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Some people prefer full-time jobs because they offer stability. Other people prefer casual jobs because of the freedom they offer. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, due to freedom internet has provided for us it is possible to choose a preferable approch for working. While some people opt for full-time jobs mostly because of job security it provides, others enjoy flexibility that a casual job can bring. I believe that, chosing a type of work is a matter of personal prefrences.
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Summerise the information, selecting and reporting

The pie chart describes information about the UK mankind had used in five modes of transportations Walking, Car, Train, Bicycle and Bus for work or study in a college in two differents years 2004 and 2009.
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All education should be free to all people and paid and managed by the government. Do you agree or disagree with the statement.

It is often suggested that government should focus on giving opportunities to all people to be educated. From my point of view, I strongly agree that the benefit of giving free education, which includes spreading opportunity and improving society, outweigh the apparent of uncontrolled by the government. I will explain my reasons in this essay.
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Some people think the main purpose of school is to turn children into good citizens and workers, rather than to benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

When there are good quality education nations dominantly flourish ethically as well as technologically which help to boost state wealth and create an ideal society. It is thought by many individuals that basic aim of the institution is to make youngsters fine residents and professionals instead of giving them advantage personally. I would argue in the favor of the mentioned statement and will further explain the reasons behind this.
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Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantages?

The majority of people toward the jobs has been changed because lifestyle and living life are unstable.however,staying a long time in the work or had had some entertainments it can lead both positive and negative. I believe balance it and had some free time is more advantage than other.
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Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram illustrates 3 different types of queries sent by the residents of a single city to the office of tourism in 2011 within a period of 6 months. Overall, individual enquiries were the most, while the least was sent by letter/ email.
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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

Many companies really on advertisments to introduce their product to common people. Though some people think that advertisments have lost their influence on people others still beileve in its persausive power.
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Some people say that the only way to learn a second language well is to live in a country where that language is spoken. What is your opinion about this?

Some people think to learn language because it is good when we stay in other country with different language. I think, this is good option because people can get jobs very easy and it is also good because you can understand the people if you know language.
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Most high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 percent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women. To what extent do you agree?

It is mostly considered that businesses in developing countries consider men better in positions that are mostly noticeably high compared to female.I completely agree that women should also be given a chance in positions that are highly noticeably
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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Raising fuel prices is the best option because it would lower demand. This is because the laws of economics dictate that the higher the price of a commodity, the lower the consumption of that product and this will lead to fewer people using vehicles. For instance, when the price of fuel skyrocketed during the oil crisis in the 1970s, there was a huge reduction in the number of cars on the road.
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summerise the information and reporting by selecting

The pie chart describes information about the populace of Australia from various nationalities and places namely New Zealander, Chinese, British, Australian and Dutch, units are measured in percentages.
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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates a 2008 data report about the usage of power from 6 sources of fuel. It also gives future usage estimations from the year 1980 to 2030. Overall, Petrol and oil, coal and natural gases are the most used sources of energy ,whereas, nuclear, solar/ wind and hydropower are the least used.In the future, the trend is expected to continue.
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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The figure captures the process of generation of electricity in a hydroelectric power station. The diagram also demonstrates the activities taking place in
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Most major cities around the world continue to grow at a phenomenal rate due to the massive increase in population. Discuss some of the effects of a high population density and suggest some ways on which this trend could be reversed. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nearly all major cities tend to grow at remarkable rate due to rapidly growing rocketing numbers in population. Major countries suffer from high population density, because large proportion of population chasing high ambitions, and suffer from disparity of services and facilities in country and city.
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In most developed countries shopping is not only about buying the goods you need, it is also perceived as entertainment, is it a positive or negative development?

In Majority of the highly emerged countries shopping is more of an impulsive purchase rather than its necessity. Considering purchase of unnecessary goods along with the ease in buying products, shopping as an entertainment purpose has disadvantageous impact on the society or individuals.
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nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. what problems can lack of sleep cause? what can be done about lack of sleep?

Recently , it has been observed , several individuals fail to get sufficient sleep and they suffer from sleep deprivation .I believe exploring the causes of this problem can assist in finding a suitable solution to help resolve it.
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some people think that instead of preventing climate change we need to find a way to live with it. do you agree or disagree?

Recently, climate shifts are a serious issue which cause notorious effects worldwide. A number of individuals believe these problems should be mitigated in order to reduce undesirable effects for society in the future. However, some others believe adaptation would be the adequate action for this phenomenon. I strongly agree that mitigation action is the most important response in order to solve climate change.
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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads? To what extent do you agree

It is often argued that it is more advantageous to give more budget to track authorities by government rather than to roads. I completely agree with the opinion and think that line are a more important sector to improve their facilities and need more amount of money.
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People are happier at an old age. Do you agree or disagree

The diagram exhibits questions forwarded to the Tourist Information Office between the period of January and June in a single city. Overall, enquiries done in person and by telephone are high, while those done by letter or email are the lowest.In the first three months, in-person enquiries overtook the number of requests done by telephone and by letter/email which at the beginning are the highest.
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A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they shouldhave the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy theirvarious needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There has been an increase in the amount of people who supports animals' rights while some people are against theexploitation for human's needs. This essay is going to explain these two points of view and then give my opinion.
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