IELTS Writing Samples Band 3. Page 164

IELTS Writing Samples Band 3

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There seems to be an increasing trend towards assessing students through exams rather than continual assessment . what are the advantages and disadvantages of exams as a form of assessment?

Nowadays, growing the number of students lead to their evaluate by exam, rather than with continual assessment. The way of exam can be quickly identify top students, while one of the negative points of exams includes the fact it can creates stress among students.

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Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Unfortunately,nowadays the matter of children's bullying has become a controversial issue which has numerous causes and effects.in this ,essay I will elaborate causes of the subject and solutions that could be taken through collating the matter.

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More people are having cosmetic surgery. Why is the case ? Is it positive or negative development?

Changing one`s apperance by surgical ways has become wispered in the present time as there is a large number of people who desire to look gorgeous. While some people think that they can solve their imperfaction by cosmetic surger, I strongly believe that this trend has a negative impact on sociaty and even it may harm induviduals.

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advantages and disadvantages between shops and malls

There are some advantages and disadvantages between shops and malls all over the world that we are looking at them. Local small businesses have character, Every small business adds identity to our town. They are the best place to find something unique at a great price. By choosing to support local and independent businesses, you help maintain local variety and specific culture. When you support a local business, you are supporting your friends, family, and neighbours. Local Small Businesses Encourages Local Entrepreneurship. Shopping locally will help sustain the lively town centres. which means more business for the locals, and more money coming into the town. that's a highly controversial topic. malls have some advantages in the city, for instance, malls have parking, malls have produced a wide range of products and they have Competitive prices, That's highly recommended, because They have space for children and some activity for fun, then people prefer to spend time...

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Wealthy countries should accept more refuge and provide them with basic assistance, such as food and housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The picture illustrates the changes in a public park from 1920 to the present time.

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Some are convinced that all schools should be public and free of charge because all kids should have the same opportunities. there is an opinion that private schools provide better education. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

According to some ,peoples. all schools should be public and free of charge because all offspring should have the same opportunities.

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In developing nations, there is an increase in international tourism. Is this more advantageous or disadvantageous?

As we are living in a globalized era , travelling from one country to another is very feasible nowadays. As a result a fair number of people are interested in journey recently. Recent trend has shown that there is a enormous strides in the amount of commuters to akian country. Definetively , it is advantageous to some extent.

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There are many people who go to live in different countries. To what extent should people be allowed to move freely between countries and live where they choose? What are the benefits and drawbacks of this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The graph represents the proportion of Australian men and women who practiced physical exercise on daily basis at a wide range of ages in 2010.

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The growth of multinational companies and the resulting rise of globalization creates positive effects for all. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The graph represents the proportion of Australian men and women doing physical exercise at other ages in 2010.

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Some people argue that school should no longer be necessary because children can obtain all the information that they need form the internet. They can learn and be educated at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Human beings are always curious about the past. In the same way, it has become more common to search the past of their own houses or buildings. I believe this is due to the reason for the attachment to the place and curiosity to know from scratch. People can do investigations from real estate records and internet sites.

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Some people believe the Olympic Games don’t belong to the 21st century anymore. To What extent do you agree or disagree?

The line graph depicts the information about the land which is used for organic agriculture between two nations between 1985 and 2010.

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nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. in what way has technology affected the types of relationships people make? has this become a positive or negative development?

According to the last year,the relationships between people have changed so much.This phenomenon is going to be more present than in the past day by day.Absolutely I feel these alters in relation to my society.I feel this way for two reasons that I will explain in the following paragraphs.

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Do you think music and rhymes help young children in learning ?

The importance of music and rhymes helps to increase the power of learning which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that is beneficial while others reject this notion. In my opinion , the former preposition appears to be more rational . This essay will elaborate the relevant details and thus will lead to be a logical conclusion. There are myriad of reasons which will further elaborate the argument but most one preponderant one stems form the fact that music helps the increase concentration power . Since , children can learn thorough music if they can feel enjoyable and creative to learn things with the hep of music .for example , learnings alphabets in kinder school with rhymes when sung in a chorus in background music .needless to say all these merits stand in a good stead. Elaborating my viewpoint,there are some more merits but one of the crucial effect is that s...

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.

Nowadays, the world has been changed from the past, such as the telephone replace the pigeon for sending messages. So, it is impossible that people will live without changes. While in the future, we might face a lot of challenges and decisions. In my opinion, I prefer to face numerous challenges instead of having a trivial routine every day.

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. Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The line graph illustrates how many major offences happened in London from 2003 to 2012.

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Food travels thousands of miles from farms to consumers. some people believe we should buy food from local farmer to protect the environment and support local businesses. do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

The trend graph and pie chart show the rates at which both plants and animals are becoming extinct as well as detailing the sources of threats to plant life.

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school is good for children, do you agree or disagree?

The children are educated at school. Now I am going to tell you about school. In school, we have to childrenildren learn some things When we are bigger we can be doctors so we have to study very hard at school. In the school, there are lots of children maybe 100.

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Smoking is very bad for people.do you agree or disagree ?

Now I want to tell you about smoking. Smoking is so bad and dangerous for people. Because maybe we are sick or dead. so We don't have to smoke sometimes you can see smoke on the floor. When I am going to the park I can see people smoke It is so dangerous for people. You have to be careful if you through on the paper or grass maybe there is a fire. Some people are smoking near other people it is so bad maybe the other people have a problem with breath. Some people have a habit of smoking but it is not good. Some people smoke we have to say don't smoke.

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Smoking should be banned in public places. Do what extinct you agree or disagree?

Most countries don't allow smoking in public community because of the side effects. Not allowing people to not smoke in public neighborhood give crowd a better awareness of the disadvantages.

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In the past employees worked for small businesses, but now many are working for large businesses. Do you think working for large businesses has more advantages than disadvantages?

The charts illustrate a designed floor plan and suggested changes to be made to the plan. Overall, there were notable changes made to the proposed plan.

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