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shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same period.

The table represents the variation between the count of Ashdown Museum visitors in one year before and one year after its refurbishment.
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Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today’s modern world each country may have a free health service, however latter medical medicine could not be accessible through the service due to the fact that they are overpriced. I agree with this statement to a maximum extend and my essay will elaborate on this in the following paragraphs. At present medical treatments are too expensive.
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The best way for governments to solve the problem of traffic congestion is providing free public transport in 24 hours per day, and seven days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, traffic jam is a debatable concern that many authorities are struggling to find solutions. whether proving free trasport or not, it is one of the subtopic of this issue.
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Some businesses observe that people who just finished college have a hard time interacting with collegues in working as a team.What do you think is the reason behind this? What are your suggestions to address this problem?

It is true that nowadays the university graduates find hard to communicate with their workmates. In this essay i will highlight the causes of this tendency and also give some suggestions to alleviate this problem
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Some countries allow old people to work to any age that they want. Do the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages?

Nowdays when people are confronting with huge competition in their workplace,even some nations encourage seniors to work until their eldier.I believe that the drawbacks of this tendency are greater than its benefits
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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sport facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.

A growing number of people are in the view that the only possible way to improve public well-being is by rising the number of amenities. Another common belief about wellness is that creating new sport areas will have little influence on this issue. Both sides of this argument will be analysed before a reasoned conclusion will be drawn.
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Plastic bags, plastic bottels and plastic packaging are bad for environment. - What damage does plastic do the environment? - What can be done by government & individuals solve this problem?

In the recent decades, the number of plastic pruducts has significantly increased due to several reasons such as cheapness. Consequently, plastics have a lot of environmental disadvantages such as prolonged decomposition. Therefore, some solutions like reduction of plastic goods and recycling can be effective.
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In the last century, the first man to walk on the moon said it was "a giant leap for mankind”. However, some people think it has made little difference to our daily lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I partly agree. Make it clear that you have a balanced opinion.
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nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor.

Some people prefer using alternative ways to get well with health problems to visiting their doctor, I think alternative medicine has a negative development to society and health.
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state disadvantages and advantages of strict law against noise pollution.

In this era, Sound Pollution has become a bigger problem in the world. To encounter this problem, the Government has implemented many laws to lessen this issue. These laws have merits such as reducing noise pollution and the environment and healing and having lessened hearing problems. On the other hand, demerits such as increasing the burden on traffic police and fine for breaking the law are huge.
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Many claims that the fast food industry had a negative effect on the environment, eating habits, and families. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The question: Does fast food have a negative effect on environment, eating habits, families? are always in correlation which is why it is necessary to inform ourselves from other sources and not just watch the same thing over and over. For example, my country doesn’t really import non-native things from other countries, this decision having some bad effects on our big culture. In conclusion, even though, building your own movie and TV programmes industry could be a good decision, bringing motion pictures from other areas is necessary. OPINION ESSAY Example 7 Underline Key Words in the Question Identify the topic Focus on the detail in the question (and any restrictions) Identify the task Rephrase the question Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public service...
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Many countries spend a lot of money in the arts. Some people think investment in the arts is necessary, but others say money is better spent on public service and facilities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Arts has becomes the most scarce existing need in the following days. Many countries spend enormous money on their arts and culture, ,consequently it's become the potential need of every citizen.
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Many parts of the world are losing important natural resources such as forests animals or clean water. Choose one resource that is disappearing and explain why it needs to be saved. Use specific reasons and examples your support your opinion.

In the contemporary era, there are so many natural gifts for living better. like water. It is common knowledge that most of the earth is covered by water. while a human has faced with a scarcity of drinking water. This essay will argue the grounds why it is important to pay attention to lack of the water.
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Some people think that people in senior positions alone should make decisions in a business, while others think that employees should be involved in the decision-making process too. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is an ongoing debate regarding, decisions making in business. A group of individuals believe that, senior management is involved in such a process. However, others claim that, workers should be elaborate in these things. Therefore, ahead of my opinion, both view will be discussed further.
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Directors of large companies often receive much bigger salary increases than ordinary workers. Employer’s organization say that in a global market this is necessary to attract the best management talent. What are your views? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

One of the main topics nowadays is why CEOs of large corporations get much higher wages or payments rather than their employees. This act is justified by the fact that it is necessary for headhunting, in order to attract the best candidates among managers. In this essay, I will give an explanation of my agreement on this issue.
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In many cities, problems related to overpopulation are becoming more common. Some governments are now encouraging businesses and individuals to move out of cities to rural areas. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Stores should not have permission to sell people food or drinks that harmful for human’s health. As health is the most important thing for us I completely agree with this opinion.
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In many cities, problems related to overpopulation are becoming more common. Some governments are now encouraging businesses and individuals to move out of cities to rural areas. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, overpopulation is one of the main problems in many cities. That’s why some governments are inspiring businesses and individuals to move out cities to rural areas. I believe advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantages, because pollution in big cities and traffic jam affect people in a bad way.
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Today, many people use the internet and smartphones to transfer money to friends, family, and businesses. Is this a positive or negative development?

So many individuals use internet and cellphones to send money to friends, family and businesses in today’s world. In my opinion, as this is fast and safe method to transfer money, I think it is absolutely positive development.
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Some children can learn more efficiently by watching TV. Therefore, children should watch TV regularly both in school and at home? Do you agree or disagree?

As technology develops, many individuals prefer to transfer their money to other people via online banking applications. Firstly, this essay will discuss the possible cyberattack while using internet to transfer money and secondly, it will discuss how this process makes people’s life easier.
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Giving children an adolescent pocket money is common throughout the world. this goes the advantages and disadvantages of this practice and give your own opinion.

Pocket money is essential element and is considered very important for childrens and adolescents as they are not earning money and are dependent on others. This is common practice in all over the world. However, being dependent on others for their own well being in form of the pocket money is associated with both pros and cons and I will discussed them both in this essay. Also, I am in opinion that advantages far exceeds disadvantages and this is the basic right of children’s under 18 years.
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