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In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their friends and their families.

educalion plays a crutial role in shaping an individual's future, and many people agure that every young childrens should pursue full time education until they turn 18 years old. In my opinion, mandating full time education required until the age 18 years old.
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In many developing countries, there is an increasing movement of workers from rural areas into cities. Why do you think this happen? What problems can this cause.

Dear SellerI writing to you about the red long sleeves shirt I bought at your shop in the Sanko Park Mall last week I want to inform you about this shirt issue While ı was saw this shirt from your shop ı liked it so much and ı bought Then ı wore one time when ı wore had not any problem until wash to washing machine ı washed the shirt to 60’ degree sensitive program When after ı washed the shirt it was torn and it been shattered and its colour was so fade I used my washing machine for my other clothes but has not been any torn or fading This problem is not about my washing machine And ı think the problem is not about to degree and program I don't know why this happened I liked your prices and your brands' clothes This reason ı want replacement my shirt if your will replacement ı will please so much I look forward to your response Kind regards
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It is important for all towns and cities to have large public outdoor places like squares and parks. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Opinions are divided as to whether having a huge external public places for urban areas is essential. I completely agree that this kind of arrangement would be a good idea.
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While studying abroad provides an opportunity to broaden one’s experience, as also present the danger of letting influence from the host culture. How far do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Shopping malls are designed for people's leisure time.Numerous number of young ones used to go there in their free time.Some kind of citizens believe that this will show a false image to the public but i do not completely agree with this statement i will proof my statement in this passage.
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Today many young people spend too much of thier free time at shopping malls.This can be considered negative for young people and society generally.To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement.

Shopping malls are designed for people's lesiure time.Numerous number of young ones used to go there in their free time.Some kind of citizens believe that this will show a false image to the public but i am not completely agree with this statement i will proof my statement in this passage.
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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, Numerous numbers of countries faced financial crisis Therefore sometimes a great number of other countries aid them financially.But countries penilessness still exists.some people believe that they should help them out with other sort of help, for some extent i am agree with this statement.
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Some think that it is more important for children to engage in outdoor activities instead of playing video games. To what extent to you agree or disagree?

In general, the technology devices help the huminaty to get better in several ways: educational, works issues and life affairs. Otherwise, they have their impacts on us. Especially, video games!. We are about to explain the video games pros and cons.
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Nowadays, some employers thought formal academic qualification are more important than life experience and personal qualities when they look for new employees. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that a education degree has been playing a significant role in the work environment. This essay totally disagree with the statement. I strongly believe life experience is more effective in a work place. In this essay i am going to discuss this issue.
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contribution as % of indian"s GDP, in agriculture, services and industry

The diagram depicts that Indian’s GDP divided into three parts; agriculture, industry and services. From an overall respective, while agriculture reduced steadily, the percent of GDP for services increased.
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Some argue that schools should prioritize life skills such as working in teams and solving problems instead of traditional academics. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that soft skills must make up the majority part of learning in schools than book-taught lessons. While I believe that such skills are essentials for students in interacting with their surroundings, however academics should not be neglected.
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Air pollution is currently a big issue in most industrialized cities causing respiratory problems and changes in weather patterns. What do you think are the causes of this? What measures can be taken to reduce air pollution?

In recent decades, air contamination has been a significant issue showing it effects not only increasingly affecting citizens’ respiratory systems but also modifying the topical weather. There are multiple contributory factors causing this problem. However this essay will only focus the most important one and suggest a possible solution.
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Some people prefer to shop for food in super market other people prefer to their food shopping online. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience .

Nowadays, people have two opinoins about purchasing food. Some people think that buying from supermarket is better, because people can choose goods with touching and by sight in shops. Others have opposite idea of that , they prefer online shops because it is easy to use. I beilive that buying something from shops more reliable.
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Governments should lower arts budgets to allocate more money to education. Do you agree with this view?

Even though most developed countries in the world are financially stable and developed with infrastructures but lacks with overall education percentage. So, central government should allocate the funds more on education rather than on arts and culture. I totally agree with the statement and will discuss in the further essay.
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In companies’ promotions to high positions should be given to employees inside the company, not to someone from outside or new hiring. Do you agree or disagree?

Employers should give promotions to employees who have been working for a long time for the company, and the promotions should not be given to employees who just got hired in the company. This essay agrees with this idea, because workers who have been working for ages for the company as result, they deserve promotions, while new workers should work hard to get promotions.
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Some people use social media to keep in touch with other people and new events. Do you think advantages of this technology outweigh the disadvantages?

It is argued that social media has been playing a significant role in a communication skills between people. The question is, what is the main merits and demerits of social media? In this essay, I am going to discuss this issue.
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The amount of garbage produced by our cities is a big problem for governemts around the world.What are the causes of this excess waste?How can this problem be fixed?

Nowadays it is frequent topic discussion, more and more countries suffering from the negative effect of trash. The main root of this tendency is the highly increased manufacturing.For this government can provide various support to slow this problem.
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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Assel

The first picture illustrates a public park when it opened in 1920, and the second picture portrays some extensive changes the same park at present. Overall, the Grange Park completely changed and renovated. The park added expanded areas, mainly related to entertainment.
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School children are becoming far too dependent on computers. this is having an alarming effect on reading and writing skills. teacher need to avoid using computers in the classroom at all cost and go back to teaching basic study skills. do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that these days, a computer has been playing a significant role in a child's life. The question is, what is the main effect of computer in the classroom ? In this assey, I am going to discuss this issue.
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Some people think young people should be required to have full time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent decades, many citisens throughout both the developing and developed world have debated whether compulsory full-time education should be until they turn 18. personally, I am vehemently opposed to this view. the reason will be covered in this essay using examples to demonstrate point and prove argument.
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most offenders commit more crimes after serving their first punishment. why is this happening ? what measures can be taken to tackle this problem ?

many convicts do the worst crimes after they felt the punishments. I believe it is because they do not scared anymore about the result of their work. But one way to avoide toward this issue is to predict their future crimes and forced them to never take back to their bad habbits.
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