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Average percentage of sodium, saturated fats and added sugar in typical meals consumed in the USA.

The three pie chart shows the average percentage of sodium, saturated fats and added sugars in breakfast, lunch, dinner and snacks consumed in the USA.
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Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of playing sports and participating in physical exercises.

As a rule, anything in this Earth has own benefits and drawbacks, the same with physical activities. For the most part, I believe that sport transmits mailnly good habits and positively influences to various aspects of life. On the other hand, over done heavy and daily exercises could bring negative sides. If person over did with sport, then, it would be harmful for their health.
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First impressions are more important. Some people think that doing well in interviews is the key to securing good job? To what extent do you agree?

well, nowadays every one says or give advice about first impresion is most important thing in life .
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The percentage of 3 types of crimes: car theft, house burglary & street robbery in England & Wales from 1970 to 2015

The graph illustrates how three types of crimes namely car theft, house burglary and street robbery were committed in England and Wales during 1970-2000.
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Summarize the informations by selecting and reporting the main feautures, and make comparison where relevant

The chart provides information about the variance of residents in urban areas analyzing three years: 1950, 1950 and the expectations for 2030.
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Small businesses are disappearing and being replaced by large multinational companies Do the advantages of this outweigh the advantages?

The given bar chart is a graphic representation of the percentage of the population living in urban areas taking into account the data collected in three specific years: 1950, 2007, 2030. ,Moreover it expresses different global areas and the whole world.
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Some people feel unsafe either staying at home or going out. What are the possible reasons for this? What can be done to address this issue? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Public safety is one of the most essential problems of the modern world. Some individuals do not feel safe even at home. An increase in the number of criminals might be the major cause of the problem and in order to solve this ,issue some important measures must be taken by governments.
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some people think that they can be fit by going to the gym while others think that there is another way to remain fit. Discuss both views along with your opinion.

In a world of a busy society, others are still making sure that they will be fit by spending their time at the gymnasium. With all the food that we eat and the unending illnesses that we are encountering, people still want to stay healthy.
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More and more people are deciding to focus on their career rather than having children. Why they decide to do this? What are the possible impacts this may have on the society?

An increasing number of individuals are deciding to concentrate on their career instead of having children. The primary reason why they chose this because they want to get ahead in their career and the possible impacts on society are decreasing population and increasing economy.
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some people believe that living in big cities is becoming more difficult. others believe that it is getting easier. discuss both views and give ur own opinion.

Why do people always miss their childhood?
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teachers think that international student exchange would be beneficial for all teenage school students. Do you think its advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

I am writing to inform you regarding the talk to students about crime and safety . As president of the student council,I have decided the date 20th December 2021 on Friday. The chosen place is my school. Sir, all preparations are already done. Students are taking part with much enthusiasm and excitement. Your kind presence as a guest will make the evening more special and informative.
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It is believed that people should choose their jobs based on income in order to provide security for their families. Do you agree that the salary is an important factor when choosing a job? What other factors should be considered?

I hope you're doing well. One reason to writre you is that I miss you and want to tell you how much I am happy to know you. Nowadays is different to find a friends like you. Our friendship is special for me. You are the one who guides me in every situation. Needless to say that your love and positive energy melted my heart. I am impatient to see you soon. I wish my holiday would start so I can come to you.
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Money should be spent on creating new public buildings such as museums or town halls rather than renovating the existing ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The Line graph gives us information about radio and TV users percentage during every two hours in a day in 1992 from October to December in the United Kingdom. Above 4 years old people has chosen for this research.
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CCTV cameras are a common sight in town centres, on public transport and outside many businesses. They not only help identify and apprehend criminals but also serve as a crime deterrent. However, some people believe that they are intrusive and constitute a breach of privacy.

To avoid criminality CCTV cameras used in city centers. It helps to identify criminals and serves as a crime detector, however it destroys personal privacy of citizens. In my opinion, advantages for public safety overweights its difficulties for any humankind privacy.
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Some people think that government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

Because, children spend much more time at their homes and tend to follow the habits of their parents, the home is the best place to teach this important value.
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Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree?

Many people believe that adolescents have to take part in an unpaid work to support the neighborhood in their leisure time. Young adults can gain a lot of skills as well as cater their community. But from my perspective I don’t totally agree with this idea because of couple of reasons below:
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Universities should allocate the same amount of money to students' sports activities as they allocate to their libraries. To what extent do you agree with this view? Give reasons for your answer and give any relevant example or experience you have to support your answer.

Some would argue that books has more wieghtage than the physical activity. In my opinion,although education can be the sign of rewarding career, one's atheletic talent should be held in higher esteem.
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The best way to deal with the rising problem of traffic and transportation is to encourage people to live in cities rather than in the suburbs or in the countryside. To what extent do you agree?

No doubt, with the advent of new transportation services rise in traffic ,problems are noted.Some say that one of the best ways to solve this issue is to encourage people to move from the countryside to big cities, this not only going to help them but also going to solve matters related to traffic and transportation. Well, I agree with this statement as it's not only going to aid our environment but also going to save a lot of energy, time and money as well.
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Nowadays it is common for people to get married and have children in their thirties rather than when they are younger. Do you agree or disagree that this trend will benefit society?

In my opinion, I felt that people in their early twenties might not have the experience in handling a stable marriage and financial wealth due to their young age without capital savings as they might not be able to support their children and themselves without it. In return, they will be unhappy throughout their lives having insufficient capital in their savings. At a young age in their twenties, they might be lacking work and life exposure which might have lots of problems when coming to...
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Students should be taught academic knowledge so that they can pass exams,and skills such as cooking or dressing should not be taught. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Undoubtedly, the teaching curriculum is an essential part to score in the finals instead of extracurricular activities . But I don't support this idea completely, to eliminate these skills such as culinary and grooming. Thus , I partially agree with this statement and will explain it in the paragraph given below.
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