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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. to what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinoin? what sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

Nowadays, many companies use advertising to increase sales. However, advertisements have a strong impact on people around the world. In this essay, I will be explaining the effect of what we see on social media.
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Around the world, rural people are moving to cities and urban areas, so populations in the countryside are decreasing. Is this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, rural dwellers are moving to metropolis and cities, thus inhabitant in village are not increasing. In my opinion, moving to urban areas are not the best way.
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As the number of private cars has increased,so too has the level of pollution in many cities.What can be done to tackle this increasingly common problem?

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is pollution in many cities.It is undeniable that cars has become an essential part of our life. However,these days everyone has their own car. Overreliance on cars at the expense of public transport has made this problem even worse, causing many concerned citizens to look for a solution to the problem.
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The world today is a safer place than it was a hundred years ago, and government should stop spending large amount of money on their armed forces . To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Today, we are not witnessing the much wars as our granfathers were years ago and the word is a safer place in compare of a few decades ago. Some people beleive that governments should not spend money on army due to the less invasion is happening.In this essay I will argue reasons for spending money on armies. In my opinion, some places in the world, like middle-east still requiered to spend a huge amount of their nation's budget on their army and equipment.
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Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that keeping predators safe nowadays is just misspend of fund. I strongly disagree with ignoring the importance of wild animals on earth due to loss of biodiversity and possible danger to nature.
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The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

Adults mostly have specific opinion on lifestyle of humans while the part of the society consider those opinions unnecessary in raising kids of this century. I strongly agree with this idea of changing methods in terms of educational matters due to transformation of the current world and the need for an individual approach for youngsters.
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Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and town, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?

The migration of youthful people from countryside to megapolises and towns is a growing trend worldwide. This shift often results in a demographic imbalance leaving only elderly people to live in the countryside that causes decline in the workforce. To adress this problem the infrastructure in countryside should be improved. This essay will discuss the problems caused by this and suggest possible solutions.
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The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to control violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this action?

Recently,there was a debate with goverment due to an impact of horror films to society violence crimes assuming that such multimedias affects people and make them more aggressive.I completely diagree with such a statement.
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People today are suffering more and more stress related problems than in the past. What is the cause of this? What are the possible effects of this development?

In recent years, the number of stress-related issues are increasing at an unprecedented rate. This trend is mainly due to competitive job market. However, this phenomenon could cause life-threatening diseases. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I will discuss the possible cause and the effects with relevant examples.
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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write atleast 250 words.

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can indeed cause both social and practical obstacles. However, the extent to which these issues affect an individual can vary greatly depending on various factors.
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Some people believe that success is about hard work and determination. Others think that success has a connection with money and personal appearance. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. (Steve no copyright)

Some people believe that success is about hard work and determination. Others think that success has a connection with money and personal appearance. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. (Steve no copyright)Some people believe that success is about hard work and determination. Others think that success has a connection with money and personal appearance. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. (Steve no copyright)Some people believe that success is about hard work and determination. Others think that success has a connection with money and personal appearance. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. (Steve no copyright)Some people believe that success is about hard work and determination. Others think that success has a connection with money and personal appearance. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. (Steve no copyright)Some people believe that success is about hard work and determination. Others think that success has a connection with money ...
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The top priority of businesses is making money, and they do not need to have social resposibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Enterprises giving priority to making money outweighs social responsibilities. I disagree with this argument. This essay will support my argument followed by reasons and examples.
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Many countries today are experiencing problems associated with noise pollution ( excessive noise pollution above a normal background noise) what are the cause of this phenomenon and what effects does it have on the people affected?

Nowadays excessively noise has become a major issue in most countries on account of heavy congestion and occasions .As a result, people would suffer from various diseases.
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Pop music is extremely popular around the world. Why do you think this genre of music is so popular worldwide? Discuss your thoughts and give details and examples to support your opinion.

Nowadays Pop music is becoming very popular in the world and pop music flowers growing day by day. Because pop music gives you the vibe of the songs the peoples feels the song and people get out of their problems while listening to such a type of songsOften people also dance according to the combination of the songs. Let me share an instance, My friend does a very stressful job therefore he gets tired but he said when he listen to this type of music he forgets about the problems and stress in a way he feels very relaxed also he told me while listening to pop songs he will able to complete his tasks more efficiently and in less time.But it depends on the person to person some people don't like these songs like me when I listen to these types of songs it gives me a headache and I feel uncomfortable.
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It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural areas, such as the South Pole. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

With the globalization and the extreme advance of technology it is becoming easy to visit new insulate palaces from over the world, some my holds the idea that it is beneficial for people and the planet to discover and visit remote natural areas , while others believe that it's mighr affect the natural areas negatively, as far as I am concerned I am with the formal idea for the following reasons .
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have your experience any festival or occasion in different country ? What type of experience you have learnt from it ?

Last year, I have been to China for my office work. Luckily they celebrate one of the famous festivals known as Chinese Lovely Day.This Festival is very new and interesting.On this occasion, people meet with others and enjoy themselves together with their loved ones.They mostly visit together for someplace where they can enjoy or relax also people eat night dinner together by serving each other. At last, I have seen many festivals but this one is unique because It spirit love and connects people with each other. The most important part is that people forgive each other forget about past experiences and start a new chapter of life with every person.Which helps them to remain happy.
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With the help of technology, students nowadays can learn more information and learn it more quickly. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In last decades there has been growing concern by specialists in education especially teachers and parents about the impact of technology on improving the quality of learning, some people hold the idea that utilizing technology very beneficial for students , on the other hand sme people believe that using technology can not be helpful for students. As far as I am concerned I believe that nowadays technology play a pivotal role on improving the quality and the number of information that children could have in short time .
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Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person. Why do you think this is the case? What measures could be taken to encourage teenagers to spend more time meeting one another in person? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Researchs telling that a numerous number of minors in this epoch tend to socialise online rather than seeing each other in person.This essay will discuss why this tendency is popular nowadays,and will anylyze why is it so.
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Environmental problems are too big for individuals countries and individual persons to address. In other words, we have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is at an international level. What is your opinion?

Global warming turbulence has been enhanced significantly at world wide level.So,it has became extremely detrimental to solve it at an individual level.For this,some people argue that it will be only possible at a global level.I believe in first statement and discuss it in this essay.
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Many people think that parents should teach children how to behave. Others think that school is the best place to learn this Discuss both views and give your opinion

Numerous individuals believe that parents should teach their child how to behave.Whilish others think that school is the right place to learn behaviour from.This essay will discusse both points of views of people who believe in parents upbringing and who believe in school behavior education.
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