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Boxing is a blood sport which often results in physical injury. It is inappropriate for this sport to exist in the modern age. Do you agree or disagree?

In the modern age, there are still sports that were created in the beginning of the civilization and which were developed thru the years with new rules and habilities. The essay below gives enphasys to boxing and why it is an appropriate to still be practiced now a days.
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Some employers want to be able to contact their staff at all times, even on holiday. Does this development have more advantages than disadvantages ?

The given diagram illustrates how carbonated drinks are produced. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that this irreversible process consists of five stages. Overall, beginning with water cleaning and ending up with packing, to begin with, in the first stage, raw material passed through the filter and entered a rectangular-shaped container. Furthermore, after suffering from water softeners and chemicals, the above material was transferred to a later stage with the help of a pump. Moreover, in heating, evaporation, and carbonation, the material experienced heating through an electric heater and was then transferred to a container by a cooling pipe. Through the narrow pipe, the carbonated water entered the mixing tank.In this stage, first of all, the liquid changed colour, and then some syrup was added.At last, the desired flavours were added. Moreover, drinks were poured into bottles and cans after filtration.Through vehicles, drinks went towards supermarkets.
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Demand for gas and oil is increasing and so finding new resources in remote and untouched areas is a necessity. Do the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages?

Nowadays one of the widely discussed issues is that request for gas and oil is building up and so finding new options in far and untouched region is a force of circumstance.However there is no absolute agreement as some individuals find many new ways,while others consider everything associated with it negatively.In this essay,I will examine both pros and cons of this controversial issues.
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The pie charts below show the amount of electricity generated by energy source in Scotland for 20 years ago and last year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The data illustrates the amount of electricity generated by energy sources in Scotland 20 years ago and last year. Overall, the amount of electricity in the last year shows a quite similar pattern to the 20-year-ago in most of the energy sources and the types of energy remained the same throughout that 20 years period.
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the charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

The two bar charts illustrate the trends in the percentages of buying three types of appliances and the condition of how much time people in a country use for housework every week between 1920 and 2019.
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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a results of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for government to impose a higher tax on this kind of food

The chart illustrates the information about the steps of producing instant noodles From an overall perspective, there are 8 processes to manufacture the convenient food that we buy in supermarkets.
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A Request letter to Registrar, saying to post the documents directly to WES.

Good day. I am POGARU VENKATA SATYA RAVI KRISHNA having number 08KD1A0240, student of LENDI INSTITUTE OF ENGINEERING & TECHNOLOGY, which is affiliated to JNTUK, during 2008-2012 batch, requesting to courier my official transcripts and required documents directly to WES in order to get a credential evaluation for my immigration process. I would like to inform you that I have applied for Permanent Residency in Canada, and the process of Canadian immigration department asked me to provide the official transcripts through the WES (World Education Services). Further, the WES will only validate the documents, which will post from the university's post box, which means JNTU Kakinada.
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The charts below show the production of different types of citrus fruit in Brazil, China and USA. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.

The pie charts illustrate the shares of different citrus fruits in the production of three countries, namely, Brazil, China and the USA. Overall, the most striking feature of the charts is that each country specializes in just one type of fruit, despite growing all of them.
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Some universities require students to take classes in many subjects, other universities require students to specialized in one subject. Wich is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answe

undoubtedly, universities students try to achieve the best result during education , they have to take several courses that can pass and after that can be graduated however, in my opinion, students is forced to pass the whole course and sometimes it's not necessary to take the classes in many subjects
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Some people think that universities should provide graduate with the knowledge and the skills needed in the workplace. Other think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What is your opinion, should be the main function of a university?

People have different opinions about whether colleges should give hand-on experiences and valuable insights to pupils or should focus only on their own benefits . Personally , I completely agree with the first view because it is the responsibility of institutions to help their candidates to get sucess in their careers.
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Nowadays, obesity is increasing in a rapid pace. The reasons of it and how to tackle this issue

obesity is one of the common disease that happened in all over the world. even obesity are compared with smoking as a reason penyebab kematian. this issue need to be solved as soon as possible to reduce the numbers of deaths because of obesity
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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The graph illustrates the average amount of carbon dioxide in metric tonnes for each individual in four European countries over a forty-year period.
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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are considerable amount of people who choose humdrum lifestyle and escape changes while some individuals opining that adjustments to new way of living have only positive aspects. I believe, that both philosophies are worth considering in terms of types of changes.
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Many people advocate not to use Facebook because of the social problems it creates. What are the benefits and drawbacks are using Facebook? What is your view on this? What do you prefer?

The chart illustrates the information about the consumption of animals in the sea and land in a European nation from 1979 to 2004. From an overall perspective, only chicken is rising and the others are dropping during a span of 25 years.
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Government should put taxes on unhealthy food so that people eat healthy food. Do you agree or disagree?

Government need to put a higher taxes rate on unhealthy food such as tobacco and alcohol so that individuals eat healthy food because it keeps the body and mind fit. In this , a statement I totally agree I will explain this in this essay about this topic along with examples.
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The number of indigenous tribes living traditional lives in the world’s rainforests is decreasing. Within a few decades the last of these indigenous tribes may have disappeared forever. What are the causes of this problem and what can be done to prevent it from happening?

Needless to say, the disappearance of indigenous tribes around the globe which have led to catastrophic reasons caused by infinite reasons which conjoint add insult to injury. This essay is going to outline and causes of this problem before coming to a final conclusion.
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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as the Sahara desert and Antarctica. What are the benefits and disadvantages of visiting this area?

Nowadays, more frequent visitors are visiting places where states are difficult for example, the Sahara desert and Antarctica. In this essay, I will explore advantage and disadvantage of visiting this area.
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People in many countries spend more and more time far away from their families. Why does this happen and What effects will it have on them and their families.

These days an increasing trend of individuals spending time far from their family and hometown to working or studying. This essay will discussed with some reasons in this following.
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A film can portray the culture and traditions of a country. What films have you watched that tell a specific story of a country? Use specific examples and details to support your response.

In the modern world, people are presented with a large number of films in a variety of genres. Since the film industry began its development, there are a huge amount of movies reflecting culture and traditions in different counties. This essay will illustrate examples and details of these types of films.
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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

How to choose a job has always been the primary concern of people.Nowadays, many graduates have decided to work independently instead of going to a company or an organization. In this essay,I will discuss this phenomenon and its disadvantages.
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