IELTS Writing Samples Band 3

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From a past few years have seen a dramatic increase in criminal activities.It is inclining at an expedite rate in all over the world. This essay will elaborate the reason which cause this problem with some solutions to tackle this issue in subsequent paragraphs with a meannigful conclusion.
Due to globalization & easy access to other countries parents are willing too send there childran abroad for quality education. Due to convienent loan options it is easy to pay the fees abroad. There are many universities which offer quality career oriented courses in compititive price.
Some believes music is postive way to make people connected of various tradition and ages.This essay agrees thaat music can be helpful in togetherneess of every people.This essay will dicuss how music is a good option for bringing people together.
Some people say that wealthy countries have to accept and support refugees. In my opinion, the responsibility of helping to refugees should divided to wealthy countries depending on their abilities and political situation in these countries.
To begin with, organised group activities allow children to socialize with people in their immediate vicinity. Children learn to interact with the people in their society. To illustrate this, one can organise picnic among familieswhich will give enough room for children to socialize. Additionally, children learn various team building activities like working in a group competing with their peers, coping up with pressure etc. Furthermore, children learn the right attitude from being in a group.
The line graph illustrates the proportion of tourists in England who travel to four different Brighton attractions from 1980 to 2010.
The line graph illustrates the mortality and natality rates in New Zealand for the period of 200 years.
Nowadays, there are some people believe that the main target of commerce is to earn one's living and they ought to focus on it. However, in my opinion, I totally disagree with this point of view and I will explain why in my essay.
It is irrefutable that inventions in the field of medicine have prolonged the average human life. This essay agrees with this belief because medical science has given us tools to live longer and happier. This essay outlines how medicine has found a way to wipe off many dangerous dieseases followed by the progress made in surgeries that has increased the life expectancy phenomenally.
There are two main ideas about function of universities among people.First group think that,universities have to create courses for teaching skills and knowledge to students which will be useful for their future work.On the contrary,second group of people think that,essential function of university is prepare students comprehensive.Actually,the difference is similar to divergency between monoprofessionalism and diversification.Today,community not only need abilities which can be used in the workplace,but also need comprehensivity in international arena.This essay respond questions like "why people have to train themself for the workplace" and "why students have to be comprehensive".
It is argues that large international sports tournaments donot provide as much return to the host country as they spend to organise them. This essay disagrees with this premise because such events tend to provide a country an unprecedented publicity and economic growth than any other event can. This essay shall outline how these sport events put a country on the map which otherwise may not be as well known followed by the business and economic growth that these events bring.
My name is Diana D’souza. I am residing at Kudripadav which is located near Kinnigoli. I completed my Post Graduation in MSW (Master of Social Work) in St.Mary’s College, which is located in Shirva. At present I am working as a Behavior Therapist in Creative Smile Autism Service. My hobbies are playing volley ball, shuttle badminton and singing. The languages I have known are English, Konkani, Hindi, Kannada, and Tulu.
I am Chris and I am a big fan of your songs. I am very lucky that I got a chance to witness your live concert last weekend which was held in Palace grounds. All the tracks you sang were mind blowing, especially me and my friends liked track “The One” in which you did a great job with electric guitar.
People do understand how critical environmnet is to us. There has been many campaigns in the recent years focusing on the conservation and importance of environment. Somehow, there are individulas who don't see it as grave concern and don't participate. May be because the hole is not on their side of the boat, but we are all sailing the same boat. Extensive measures should be carried out at different levels to promote and propagate the idea of significance of environment.
People have seen a considerable development of mass media and it has influenced on daily life positively as well as negatively. Two extremes of media will be discussed in this essay.
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