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IELTS Writing Samples Band 3.5

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Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/She would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write an email to your friend. In your email, 1)describe where you lived when you were a student at the university 2)recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation 3)warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation

First of all, let me congratulate you on your success in gaining admission to a great university where I also studied. I'd also like to thank you at the same time for having confidence in my advice in finding accommodation for you.
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Fossil fuels (coal, oil, natural gas) are the main source in many countries, but in some countries the use of alternative source of energy (wind and solar energy) are encouraged. To what extent do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In the present circumstance, fossil fuels are still being used as a primary source of energy in many countries but due to environmental climate change, the mindset has changed to an ecological way to protect the environment.
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Fossil fuels (coal, oil, natural gas) are the main source in many countries, but in some countries the use of alternative source of energy (wind and solar energy) are encouraged. To what extent do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, fossil fuels are still primarily used at many places in the world. However, this tendency will change in the future because of the more and more application of alternative sources such as wind and solar energy. In my opinion, this is definitely a positive development.
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Fossil fuels (coal, oil, natural gas) are the main source in many countries, but in some countries the use of alternative source of energy (wind and solar energy) are encouraged. To what extent do you think it is a positive or negative development?

The given data reflects the transformation of the same place by two images in Moscow from 1980-s and nowadays.
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Since time immemorial, in certain drier parts of the world, fresh water has always been a scarce natural resource. However, in the present time, due to various reasons, scarcity of fresh water has become a global issue.

The diagram illustrates the average band scores of students, barring English speaking individuals, across different cultures, who underwent the IELTS examination in 2010.
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how much money people spend on petrol, in percentage in the United States and the United Kingdom.

The graph illustrates how much money people spend on petrol, in
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In the developed world,average life expectency is increasing.What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.

The bar chart compares families in England and Wales in terms of owned and rented accommodation in percentage from 1918 to 2011.
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Topic: It is better for college students to live far away from home than live at home with their parents . Do you agree or disagree .

In this section, I will illustrate some results of Uyar, et al., (2021) experimental study ; the anxiety levels of pediatric who played video games were equal to those of pediatric who received midazolam, and both groups were less anxious than those who watched cartoons while they entered the operating room. The rationale for this is they are prevented from viewing television, which may cause them to become more conscious of their surroundings, which in turn raised their level of worry.
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Some people think that children should be taught how to cook and grow food at school. Do you agree or disagree?

It is often considered few masses argue that juvenile should have knowledge of cooking and grow eatables in school. Thus I completely disagree with the statement which further lead to logical conclusion.
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In the last century, urban development has focused on building tall building as opposed to wide flat ones. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages

The pie charts illustrate the proportion of a variety of devices used by Canadian people watching television in 2009 and 2019.
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Nowadays there is an increase in social problems involving young people because more parents spent time at work than with their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer

No doubt, there is an increase in sociological and behavioural problems among young children due to their parents' busy schedules at work. I totally agree that a lack of attention towards children and spending less time with them make children more problematic.
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People will stop buying printed items due to the advancement of technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The anxiety levels of pediatric who played video games were equal to those of pediatric who received midazolam, and both groups were less anxious than those who watched cartoons while they entered the operating room. The rationale for this is they are prevented from viewing television, which may cause them to become more conscious of their surroundings, which in turn raised their level of worry.
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Some people are of the opinion that food should be transported from one place to the other, while others are of the opinion that people should consume locally produced food. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

The anxiety levels of children who played video games were equal to those of children who received midazolam, and both groups were less anxious than those who watched cartoons while they entered the operating room. The rationale for this is they are prevented from viewing television, which may cause them to become more conscious of their surroundings, which in turn raised their level of worry.
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Many people go through life doing work that they hate or have no talent for. Why does this happen?/what are the consequences of this situation?

Nowadays, many people suffering going to work and spending their time in a job they are not satisfied with or they have no passion on. This problem is based on many factors and lead to many bad consequences.
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In order to Spend a quality life, some say, people need to have more money and some say people need free time. What do you think is important. What are the other things which are required to have a quality life?

Some people want to be rich to buy things they want and live in sweet life. There are also people who just want free time to spend time with their family. Which of them is more important?
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People are of the opinion that children’s behavior should be controlled by their parents and teachers. Others do believe that children should be free to do as they like. Discuss both views and state your opinion

Some individuals believe that the way how children act should be under their parents control, while others claim that child should be given freedom and they decide how to perform on their own. Personally I, agree with both statements at certain point and assume child should have an particular independence in their actions, however, its scopes must be managed by their parents.
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It has been more than 30 years since man landed on the moon. Some people think that space reaserch is a waste of money, especially when a large majority of people on earth are living in poverty. what are your views? Support with example .

Technology made humans land on the moon 30 years ago. The amount spends on space research as compared to humanity's well-being is humongous. In my view, more focus and attention should be given to the people who are living in poverty on earth.
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Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that day's teenagers always have free time, They spend their time on play video games, and movies or sleeping in they free time, but is the volunteering in charitable work something good. The question is,do you think is that young youth can be benefit community as well? In the essay, I am going to discuss both views and draw my own conclusions.
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Some universities deduct students’ marks if work is given late. What is your opinion and recommend some alternative actions for this problem?

Nowadays, underscoring assignments on late submissions has become common trend among educational institutions. No doubt, it is nice criteria to evaluate their ablitity to perform any task on a given time line . However, this method is not good for all situations . My experience of life lead me to agree with the later opinion.
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Some people think children have the freedom to make mistakes, while other people believe that adults should prevent children from making mistakes. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays, most parents are concerned about their children's education. However, whether parents should prevent children from making mistakes or give them the freedom to make mistakes becomes a hot topic. My view is that parents should give children enough space so they can try something that they want.
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