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Some people say that success is 10 percent talent and 90 percent hard work. Is hard work the key to success or is talent also important?

When we talk about success, there are many opinions that have been expressed, some people claim that hard work is a key to success whereas others are think that talent is the most important thing to success. But my notion of this view that is that both contribute to success. Here i will shed light on my reasons for this view point.
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The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The lifestyle of people is deteriorating with time and it is believed that in future the standards of health of the society will be very low. As the stress is multiplying and the workload is accelerating, the health of the mankind is having an adverse effect. Through this essay, I will elaborate on this issue and will give my view points on it.
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Modern technology such as personal computers and the internets have made it possible for many people to do their work from home at least part of their work instead of going to an office everyday. What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of this situation.

The advancement of technology has played a vital role in the development of human civilization.Nowadays the use of informatic devices suchas laptop or network hasmade it feasible for several human being to do their job from home instead to go at their workplaces.In this essay,I will elaborate on the benefits and drawbacks of this condition.
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Modern technology such as personal computers and the internets have made it possible for many people to do their work from home at least part of their work instead of going to an office everyday. What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of this situation.

The advancement of technology has played a vital role in the development of human civilization.Nowdays the use of informatic devices such as laptop or network have made it feasible for several human being to do their job from home instead to go at their workplaces.In this essay,I will elaborate the benefits and drawbacks for this condition.
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The personal information of many individuals is held by large internet companies and organizations. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

As we live in modern technology developed world, our private information is kept by some mass associations and businesses. There is a gap between If the advantages of dominance privacy have the privilege of disadvantages.
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News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported? Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

The decision of what to present on TV comes from the bussines owner. There are many factors that directs what we see on the news. One of them is the frequence the audience consum a particular subject. As we see an increasing of negativity informed, it seems this has been people's preference.
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Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Parents should help their children take part in planned group activities while others believe it is a personal responsibility for a child to learn by themselves. I will discuss both views and give my opinion.
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Some people think that there shoul be complete ban on forms of advertising do you agree

Many of the individual beleive that there must be proper prohibition on all kind of endorsement I believe that this trend should be changed
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What are the differences between famous people today and those in the past?

In my country, people who work in the film, sports and music industries are more famous than others. It is mainly because their jobs are in the public. If they are talented, they will become famous automatically. Many politicians in my country are also famous especially those who appear in the media often.
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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.

The diagram illustrates the natural process with different stages in the life cycle of a frog,an amphibian. Overall, it is apparent that there are seven distinct stages in this life cycle,starting with the eggs and ending with the development of adult frogs.
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In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents who educate their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, a lots of parents prefer to pay for home teacher and let their children accept educate at home and are not like to send them to school. In my opinion, go to school will get lots of skills for me than stay at home.
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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

It is a common belief that students at the secondary school have suitable perceptivities to learn foreign languages. However, there is a more persuasive opinion that children should study the non-native languages at the earlier period. Discuss both of studying process would illustrate the opinions.
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Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are marries or single. some people say this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The supporting people think that the employer definitely asks for it interviews about the personal details then only they can conduct their ability of different aspect which is very helpful for the employees allocating time for instance if interviewees have more skills such as drawing therefore they can easily appoint for their particular section.
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Some experts believe it is better for animals to live in zoos where they are safe and are given all the food they need Do you think that living in zoos has more advantages or more disadvantages for animals?

Nowadays, it is common that confined spaces such as zoo can be found in any country. On the upside, keeping many types of animals in a zoo might be good enough, while taking animals under control has disadvantages too. In this essay, both negative and positive points of zoo could be implemented.
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Some people think high school graduates should travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to study at university. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both approaches.

Nowadays, a study is important for all of us to get a good job in future. Some people think that school graduates should work for some time or even travel to different nations for work instead of directly going for study. Here I shall discuss both approaches while telling the advantages and disadvantages of this notion.
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Some people think that intelligence is innate while others think that we can improve our intelligence through learning. Discuss both sides and give you opionion.

Certain group of individuals believe that IQ level is an inborn quality while others opine that it could be improved by learning.I personally agree with the latter statement as majority of people are born with an average intelligence levels.
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Most of the world’s problems are caused by overpopulation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The world as we live in is suffering from many problems whether we choose to believe it or not and unfortunately it has been this way for centuries. On the surface it might seem that these issues are divided into two groups, Human-caused and Natural caused. However there isn't a fine line distinguishing these two and it is very hard to pin the cause on a certain source as the world is a complex organization.
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When children turn 18 years old, they should leave home.

In the modern world, many parents should be encouraging their young people when they become older and moving to the next chapter in their own life.
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Television Sport shows such as the Olympics are a good source of motivation for our youths who do not like to exercise much. Do you agree or disagree?

Television sport shows are considered to be a good motivator source for young people who are not very keen on excercising. Although such events are interesting, due to their competetive nature and also to their social aspect which comes with them, I do not consider these appealing shows to encourage the young to practice more.
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There is a strong view that training of work is more important than broad education. To what extent you agree with this?

I believe that training of work is more important than broad education, this is based on so many reasons which are stated and described below.
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