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Some people think that the only way to be successful in business is to have a unique product

I belive that, Production of an exclusive product to make a huge impact and success business in the world.
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Many young people are leaving their homes in rural areas to study or work in the cities. What are the reasons? Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

In today’s competent world, everyone wants to be ahead of one another that is becoming the reason for upcoming generations to leave their homes to go for studies or work in developed cities. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I will discuss the pros and cons of this trend.
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the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days.

The graph gives some data about the per cent of people going to cinemas in a European country on various days. In addition, the graph was illustrated that in 3 various years(2003, 2005, 2007).
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"Prevention is better than cure." Out of country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventive measures.

Healthy is the most cardinal part of our life, without good health we may not be able to carry out our daily activities efficiently and effectively. It is for this reason that individuals must take it upon themselves to prevent contracting any ailments or put up measures to reduce their effects on our bodily functions through treatment.
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some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be spent else where. to what extent do you agree.

Some persons thought line is that government is wasteful by supporting artists through finances,I totally disagree because artists contribute to the Nation's economy through various departments.
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Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes.Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society. Describe adavantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your own opinion.

Majority type of people admit, that death penalty is for committed violent crimes. On the other hand, others claim capitl punishment is not available in contemporaty society. In my view, the capital punishment isn't advantageous for those who'll do violent crimes.
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Using a computer everyday can have more negative than positive effects on children do you agree or disagree?

In modern society,using computer creates enormous changes in the life of people especially children below 18 years old. However, these technologies brings optimistic changes in the views of children rather than a distructive influence. In this essay I will explain various agreements related to the given statements.
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Write about the following topic: Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is often thought that computer is the most relevant invetion of the last century.
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In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In many nations, young children are involved in different types of employment. It is believed by some that such an approach is completely inaccurate, whereas others consider it to provide work understanding. While working at young age can teach them knowledge of market, I believe that more than that focusing only on studies is crucial to secure a better future.
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We live in a world of technology these days. While the internet brings with it clear advantages, the problems in terms of control and security of information outweighs the advantages. To what extent do you agree?

The society itself now is technology engrosed, also technology has taken over the entire country.with these few points listed below, you will agree with me that our society needs more of internet:
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Q- People often think about creating an ideal society, but most of the time fail in making this happen. What is your opinion about an ideal society How can we create an ideal society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

There are many concerned individuals feel that it is more important to plant trees in open areas of town and cities , while other believes that we should build more buildings. I completly agree with the former statement, and in this eassay I will support my view with examples.
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Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit the teenagers and the community as well. Do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.

Pupils have plenty of free time during the summer holidays when they go to school. Some individuals suggest that teenagers ought to be essential to do volunteer community work in their leisure time. This may useful the young people and the society as well while others think that it is not necessary for now.
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Some people think that inorder to deal with the problem of congestion in cities, privately owned vehicle should be barred in city centres while others consider this to be an realistic solution.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Overcrowding in the cities is a major problem which the society feel that,for a permanent solution to be met,privately owned automobile should be barricaded from city centre while others contemplate this to be impracticle solution.In this essay i will elaborate both views and provide my opinion
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the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age.

The graph illustrates the percentage of population intrested in pop music. The bar in the graph indicates the population of male, female and various age groups, who purchase the music albums in Britain.
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Participation by 5 to 14-year-olds in selected leisure activities in Australia

The bar graph compares the percentage of participation that children in Australia, between boys and girls, have in selected leisure activities, such as: skateboarding, bike riding, watching TV or videos, computer games, art and craft.
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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Ohter argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In present days job satisfaction have been turned into a really commented issue between workers, young people adults and teenagers that are just begging into this big labor field. Some of them believe that it is better to deal with professional problem, while other ones believe that it works situations should we promoted as well. Although the difference of contrast between both opposing view both can be defended as well.
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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Ohter argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

my point of view about the subject is that i imagine the satisfaction and disappointment that some people feel when they find out they are not good enough for the job they apply for, i mean that there are certain cases that they are classified as overqualified and Over time the pain of feel that situation would make a difference in the routine of life for those who can't accept the fact that they are not working on what they tried so hard, Many people prepare in their studies for a extensive part of their lives to achieve a better quality of life, although in the immense diversity of jobs the situations can give that fortunately or not applying it corresponds to each one of them to accept the opportunities of work that aren't well paid or that do not meet the standards or requirements that people or any person apply for, some reasons may be that the easiest to accept that only job offer to not be without prospects.
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Nowadays, sending children to boarding school(either in other countries or in their own countries) is becoming increasingly popular. Why is it?. Is it a positive or negative development? (edited)

LIVING APART FROM FAMILY IS BECOMING COMMON FOR ACQUIRING A SCHOOL EDUCATION. HOWEVER, THERE ARE PLENTY OF REASONS BEHIND THIS SITUATION IN THIS MODERN EPOCH. I THINK THIS IS POSITIVE DEVELOPMENT FOR YOUNGSTERS. THESE POINTS WILL BE ELABORATED ON IN THE SUBSEQUENT PARAGRAPHS.
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Some people think the government should establish free libraries in each town. Others believe that it is a waste of money since people can access the Internet to obtain information. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In recent years, the phenomenon that people arguing whether the government are responsible to build free libraries in each town has aroused wide concern among various circles. Some people believe that building free libraries in each town is necessary based on the equality of education. Meanwhile, there are some voices complain that this suggestion does not make any sense as the Internet act as the same role as the libraries, which you search for any information without a step out of your home. Considering both sides of the argument above, I totally agree with the idea that the government should provide free libraries in every town.
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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Ohter argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Something that us very common in our society is that we are bit perfects, and also not all things will happen as we want, most of this situation will be wordiest as we expect, as can be a familiar death, a unsatisfactory job or a shortage of money. So, some people (including me) believe that it is the best to accept a bad situation, and I am going to give reasons of why. As I already said, we are not perfect, and the bad situations is part of the life, in this kind of situations is when you have to be stronger to afront this bad situations and also overcame ourselves. A famous phrase said that of the fails you can learn, more than the victory. Think that you are not the unique person with this bad situation. So, try to help to the other people, maybe this people will help you tomorrow.
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