IELTS Opinion Writing Samples Band 6

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It is believed by some people that music is an alternative to shorten distance between people in terms of age and culture. I strongly agree with this statement and this essay will present my opinion on that.
Nowadays the equilibrium between spending time with family and focusing on career development have becoming a major concern to parents. In this essay, I will discuss some reasons that explain that difficulty and also provide solutions which might solve it.
In this present world, motivating employees is a key attribute to the success of any organization. Employers often opt for performance based pay to achieve this. I agree that salary should be based on the revenue employees generate for a company to motivate them to work hard. Analyzing the advantages of pay based on the output , as well as the limitations of a fixed salary will prove this.
Nowadays, littering continues to be an escalating issue which requires urgent intervention. Otherwise, unless properly dealt with, the consequences will be detrimental on many levels. In my opinion, while steeper fines is an effective method to approach this problem, it is not the only available option.
Some people think that there have some issue if someone who lives in a foreign country and need to speak the local language. I disagree with this notion. In this essay, I will consider both sides of the argument and give my own point of view.
In the recent times, there has been a rise in the trend of working out and keeping in shape. Several individuals choose to go fitness centres while others prefer working out in the outdoors. Both are great ways to ensure a healthy regime where I feel that both are equally beneficial.
Few of schools feel that making schools uniforms mandatory decreases the display of social status competitions among students and due to reduction of such physical appearance observation, focus towards main goal i.e. study is increased. However, the rest of schools have a different view, rather they want to refrain students from wearing the common dress and convey that uniform doesn’t change student attributes towards their goals i.e. education.
Some believe that smartphones are erasing social interaction while others believe that it actually bring friends and family together through different ways of communication. In my point of view, I disagree to the statement to a higher extent as smartphones have made interaction easier by different mechanisms to interact with others but the quality of interactivity within close groups is weakening in comparison to older times. So, the statement has dual aspects which will be described in the below paragraphs.
Nowadays, several nations believe that the improvement in standards of living is through economic growth, even though, certain social aspects are foregone, therefore. Although economic advancements have several benefits such as improved health care and increased investments, it has some drawbacks as well, like increased pollution and inequality. In my view, the norm is unavoidable as it has more advantages than disadvantages.
There are different debates between students learn academic or music and Physical Education. Partners support academic skills, which enhance their competitiveness in future job-seeking. I disapprove opinion, I discuss why music and P.E befit for children as well.
In the contemporary world, more often robotic devices and machines are used in different processes and various industries. Furthermore, some people decide to simplify their housing responsibilities with their help. It seems to me that these changes are occurring just because of the development of modern computer technologies. This trend has only beneficial impacts such as more hours for self-development, family and increasing of the quality of completing tasks.
The pace of change in technological advancements have rebuild our way of shopping. While some people believe that online shopping is in constant growth, in which at some point it will result in the closing of all shops in towns, I extremely believe that stores will still exist, due to the fact that people find pleasure when going to stores, as well as, they attracts tourists.
Nowadays, the percentage of children under 18 involved in crimes has bee increasing. The thesis of parents and teachers are not encouraging these kids to get more social and emotional involvement is defended by psychologists as the main reason of the boost of youngsters. In this essay, I will give some reasons why I strongly agree with it.
The thought of one career is getting archived into people’s mind, whilst new trending option is having multiple jobs for earning money as well as learning while working will help people throughout life. I completely agree with this statement, as human are evolving day by day competitiveness is getting increased and to survive in this environment , continuous learning and diversified careers are necessary. First paragraph I will give some explanations and examples about how people have failed if they are putting all eggs in one basket while second paragraph will talk about getting your hands dirty with multiple job options and daily learning to improve logical and analytical ability.
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that advertisements foster us to purchase the things which are not required; however, others consider that advertisements help us to know more about the new product launched in the market. There is a widespread worry that this will leads to a myriad of concerns in one's life which will be elaborated in upcoming paragraphs.
Social networking sites are believed to had a big negative impact on people and society by many people. Although there is already a lot of debate related to this topic, It is still uncertain how this sites will impact the society in the future, as they aren't in our society for too long. Even though it may be early to say, I certainly agree that we can see negative impacts on children and teenagers who are growing along with these technologies.
Whether students should be working individually or in group is a controversial issue. While one part of the society claim that they reap more benefits when working alone, I side with those who argue for team work.
Some people believe that doing homework can help their children to learn better however there are few who think otherwise. In this essay, we will discuss both the perspectives.
දිවයිනේ, වැසි සහ සුළං තත්ත්වයේ වැඩිවීමක් අද (06) දිනයේ දී බලාපොරොත්තු විය හැකි බව කාලගුණ විද්‍යා දෙපාර්තමේන්තුව පවසයි. දිවයිනේ බොහෝ ප්‍රදේශවල වැසි හෝ ගිගුරුම් සහිත වැසි ඇති විය හැකි බව එම දෙපාරත්මේන්තුව සඳහන් කරයි. බස්නාහිර, සබරගමුව, මධ්‍යම සහ වයඹ පළාත්වලත් ගාල්ල, මාතර, මුලතිවු සහ මන්නාරම දිස්ත්‍රික්කවලත් ඇතැම් ස්ථානවලට මි.මී. 100 ට වැඩි තද වර්ෂාපතනයන් ඇති විය හැකි බව කාලගුණ විද්‍යා දෙපාර්තමේන්තුව විසින් නිකුත්කළ නිවේදනයේ දැක්වේ දිවයින හරහා විටින් විට හමන පැ.කි.මී (50-60) පමණ තරමක තද සුළං ඇතිවිය හැකි බව කාලගුණ විද්‍යා දෙපාර්තමේන්තුව සඳහන් කරයි. ගිගුරුම් සහිත වැසි ඇති වන විට අකුණු මඟින් සහ තාවකාලික තද සුළං මඟින් සිදුවන අනතුරු අවම කර ගැනීමට අවශ්‍ය පියවර ගන්නා ලෙස කාලගුණ විද්‍යා දෙපාර්තමේන්තුව ජනතාවගෙන් ඉල්ලා සිටී. දෘශ්‍ය ලෙස සූර්යයා දකුණට ගමන් කිරීමේදී, අගෝස්තු මස 28 වන දින සිට සැප්තැම්බර් මස 07 දක්වා ශ්‍රී ලංකාව ආසන්න අක්ෂාංශ වලට සෘජුවම ඉහලින් පවතී. අද (06) දින දහවල් 12:09 ට බෙන්තොට, මීගම, දොඩම්පපිටිය පැලවත්ත, බොඩගම සහ කතරගම ප්‍රදේශවලට ඉතා ආසන්නව හිරු මුදුන්ව පවතින බව කාලගුණ ...
few people believe that the difference between the lowest and highest wage should be reduced. I completely disagree with this affirmation, as the professional who is being paid high salary acquired a special type of skill and ability in comparison to the other.
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