assume if people start acting as they wanted the society will not be called the public; in contrast, certain groups of people oppose and affirm if the society is centred on laws and regulations, we would not live with freedom and civil liberties. I reckon the civilization is formulated on public policies.

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The typical teaching situation of a teacher and students in the class will not exist by the year 2050. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Numerous characters deem our conventional educating program will be altered, and students will not be attending class; in contrast, certain groups of people oppose and affirm pupils will be studying at school. Besides this, the old educational program will be lasting as usual. I reckon the current model will surely be changed by the 2050s.

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Professional workers like doctors, nurses and teachers make a greater contribution to society and so should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are many types of professional workers available in this world that requires them to put extra effort. A person who involved in profession categories as expert workers must be treated differently compare than other jobs, In my own perspective, I strongly agree with an important profession like doctors, nurses and teachers suppose to received higher-paid as their contribution is direct to the nation.

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Some educationalists say that every child should be taught how to play a musical instrument. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Numerous characters deem every kid must acquire skill in playing the musical appliance; in contrast, certain groups of people oppose and affirm it is a wastage of time to try becoming competent in a musical instrument. I reckon every youngster got not obligated to become capable of playing a musical apparatus.

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Some people think that outdoor activities are more beneficial for children’s development than playing computer games. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Numerous characters deem it is more advantageous for children to spend hours outdoor activities such as playing basketball, riding a bike, and hiking than staying at home; in contrast, certain groups of people oppose and affirm that playing virtual games at house is better than playing outdoor for kids' development. I reckon it is necessary to play outside.

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Some people think that outdoor activities are more beneficial for children’s development than playing computer games. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Numerous characters deem it is more advantageous for children to spend hours in activities such as playing basketball, riding a bike, and hiking than staying at home; in contrast, certain groups of people oppose and affirm that playing virtual games at their houses is better than playing outside for kids' development. I reckon it is necessary for kids to play outside.

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The best way to learn English is to study with native teachers.” What do you think about this opinion? State your point and give reasons and examples to support your answer.

In the modern era, English has been considered a universal form of communication. Today, various jobs,social activities ,communication signboards are all written in English to make sure everyone understands. While some people believe the best way to learn this dialect is with native teachers, while others disagree. I believe, as a society,we should promote excellence rather than the background to promote teaching.

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