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IELTS Opinion Writing Samples Band 6.5

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School teachers used to be source to information; however, some people argue that teachers are not as important as before due to the increasing variety of information resources. What is your opinion?

Many people think teachers only can teach. And there are many technologies that we can find on computers which can allow children to find and learn that is easier than in old times. So, some people think that teachers are no more necessary nowadays. However, I think teachers are still necessary and important.

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School teachers used to be sources of information; however, some people argue that teachers are not as important as before due to the increasing variety of information resources. What is your opinion?

Many people think teachers only can teach that there are many resources such as computers which can allow children to find and learn that is easier than in old times. So, some people think that teachers are no more necessary nowadays. In my opinion, I completely disagree with this perspective that I think they are still necessary and important.

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Pollution around the world is becoming a serious problem. Do you think this is a problem that should be solved internationally or at a local level?

Environmental degradation is taking place at an alarming rate all over the world. Although it is the duty of every individual to practice sustainability but considering the severity of the problem, in my opinion, the major responsibility lies with the international organizations as they have more resources to spare for innovating substantial solutions to tackle this ever-increasing global warming and environmental pollution.

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In The future, nobody will buy printed newspapers and books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying, to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is often argued, that digitalization is the new norm, especially for the future and this will bring an end to the print media. I completely disagree with this statement, as the printed media is still an immense part of many.

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Some people believe that what children watch on television influences their behavior. Others say that amount of time spent watching television influences their behavior. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People have differing views about the impact of watching TV on children’s behavior. Although watching television can bring certain benefits for our kids, I suppose the disadvantages should not be ignored and this essay will analyze the reasons.

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Some people think the news has no connection to people’s lives, so it is a waste of time to read the news in the newspaper and watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A lot of millennials are of the notion that daily updates from the world do not play a vital role in the life of an individual. It is merely time wastage to read newspapers and watch the news on the television. I partially agree with the aforementioned statement and will discuss both sides of the topic.

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School teachers used to be source to information; however, some people argue that teachers are not as important as before due to the increasing variety of information resources. What is your opinion?

Although it is believed by certain people that the role of teachers has been superseded by the growing number of informative resources. So, some people think that they are no more necessary nowadays. In my opinion, I completely disagree with this perspective that I think they are still necessary and important.

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Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's modern development, major organizations are calling on countries and people around the world to join hands to protect wildlife. But sadly this is seen as a waste of money and wildlife has nowhere to live in this 21st century. This is ridiculous. I completely disagree with that thought. Because wild animals live in natural forests. When we don't protect them, we don't protect the forest. The consequences of deforestation are enormous, no different from humans killing themselves. So protecting wildlife is protecting human life and protecting the green planet we're fortunate to be on.

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Some people think that exercise is the key to health while others feel that having a balance diet is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Recently, it is often argued that exercise is essential to keep healthy rather than having a balanced diet, while some object to it. Many believe that physical activities and sports are the most crucial; furthermore, both views will be discussed in the essay.

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Getting promotion is one of the biggest driver for people to apply to themselves and work hard in the modern workplace. Why do you think people are so driven to get promotion? What other factors influence people to work hard?

Promotion motivates employees to work very hard in the institution.They also want to perform challenging roles and responsibilities.Even though,there are some others factors are also which make them work hard in the organisations.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is popular for companies to advertise their products by presenting them as innovative commodities. From my point of view, it is reasonable for businesses to promote their goods in such a way, while I think this phenomenon could be a negative development.

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Nowadays, many families move overseas for job opportunities. Some people think this beneficial for the children of these families, while others think children will find it difficult. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In many parts of the world, looking for job opportunities oversea is common. Many families move to other countries with the hope of better quality of life for themselves and their children. While others decide to live and work in their countries because they and their children might find it hard to live in other countries ,especially a country where English is not the native language. In my opinion, it is better to work oversea if the work can improve the quality of life for their children and family.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, we are living in a world where everybody entangles with his/her busy life in that subject of giving more attention to self, especially health is faded off, and this event will undoubtedly affect public well-being. Regarding this matter, some people say that the finest way for general well-being is provided by the construction of more sports facilities; however, others believe that such actions would have negligible effects, and other measures are required. In the following, I am going to discuss both points of view and give my own verdict on it.

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As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this day and age, the social responsibilities of companies are a hotly – debated topic. From my perspective, this statement is absolutely true. The enterprises have an obligation to support both government and society.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Changes that have been made in any given society result from individual changes in a large group of people and these alterations can be created by internal or external motivators. One of these alterations in any given society is the public health improvement. Regarding this topic, some individuals believe that the finest way to meliorate public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities; however, others say that this action would have a negligible effect on the aforementioned material and that other measures are required. In the following, I am going to discuss both points of view and give my own verdict on it.

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Art and music are considered some of the fundamental elements of all societies. Do you think art and music still have a place in today's modern world of technology? Should children spend more time learning art and music at school?

Nowadays, most people believe that art and music are considerably crucial elements. This essay will explain more about its popularity and meaning within the globalized era and why children should spend more time learning it.

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Some people say that no one should do the same job forever while others believe that doing the same job is beneficial for the individual, company and society. Discuss both view and give your opinion?

Changing job infrequently can impact badly in a people’s daily life which can destroy a person’s carrier. Some individuals hold the opinions that everyone should change their work, while others argued with them that a fix job has lots of benefits for personally and also for company as well as for society. In this I will analyse both aspects and my opinion is that changing job once or twice in a persona carrier is fine but infrequently can be dangerous.

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Some people claim that workers should wear uniforms. Others allege that people should be free in their choice. Discuss both opinions, and give your own opinion.

There is a debate concerning about dress code for workers, and whether they should wear uniforms or be free of their choice. I believe that it is quite important to wear working outfits. Analysing the benefit of wearing formal dress, as well as the drawback for that will prove this.

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Today more people are overweight than ever before. What in your opinion are the primary causes of this? What measures can be taken to overcome this epidemic?

Nowadays obesity is a big issue and needs to be tackled strongly by our healthcare system. Among new ,generations this phenomenon is spreading fast and in twenty years the death of cardiovascular or endocrinological diseases, due to obesity, will be doubled. There are several reasons that can explain this problem, but I think that the main one is evolution.

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Popular events like football world cup and other international sporting occassions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, numerous children have an issue that they can not concentrate in classes. There is an increasing trend of the issue appearing in both developed and developing countries, which relates to intrinsic and external educational systems such as the improvement of technology, social media, mobile games, low-quality lessons, and a huge quantity of school knowledge.

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