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IELTS Opinion Writing Samples Band 6.5

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Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. Do you agree or disagree?

Governments have numerous duties to provide requirements for getting better citizen's life in every field from art to technology or financial investments. Although, some citizens defend that public services have priority, the country's development is also dependent on cultural expenses. Country's open their culture to the world with their artists and sports person because they have no language. Therefore, I definitely don't find it over expense to investing money for art.

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Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars. To what extent do you agree?

Community service is the best punishment for people who commit certain crimes. While some individuals argue that they should be kept in the jail. This essay will give arguments in favour of the alternative sentence and provide a logical conclusion.

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With deforestation, urban development, and illegal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered as they lose their habitat, and some are even threatened to the point of extinction. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What measures can be taken to deal with this problem?

There is a common belief that many animals face serious dreads relating to losing their habitat and more importantly, becoming extinct due to cut down trees, sprawled cities and unlawfully shot animals. I certainly think that it is essential to preserve all kinds of animals (wild and domestic) and some urgent measures should be implemented in this regard.

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Some people say that traveling abroad is necessary to get knowledge about other countries, while others suggest that TV and the internet can also help people know about foreign countries. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In this contemporary era, gathering knowledge about the world is not only possible through travelling but also from the broadcasting media and the internet. Resultantly, whereas some individuals claim that it is now possible to know about all countries around the world by watching TV programmes, others contend that visiting abroad is paramount in order to deepen the knowledge. I, too, wholeheartedly feel that without having any practical experience, it is next to impossible to acquire solid ideas about other nations.

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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many languages go into extinction on an annual basis. While many would argue, and I completely disagree, that it is not essential as life will be better with fewer dailects across the globe. This essay will explain further.

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Some people believe that we should knock down historical buildings to make way for more practical new builds. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As our cities get more overpopulated, there is an increasing sentiment that we should demolish older construction and replace them with contemporary ones. In this essay, I will agree with this point of view. First, because this architecture can be more accessible, and second, because it can help us solve our housing crisis.

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In many societies in the world, the population is ageing rapidly and this is leading to an unsustainable increase in the cost of public healthcare. A nation’s population should pay for their healthcare provision in the future.To what extend do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Schools in some regions, mainly in developed countries, would use laptop computers for preparing the better condition for each student in having the proper education. Although this might have some drawbacks, which will be mentioned in this essay, it is better to organize educational plans with the knowledge of the possible side effects and knowing how to prevent them.

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Students are becoming more and more reliant on the Internet. While the Internet is convenient, it has many negative effects and its use for educational purposes should be restricted. How far do you agree with this statement?

In this age, there has been a passionate argument that students depend more on the internet in education. Many people thought that the internet has many benefits while there are others believe that is has many drawbacks. From my perspective, I believe that the internet plays a great role in educational process. The following paragraphs discuss both advantages and disadvantages of using the internet in education.

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Some people feel that the effects of advertising are positive for individuals and businesses, while others think they are negative. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that commercials have negative effects on persons and businesses while others, including me, think that they are beneficial. Both views will be discussed in this essay. Firstly, advertisements enable people to get information about a product. Advertisements don’t play a role in getting information. They give information.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree this statement?

There are several difficulties of being citizen of a country rather than your mother one and the most notable one is speaking a foreign language.

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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extend do you agree or disagree whit this statement?

As technology and other opportunities are advanced nowadays, there are numerous possibilities in front of us. I completely agree on this viewpoint with considering the range in offers made by companies according to your wealth and the ease in finding everything fit your wishes.

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The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issue involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with the problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. In what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often said that health is more valuable than wealth and it always rings true. Obesity causes a number of diseases that are very dangerous. Due to the rise in the number of people who are obese, some people are of the opinion that the best way to tackle this issue is by introducing more physical education into school curriculum. I am in complete agreement with this statement and through this essay, I will look to explore the reasons for it.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members how to be good members of society. Others, however believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is argued by several individuals that teaching social rules for children in school is more beneficial effect in becoming a good representative of society. Whereas, others claims parents should teach the same in order to a responsible person. I believe education from school and parents, both plays an crucial role in being a good member of a society.This essay will substantiate my opinion in the following paragraphs with relevant examples.

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Some people think that going to a fitness centre regularly is unnecessary. Instead, they believe that combining occasional exercise (such as going for walks) with a balanced diet is enough to stay healthy. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

In the current unprecedented time, everyone has to consider seriously and aware that being healthy is vital. To get fit, you may choose any workout. I tend to walk every day and keep a balanced diet. I don't think we need to visit a fitness centre daily for that.

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While some argue that the internet is a blessing as it helps with information, others think that it is not necessary to have such smount of information.What is your opinion?

The internet is a part of modern life, and this avails many benefits. However, there are some people thinking that availability of an excess amount of information has detrimental effects. In my opinion, to a large extent, I agree with this because the platform is not only unregulated, which causing undue stress but the flooding of information often makes it difficult to choose the right choice as well.

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In many countries, government prioritizes economic growth above all other concerns. What are the advantages and disadvantages and give your opinion.

Finance plays an important role to develop all the sectors for the growth of the nation. The government keeps economic growth ahead of the rest of the areas in the majority of nations. There are certain benefits and drawbacks of this concept which will be discussed in this essay, with the conclusion of my opinion.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation , such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money.Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

Everyone needs to cope with dislikable situations in their daily life. What's the best way to deal with unsatisfactory events in life?

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It is often argued that it is difficult to get children to read. Why do you think this is? What measures could be taken to encourage children to read more? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this contemporary world, education is an inevitable need for every human being and, as a result, they can learn a plethora of things such as discipline, politeness etc. Reading and writing from an early age always helps children for their future careers; however, it is often argued that it is hard to obtain children to reading. In this essay, I will explain why I think that and what imperative steps people can take to overlook this problem.

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Many high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 per cent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women. To what extent do you agree?

Females are employed across the globe in larger numbers in many organizations. It is true that many senior positions are occupied by males, but it is not the case in every establishment. A plethora of companies is fair enough to recruit ladies to a higher post if they are deserving. I completely disagree with this statement and will elaborate in the essay.

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Violence in the media promote violent in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Whether or not showing violent scenes in movies and TV Shows encourage violent behaviour in our society is one of the most controversial topics in the modern world. There is no doubt that what we see on television affect some of our life choices to some extent. However, I am certain that people do not become violent just because they saw it on television. In the following essay, I will provide arguments to prove that point.

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