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IELTS Opinion Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Some say that because many people are living much longer, the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerably. To what extent do you agree or disagree whit this statement?

some people mention about source of very numerous old people lives longer, the retire's age of working should be higher consciously. In this essay, I will discuss why I disagree with the topic.

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many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems.sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

In recent times, many processed food products are packed with excess sugar, and people prefer to consume sugary drinks and foods as it is cheaper than fresh foods. Moreover, processed foods may pave the way for myriads of health problems such as obesity, diabetes mellitus, hormonal imbalance and cardiac problems. So I agree that sugar-enriched food products ought to be sold at high prices than fresh foods to reduce the consumption of unhealthy food and drinks.

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The detailed description about crime will affect the people and cause many social problems. Some people say that the media should be strictly controlled. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a controversial perspective heating up a debate over whether it is necessary to strictly control the specific description of wicked acts. I consider myself an advocate of the opinion that crime information should not be released.

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SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT CHILDREN SHOULD ONLY READ ACADEMIC BOOKS. OTHERS BELIEVE THAT READING BOOKS FOR PLEASURE IS EQUALLY IMPORTANT. DISCUSS BOTH THESE VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OWN OPINION.

Reading is an essential skill which needs to be learned especially at the beginning of our lives. Among these methods is ,naturally, to practice using different materials suitable for reading. As many people chose academic resources , I believe that other interesting books are better choices ,to begin with.

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Prevention is better than cure researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventive measures , do you agree

It has been observed that an enormous amount of public funds are spent on sectors which can be redirected towards other necessary domains such as education and public development. Spending a hefty volume of funds on curing and researching diseases rather than on their prevention would be just like an open loop and will not provide any far-reaching benefits to the nation.

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The best way to obtain/ the key to/ most important factor in job satisfaction is salary. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (Best-way)

A number of factors can contribute towards somebody’s happiness in their career life. Having taken other factors into consideration, I, however, disagree that monetary compensation is the key to job fulfilment.

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Some people feel that the government should regulate the level of violence in films on television and at the cinema. Others feel that violent films should not be regulated. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People hold different opinions about whether violent films should be controlled. Although this could be true to some extent, I believe that regulating the level of violence in films is unnecessary.

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In today’s competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents go out to work. While some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income, others feel they lack support because of their parents’ absence. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that these days in this competitive world many families find they should both parents to go out to work. The question is, do children benefit from their parent's incomes or they will not find any support? In this essay, I am going to discuss both views and draw my own opinion.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Due to the technological advancements using gadgets such as tablets, and smartphones among children has been increasing incrementally in recent times. So it is highly likely for them to stick to the screen for a long time not only it can detrimental effect on children's eyesight but also it can severely affect their well-being of them physically and mentally. In my view, the potential threats of this trend are much greater than its positive effect.

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Some people say that teenagers should work part-time and earn money. This way they will learn basic lessons about work and become more disciplined. Others argue that teenagers shouldn't sacrifice their rest and after-school activities to work. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Public opinion is divided on the subject that young adults ought to work part-time and earn money. While some people argue that students will delay skills by working and become more disciplined, others believe that it is not necessary to sacrifice their childhood time for work. This essay will discuss both these points of view and argue in favour of the latter.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Due to technological advancements using gadgets such as tablets, and smartphones among kids has been increasing incrementally in recent times. So it is highly likely for them to stick to the screen for a long time not only it can detrimental effect on children's eyesight but also it can severely affect their well-being of them physically and mentally. In my view, the potential threats of this trend are much greater than its positive effect.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

Presently, universities are offering a variety of courses worldwide. The idea of whether students should pursue their interests because of passion and job satisfaction or offer courses only relevant in the future ,for instance, those related to science and technology because of job opportunities and higher income is still debatable. This essay discusses both viewpoints and my opinion in alignment with the latter will be given.

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"Prevention is better thon cure", Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. To what extent do you agree.

Because of their complication, some diseases need to be researched and studied, thus, many people think that it would be too expensive to cure them and prevention of them seems like the most optimal decision with which I would strongly disagree.

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Education is not a luxury but a basic human righ and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth. Do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that education plays a significant role in our lives. It is believed that schooling should be free of cost for everyone belonging to every sect of society as it is not a luxury but a right that every citizen has. In this essay, I will explain why I disagree with this belief with examples.

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it is important for people take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages

In recent times, it is believed that taking risks is essential for individuals not only in their professional lives but also in their life themselves. This essay will deliberately explain the drawbacks which are higher than the benefits of taking new steps.

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Schools should take more responsibility for the health of today’s children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Healthy and active children are the backbone of society. The physical and mental well-being of every child is extremely important as they are future leaders. However, unfortunately, there are many factors influencing their physical fitness which leads to a big burden to the country. The question is "who is responsible for children's health?". I believe that the institutions are also responsible, but only with certain limitations. I will discuss this issue in the following paragraphs with some examples.

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Traffic congestion and air pollution are becoming problematic in most cities around the world. People must be encouraged to use their cars less and public transport more. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Around the world, pollution in the atmosphere and heavy traffic was considered some of the biggest problems faced by every country. I completely agree with others who claimed that people must be encouraged to walk more or utilise public transportation more often.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It is a popular statement that music plays a vital role in combining a majority number of people who comes from different background. Personally, I extremely agree with the viewpoint for many reasons, described in the following paragraphs.

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It is better for children if the whole families (e.g. aunts, uncles and grandparents) are involved in the children's upbringing, rather than their fathers and mothers only. Give your opinion?

It is a highly debatable issue whether children should be raised in joint families in which aunts, uncles and grandparents contribute to bringing up children or by parents alone as in nuclear families. Although a joint family has many advantages, I firmly believe that a nuclear family is better for raising children.

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

there is no doubt that these days most of the countries developing expect some of them.The question is ,why developed nations should assist poor nations? In this essay, I am going to show to what extent I agree with this view.

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