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IELTS Opinion Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an un satisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

As everyone knows, the things or the situations that happen in our entire life could not desire our expectation; however, most of the people believe that it is better to deal with the problems, and find the practical methods that we could solve it to satisfy our needs, but some are not accepted this statement. Therefore, in this essay, I would like to explain both points of views either in positive and negative sides for several reasons.

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some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects. But others believe that teenage should focus on the subject that they are best at or that they find the most interest. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Someone argue that teenagers should concentrate on all school subject, while others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are best at of that they find the most interest. I personally believe that children must study all subject at least during the first years of education.

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Governments are often blamed for spending too much money on projects to protect wildlife while ignoring other problems. Some people believe that governments must prioritize the needs of their citizens above all else. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays, authorities of many countries in the world are allocating huge funds for the conservation of the wildlife, many people advocate that the part of the finance budget that is spent for these kinds of projects should be used for solving the public issue. However, believe that governing bodies should invest in wildlife welfare schemes.

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Today the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree with these views?

In today's scenario,it's completely true that the high sales of popular consumer goods are really dependent on advertisements.Advertisement makes a wide impact on sales. This essay will discuss some of the impacts of advertising.

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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Some museums require an access ticket whereas others are free of charge. There are many advantages for those museums that charge people even though it can harm those who cannot afford to pay to be in these kinds of places. I believe the positive ones outweigh the negatives overall. In this

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-Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

In recent times, Some people have suggested that we have plenty of options to choose

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In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinions on this?

Nowadays, underage kids in various nations are involved in employment from where they can earn wages. To become independent at a very early age, and by learning skill sets some people to think contributes as a fruitful work experience, but at the same time, others think it’s completely wrong. In my opinion, at an early age youngster should focus on their studies and their extracurricular activities rather than getting involved in any work.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help and learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? what sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

Everybody knows what it's like to be a child these days. Also, most people remember how their parents taught them the difference between right and wrong. And furthermore, they can remind how their parents punished them. In this essay, I'm going to answer what I agree and disagree with raising a child.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people believe that advertisement makes them get those things, whilst some argue that these form of marketing is everywhere nowadays and they don't primarily focus on it. This essay agrees that advertising has made an impact on us to get things mentioned in them.

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Some people say part time jobs are useful for full time students because they not only earn money but also gain career experience Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays many people are more inclined towards the students who do part-time jobs parallelly with their fulltime jobs as this helps them to earn money as well as experience. I am also in the opinion that students should take part in jobs during their full-time education because of many reasons.

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Some people believe that it is neither possible nor useful for a country to provide university places with a high proportion of young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, an increasing number of young people are going to university for further study. However, some people begin to doubt whether it is necessary to send so many students into tertiary education. While universities could provide more opportunities for people in their future careers, I do not think the government should make a huge effort to allow a high proportion of the youths to enter colleges.

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Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security while other believe that having a permanent job is better than enjoying the job Discuss both views and giving your opinion

Although some believe that having a satisfactory work is the most important goal, others defend the idea that is more valuable to have a regular career. In this essay, I will examine both sides and then give my opinion explaining why I believe that satisfaction at work has a stronger argument.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

In this expeditiously evolving world, there has been a growing trend of purchasing goods via web. It is therefore believed by some that this will eventually lead to shutting of brick and mortar stores. I strongly believe in this assertion and this essay will discuss the reasons behind this inclination.

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Around the world many adults are working from home and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible do you think this is a positive or negative development?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Currently,numerous citizens of working and studying from home due to the availability and affordability of technology to most sections of the society.In my opinion, the positive and negative impacts brought by this trend weighs almost the same.

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Violence in the society is largely promoted by violence shown in media. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays, people share an intimate relation with media and everything that is being broadcasted on it influences the decision making of individuals and their acts. I believe that the gruesome content telecasted on the media has a bad impact on mass especially younger ones. This essay shall depict my views with my consent.

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Some people think that schools do not do enough to teach young people about how to look after their health To what extent do you agree or disagree

Schools are always a place to learn and develop many things. A few individuals are of the opinion that these educational institutions are not fully educating the kids on personal health. I agree with it to a large extent. However, I think schools cannot be totally blamed on this matter. In the current essay ,I will discuss on this and conclude.

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Some people believe that excessive use of modern technologies, such as computers and smartphones, is negatively affecting the reading and writing skills of our young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Undoubtedly, parents and teachers in many countries are feeling increasingly concerned about the effect of digital devices on vital skills of school-aged children. Obviously, they are alarmed by the declining ability of young people to read and write and its suspected link to the influence of modern technology, and I wholeheartedly share their view. However, this essay will examine why overusing mobile devices has demerits.

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Some educationalists say that every child should be taught how to play a musical instrument. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Music is proved to be an important part of our lives as thousands of people listen to music every day and many play different instruments. Thus, there is an opinion among those who work in a sphere of education that children should be taught how to play musical instruments. From my point of view, no one especially children should be obliged to learn how to play the piano, violin and other instruments.

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Nowadays, experience is more valued in the workplace than knowledge in many countries. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Experienced persons have fit all sectors whereas knowledgeable persons are adjusted in certain areas. From my perspective, the positive sides of experience acquired by people outraced the negative effects. This essay will discuss both the pros and cons of expertise and wisdom.

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Some people think watching TV is bad for children, while others think that watching TV has more beneficial effects on children. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

In the present days, technology is become a vital part of our life, especially with children. Although many people believe that watching Tv is good for children, I think it will bring a bad effect on a child.

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