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IELTS Opinion Writing Samples Band 6.5

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In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinions on this?

Mostly in every country, children are doing paid work. Some individual opines that child work is not appreciated. However, others see this as great initiate work for children. I believe that nowadays, doing some paid work at an early age is beneficial in many ways.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Recently, the importance of human rights is becoming more significant. Therefore, current individuals pay more attention to diversity and freedom than they in the past. As a consequence, it is said that people have variety of choices in their life. In the following essay, I will argue that I tend to agree with the statement but it totally depends on the person’s circumstance.

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Some people think that exercise is the key to health while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays many people, especially all ages and gender, important to consider how to live a healthy lifestyle every day. Being any painless living has many opportunities such as doing physical workout and a balanced diet. The two sides of the issue will be analyzed before a conclusion, quite reasonable, is found.

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In some countries the average of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the cause of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

It is true that overweight people are increasing recently, resulting from people spend less time exercising and careless about the lifestyle they live. In this essay, the causes and solutions will be illustrated.

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In many countries, more and more young people are leaving school but unable to find jobs. What problems do you think youth unemployment causes for individuals and the society? What measures should be taken to reduce the level of unemployment among youngsters?

In this day and age, more and more contemporary attention has been placed on the opinion that the accelerating number of youngsters is leaving school but unable to look for jobs. Issues brought about by youth unemployment for individuals and society as well as necessary solutions to curb those ones will be clarified in this essay.

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All education should be free to all people and paid and managed by the government. Do you agree or disagree with the statement.

In the contemporary era, there is an argument over an issue that education becomes the pivotal role in everyone life and it ought to be free of cost for all individuals or totally managed by bureaucrats. I completely agree with the above notion that can be explained in the upcoming paragraph.

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most of our information comes from the internet are incorrect. do you agree or disagree.

In today's world, the internet is of paramount importance to people. Our daily activities, such as newspaper reading, office related work, and mobile phone activities, tend to revolve around the usage of the internet. While it is quite evident that our dependency on the internet is profound, yet, it is questionable, whether the majority of the information on the internet is correct. While I agree that data from the internet can be flawed, yet, this is not to the extent as discussed in the argument.

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Studying art in school improves students' performance in other subjects, because it is easier for multi-skilled students to learn new things. That's why art should be obligatory in schools. Do you agree or disagree?

Education is a continuous process that aids learning, acquiring knowledge and skills to one's character. Learning an optional course like arts at younger age is much convenient and could help to enhance children allround rating in academy. I oppsose this statement of adding a course in curriculam because of tough competition and choosing a subject accordance to the interest needs to be keep in mind. This essay shall discuss the reasons with relevant examples why I am holding this view.

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Studying art in school improves students' performance in other subjects, because it is easier for multi-skilled students to learn new things. That's why art should be obligatory in schools. Do you agree or disagree?

Education is a continuous process which aids learning, acquiring knowledge and skills to one's character. Learning an optional course like arts at younger age is much convenient and could help to enhance children allround rating in academy. I oppsose this statement of adding a course in curriculam because of tough competition and choosing a subject accordance to the interest needs to be keep in mind. This essay shall discuss the reasons with relevant examples why I am holding this view.

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Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organized and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this?

Organizing things properly and ordered, in some people’s view, plays an indispensable role in people’s work and life. From my perspective, I totally agree with their opinion due to the following reasons.

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Some people argue that school is no longer necessary because children can obtain all of the information they need from the internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this modern era of the internet, Lots of learning resources are available online. Some people believe that schools are no longer necessary for children. I agree with the point that students can get an education over the internet, but schools are essential for a child's overall development.

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We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, due to the increasing global problems such as poor living condition the rate of the people who need help are considerably high. Although there might be some limited ways to help each other, I believe that government must be responsible for solving these issues.

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In many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent. Why do you think this is and what can be done about it?

In this contemporary era, crime has drastically grown up in many countries. Even more, crime has become more violent when compared to past. Many reasons behind these crimes, it might be poverty,unemployment or legal issue on properties. This essay will discuss some causes of this problem and also suggest some solutions to tackle it.

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Communication and Personality Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life. Why do you think that is the case? What is the most important thing to succeed in life?

Some individuals fail in school, while they are being successful in end up the life. I completely agree with that statement because human beings have different kind of talents. I will explain below the paragraphs.

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In most developed countries shopping is not only about buying the goods you need, it is also perceived as entertainment. Is it a positive or negative development? Give your own opinion and examples based on your experience.

Malls and shopping complexes are slowly turning to entertainment entities in this contemporary world.A plethora of developed countries are observing that shopping is not restricted to purchasing daily needs but also as a weekend gateway for many metropolitan individuals. This essay will discuss the positive development and have an opinion that cities which lacks scenery features have arcades as their leisure options.

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Space exploration is much too expensive and the money should be spent on more important things. What is your opinion?

The current world is investing more in solar system research to find another living planet and the money being invested is very huge. Some people say that it is required to know what is the other side of the world and few argue that the cost can be turned to other important areas. I support the currency spent on space exploration and i will furnish my view in this essay.

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Large companies should pay higher salaries to CEOs and executives compared to other workers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that company CEOs and executives should receive much larger salaries than other employees in a company. This view suggests that people in positions of power, whether it is deserved or not should be highly compensated, which I find highly unconvincing.

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some people say that due to the growing number of unfit and overweight people sport should be made compulsory in all educational establishments. others claim that only voluntary decision to do sports help people to be fit, but compulsory physical education embarrasses and turns away students who don't like sport. give your opinion.

It is argued by some that the increasing number of unhealthy and physically unfit individuals can be solved by making sports a compulsory part of education. In my opinion, I believe that sports should be made mandatory in schools to lessen the alarming growth of overweight regardless if it is against their will.

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In some schools and universities, girls tend to choose art subjects (example literature), and boys tend to choose science subjects (example physics). Why do you think is so? Should this tendency be changed? Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, students have a plethora of options to choose for their career. However, it is a general perspective that females prefer art subjects whereas, males go for science subjects. There are several reasons for this as discussed in the following paragraphs further explained as to whether it is a positive thing or not.

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In some countries, employees are generally given two weeks of paid vacation time each year. In other countries, employees are given four or six weeks of paid vacation time. Considering the needs of both employee and employer, what do you think is a reasonable amount of paid vacation time for employees to have?

In the modern world the issue of the terms of paid holidays is frequently discussed due to its high importance. Some people believe that fourteen days per year is enough, while others may not agree. Personally, I support the opinion that this limit is not suitable for hard-working people and could lead to less business successful in general for a number of reasons and this essay will provide some evidence for such a point of view.

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