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IELTS Opinion Writing Samples Band 6.5

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Children are experiencing increasing educational, social and commercial pressure. What are the causes? What measures do you think can be taken to reduce them?

At present, children have to deal with the great external pressure created by their surrounding environment. This essay will elaborate on relevant facts of this matter by providing examples as well as solutions for them.

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It is often said that we should work to live, not live to work. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion.

Most people in the world have to find jobs, some people think that we should work to live but not live to work, this essay will discuss both views and agree this view.

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Ensuring that children have regular physical exercise should be the responsibility of parents and therefore schools should not waste valuable school time having sports lessons as part of the curriculum. To what extent do you agree?

A healthy and fit life is a positive part of life.

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The governments should give each citizen a basic income so that they have enough money to live on ,even if they are not unemployed. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that, although people do not work, government organizations must provide an income for their survival. From my perspective, I agree with the statement partially because both factors have their own benefits. In this essay, both viewpoints will be discussed with the relevant supporting ideas and examples.

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Some people think saving money is good, but others think that spending money is a better way to enjoy life. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Some people assert that they can fully enjoy life by spending money. But others assert that saving money is a better value than spending money because they can dream about a better future by saving money. I think both views are persuasive, but I support more the latter idea.

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In some countries it is thought advisable that children begin formal education at four years old, while in others they do not have to start school until they are seven or eight. How far do you agree with either of these views

Several representatives of contemporary society deem that children should embark to go to schools at the age of four whereas others argue with this position and allege that juveniles are ready to be school students at seven or eight years old. From my perspective, it cannot be denied that these positions are composed of a fraction of the truth. Therefore, I am going to reflect on this essay my own view of such an issue and to provide strong arguments, which confirm my own opinion.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel or to work in a foreign country. Other say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is a huge controversy between a group who thinks learning foreign language is only limited for travelling overseas or doing business, and other group sees that there are other reasons to learn new language such as being tourist guide in your country and so on. In perspective, i believe that learning language is a hobby and can use it for fun and many other purposes.

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There has been some controversy about the practise of companies in wealthy countries outsourcing labour to countries where wages are lower. What do you think are the disadvantage and advantages of this practise? Support your opinion with reasons and examples from your own knowledge and experiance

People opine that providing cheap labour to employees outside their country destroys opportunities for local employment. I disagree with this although it is noteworthy to say that there are other factors involved. In this essay, I will elucidate both perspectives and illustrate on why outsourcing is important in the industry.

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Some people think parents should supervise their children’s activities closely, while others believe children should have more freedom. Discuss both sides of the arguments and give your opinion.

The matter of educating youngsters has always been a hot topic for debate. There are two main sides of the argument, revolving around the question of whether or not should kids commit mistakes. While most people believe youngsters should freely do what they think is correct and should bear the responsibilities coming from their actions, the opponents argue that the role of adults in teaching their kids is to stop them before they make errors.

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Many believe that living in a city offers greater benefits compared to life in the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is claimed that the city offers a wide range of opportunities as compared to rural areas.I totally agree with the statement and in my coming paragraphs, I shall enlighten you on

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Childhood obesity is becoming a problem thoughout the developed world . Because of this , some people think that adverts for fast food , sweets and sugary snacks should not be allowed in schools and colleges . To what extent do you agree or disagree with this ?

advertisement: notice or announcement for promoting a product in public . Eating junk food cause many diseases like obesity in children which is very common nowadays . Due to this , some argue that ads for an unhealthy meal should be banned near school premice so that the obesity rate can decrease . I totally disagree with their statement .

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Some people say that now is the best time in history to be living. What is your opinion about this? What other time in history would be interesting to live in?

Human life has revolutionized differently in each and every time period of history. While I agree with those people who believe that the current era is an ideal period to live in, I also think that the time before the 18th century would be a fascinating period to live in because a social connection was stronger among people.

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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate school. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that making boys and girls study in separated schools will be more advantageous by some sort of public. However, others think on the contrary way and consider that studying in mixed academies will be better than compared to the first belief. This essay will discuss both of these views and give my own opinion below too.

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Music should not be taught in schools along with other subjects such as computers and science. Do you agree or disagree? Or (How far do you agree with this statement?) (To what extent do you agree with this statement?)

In ,schools music should not be taught together with advanced subjects like computers and science. I disagree with this statement as music should be taught along with subjects like science and computers. Studying advanced subjects daily will get stressed so students can take a break and enjoy music classes. ,Also students who study computers and science don't have a lot of extracurricular activities the music will replace the role.

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More and more people are seriously overweight. Some people suggest the solution to this problem is to increase the price of fattening foods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this modern era and the gut's responsive bleat, people today have been completely dependent on fast food. However, this transient decoy comes with its ramifications. I would differ from the viewpoint presented by the masses. I shall profound by views on this issue.

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ome people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

In this modern world, due to the global trend, some people think that we have too many choices that we can choose. This essay totally agrees with this statement and will explain why.

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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some languages disappear every year. Some people believe that this is not important because life would be less difficult if there were fewer languages in the world. I do not agree with this view. This essay will discuss the reasons that support my point of view.

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Some people argue that job satisfaction is more important than job security, while others believe that they cannot always expect job satisfaction, and a permanent job is more important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion?

There are controversial notions heating up a debate over the imperativeness of job satisfaction and job security. Whilst some people hold a strong view that job certainty is not so pivotal as its fulfilment, the opposite claims that the occupation contentment cannot always live up to their expectations, and a long-term career is more fundamental. Though each has its own redeeming features, I would contend that it is optimal to combine both cited factors.

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Studying the English language in an English-speaking country is the best but not the only way to learn language. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some studies mention that the easiest and effective method to learn English is taking the classes in an English-speaking country. However, I disagree with this idea because dont matter if the person study the language in a country with the target language as a native idiom, the real important thing is the person effort to learn. I will to support my opinion in the beow paragraphs.

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Some people think that the government should invest money teaching science than other subjects to make progress. Do you agree or disagree?

Development in the world mostly depends on science and technologies and some people are of opinion that government should invest all money teaching science rather than other subjects, I partially agree with the above statement as science can make progress by making new inventions but for overall life ,experience one should have knowledge of other subjects like sociology, history and literature and going to elaborate further in this essay.

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